Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答を明確で簡潔にし、冗長なフィラー（uh, umm）を減らすこと。まず主題文で「どうやって学んだか」を直接述べ、その後で具体的なエピソードや方法（親、学校、模倣など）を1～2文で補足すること。接続詞（because, so, when, because ofなど）を使って論理をつなぎ、語彙は“polite”“taught”“observe”“role model”等の簡潔で適切な単語を使うと自然に聞こえる。発音と文の流れを改善するために短く区切って話す練習をする。

Exemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. For example, they always reminded me to say “please” and “thank you,” and I copied their behavior. Also, my teacher praised polite actions at school, which encouraged me to be considerate of others.

Sugestão: 主張を明確にし、理由を論理的に2つ程度述べる練習をすること。冗長な繰り返しとフィラーを避け、単文や複文を組み合わせて最大3～4文にまとめる。理由を述べる際は具体例（builds trust, improves relationships, shows respect）を使い、接続語（because, therefore, for example）で結ぶと一貫性が出る。語彙は“important, respectful, trustworthy, create good impression”など具体的な語を使う。発音は「polite」「important」「trustworthy」に注意。

Exemplo: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps build trust and good relationships. For example, polite behavior makes people feel respected and more willing to cooperate. Therefore, being polite can improve both personal and professional interactions.

× I learned to, I learned to be upright when I was a child, child, Uh, so when I do uh, something about uh, and then the someone do uh, bad things to me, so.

✓ I learned to be polite when I was a child, so when someone did bad things to me I tried to behave politely.

The original sentence misuses 'to' with redundant repeats and 'upright' is awkward in this context; 'polite' is the correct adjective. The clause 'when I do ... someone do bad things to me' mixes tenses and has incorrect structure. Use the past tense 'did' for events in childhood and rephrase to a clear subject-verb-object order. Suggestion: simplify and use past tense for childhood experiences and replace 'upright' with 'polite'.

× Yeah, I think uh, being polite is uh, too important things. Uh, because uh, when uh, I believe uh polite person and uh, when I umm, polite, uh, someone, believe me too.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because when I am polite, other people will trust me.

Errors include noun phrase agreement and incorrect verb forms. 'Too important things' is ungrammatical; use 'very important' (adverb + adjective) or 'a very important thing'. The clause 'when I believe polite person' is unclear; likely intended 'when I am polite' and 'someone believe me too' should be 'other people will trust me' or 'people will believe me'. Use present simple for general truths: 'being polite is' and 'people believe' or 'will trust' for consequence. Rephrase to a concise, logically ordered sentence.