Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 用简洁、直接的主题句回应问题，并改正多处词汇和语法错误。答题时保持句子清晰（不超过5句），提供具体细节（例如谁教你、通过哪些方式教、具体例子）。注意连词使用以增强连贯性。

Exemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my family. My parents and grandparents taught me basic manners such as saying “please” and “thank you,” greeting elders, and using polite tones. For example, my mother always reminded me to address relatives respectfully during festivals. Because of these routines, politeness became a natural habit for me.

Sugestão: 回答要有明确的观点句并给出具体理由和例子，同时纠正表达错误和不自然词汇。使用连接词（for example, however）来组织论点，控制在5句内。说明为什么礼貌重要以及如何在坚持立场时保持礼貌。

Exemplo: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it shows respect and helps maintain good relationships. For instance, using polite language can prevent misunderstandings at work or with friends. However, being polite does not mean you must agree with others; you can politely express a different opinion by saying, “I see your point, but I prefer…”

× Yes, when I was little in my opinion it's a family heritage to be pleased.

✓ Yes. When I was little, in my opinion, being polite is a family tradition.

句子结构混乱：原句把时间状语、观点插入和宾语混合在一处，且用词不当（"to be pleased"不可表示“有礼貌”）。建议把句子拆分并用现在分词短语或名词短语"being polite"／"politeness"，并使用更合适的名词"tradition"（传统）来表达“家族传承”。此外在时间状语后加逗号以提高可读性。

× My parents and my grandparents always taught me how to flight these people and how important to light these people.

✓ My parents and grandparents always taught me how to treat people politely and how important it is to be polite to others.

动词使用和词义错误："flight"和"light"用错，原句想表达“如何对待别人”和“有礼貌的重要性”。采用短语"treat people politely"和结构"how important it is to be polite to others"更自然。注意插入形式"how important it is"，不能省略动词"is"。此外可把"my parents and my grandparents"简化为"my parents and grandparents"。

× I think every children in China

✓ I think every child in China

单复数问题："every"后应接单数名词，因此"children"（复数）应改为单数"child"。同时句子不完整，应补充谓语或句尾标点，如"I think every child in China is taught that."若保留简短表述，也应为完整句子。

× Yes, in my opinion, a civilized person must be applied to anyone around him.

✓ Yes. In my opinion, a civilized person must be polite to anyone around him.

动词搭配和被动/主动混淆：原句中"must be applied to"用法错误，"apply"不能与此意搭配。应使用"must be polite to"或"must behave politely toward"来表达“对周围人有礼貌”。同时保留第三人称单数主语时谓语形式应正确。

× But you thought that not mean you have to do anything other wants you to do.

✓ But that does not mean you have to do everything others want you to do.

句子结构和代词使用错误：原句语序混乱且代词不当。应使用固定表达"that does not mean"表示“那并不意味着”。"anything other wants you to do"应改为"everything others want you to do"或"anything others want you to do"，并注意"others"作主语时使用复数形式。

× You can insist your own stance, but be polite.

✓ You can insist on your own stance, but be polite.

动词短语搭配错误："insist"常与介词"on"搭配（insist on sth），因此应改为"insist on your own stance"或更自然的"stand by your own stance"。整句保持并列结构，语气礼貌明确。