Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and shows personal experience, but it has grammar mistakes, repetition, and lacks coherence. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, avoid redundancy, and add one specific example. Use linking words (for example, and, so, because) to connect ideas. Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences.

Exemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents because they always reminded me to say “please” and “thank you.” For example, when I received a gift, my mother would explain why saying thank you matters, so I practiced it often. As a result, good manners became a natural habit for me.

Sugestão: Your response expresses a clear opinion but has multiple grammatical errors, repetition, and incomplete phrasing. Make a direct topic sentence stating your view, then add two specific reasons with linking words (for instance, because / therefore) and finish the thought. Use correct forms (e.g., 'not polite', 'people', 'make friends') and avoid repeating words.

Exemplo: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps you build and maintain good relationships. For instance, polite behaviour shows respect and makes others feel comfortable, so people are more likely to trust you. Therefore, kindness and courtesy can lead to stronger friendships and better social opportunities.

× I learned to be polite mostly with my parents because they always remind me say thank you and say please and it's very it's very important in our family.

✓ I learned to be polite mostly from my parents because they always remind me to say thank you and please; it's very important in our family.

The errors involve incorrect verb forms and word choice. 'Remind me say' is incorrect; the verb 'remind' requires the infinitive with to ('remind me to say'). 'With my parents' is less natural than 'from my parents' when describing who taught the student. Also remove the duplicated 'it's very'. Suggestion: use 'remind someone to + base verb' and prefer 'from' to indicate source of learning.

× If we don't say thank you or something like that, they always reminds us.

✓ If we don't say thank you or something like that, they always remind us.

The main problem is subject-verb agreement and verb form: 'they always reminds' is incorrect because 'they' requires the base form 'remind'. This falls under subject-verb agreement but also verb form; here corrected to 'remind'. Suggestion: ensure plural subjects take the base verb without -s.

× Absolutely. It's very important in your social life too, because if you're if you're don't polite, if you're rude person, you can't be a friend with good peoples.

✓ Absolutely. It's very important in your social life too, because if you're not polite, if you're a rude person, you can't be friends with good people.

Multiple present-tense and word choice errors: 'if you're don't polite' is incorrect — use 'if you're not polite' or 'if you are not polite'. 'If you're rude person' needs an article: 'if you're a rude person'. 'You can't be a friend with good peoples' has pluralization and count noun errors: 'friend'/'friends' and 'people' is already plural and does not take -s. Use 'can't make friends with good people' or 'can't be friends with good people.' Suggestion: use correct negation ('not'), include articles before singular count nouns, and use 'people' not 'peoples' for ordinary plural of people.

× If you are kind, if you are polite, you can do good friendships or good

✓ If you are kind and polite, you can form good friendships.

The original is incomplete and awkward. 'You can do good friendships' is ungrammatical; English uses 'form' or 'make' with 'friendships' or 'make good friends'. Also the fragment ends with 'or good' which is incomplete. Suggestion: combine similar clauses ('kind and polite') and use appropriate verbs ('form', 'make') with 'friendships' or say 'make good friends.'