Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 整体表达能被理解，但存在语法错误、冗余和连贯性问题。建议：1) 用一句话直接回答（主题句），如 “I learned politeness from my father.”；2) 用一到两句补充具体细节，说明怎么学（例如父亲示范或提醒），并用连接词如“for example”或“he would”提高连贯性；3) 注意语法和词序，例如去掉重复的“always”，把“be polite to children and the elderly is the most important thing”改为“being polite to children and the elderly was considered most important”。具体练习：把回答控制在3-4句内，检查时态一致并使用恰当的动名词。

Exemplo: I learned to be polite from my father. He always reminded me to greet people when we met them and to show respect to children and the elderly. For example, he would stop and introduce me to neighbours and model polite phrases, so I learnt by watching him.

Sugestão: 回答有想法但表达混乱，存在语法错误、重复词和不恰当短语（如“dream shop”似乎用错词）。建议：1) 先用一句明确的主题句表明观点（例如 “Yes, I think politeness is very important.”）；2) 用一到两句给出具体理由或结果，并用连接词如 “because” 或 “so” 提高逻辑性；3) 避免填充词（uh、really重复），用准确词汇表达（例如 “a nicer society” 或 “fewer conflicts”）。练习时可先想两点支持理由再说。

Exemplo: Yes, I think politeness is very important. If everyone treated others with respect, we would have fewer conflicts and a friendlier society. For example, simple acts like saying thank you or greeting neighbours can make daily life more pleasant for everyone.

× When I was a child, my dad always taught me always greet people when we see each other and be polite to children and the elderly is the most important thing.

✓ When I was a child, my dad always taught me to always greet people when we saw each other, and that being polite to children and the elderly was the most important thing.

错误类型：动词后接 -ing 或不定式 的使用不当。原句中用 taught me always greet ...，在 teach sb 表达“教某人做某事”时，应使用不定式 to + 动词原形（或使用动名词在其他结构中）。此外，句子时态需要一致：叙述过去经历时，应把 see 和 be 改为过去式 saw 和 was；把并列部分改为从句（that ...）更清晰。建议：在类似结构中使用 taught someone to do sth，保持时态一致，并用连词连接完整从句。

× Of course, definitely, if the world everyone in the world be polite, it will be a really, really nice world to live without many, uh, dream shop.

✓ Of course. Definitely. If everyone in the world were polite, it would be a really, really nice world to live in without many problems.

错误类型：现在/虚拟语气和句子结构问题。原句中 if ... be polite 用法不正确；表示与事实相反的假设应使用虚拟语气 were（或 were/was，但正式写作用 were），主句也应使用 would。另外，短语 live without many, uh, dream shop 无意义且词序错误，推测想表达“没有许多问题”（problems）并且动词后需加介词 in（live in a world）。建议：学习虚拟条件句结构（If + past subjunctive, would + 动词），并使用恰当名词与介词搭配。