Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 文法と語順を修正し、情報を少し具体化すると良いです。短くても自然な主語と動詞の一致、所有格の使い方（father's → fathers）に注意してください。また、追加情報として具体的な方法（例：お辞儀する、敬語を使う、他人を助ける）を一つか二つ付け加えると会話が豊かになります。例えば、接続表現を使って理由や方法をつなげる練習をしましょう。

Exemplo: I learned to be polite from my parents when I was a child. For example, my mother taught me to say "please" and "thank you," and my father showed me how to greet people respectfully.

Sugestão: 答えは繰り返しがあり、文法と語順の誤り、意味が不明瞭な箇所があります。まずは簡潔な主張を述べ、その後に明確な理由を一つか二つで裏付けてください。接続詞（because, so, therefore）や理由を導くフレーズ（for example, for instance）を使って論理的につなげる練習をしましょう。また、単語の選択（"relieve"は不適切）に注意し、"create a pleasant atmosphere"や"help relationships"など具体的な表現を使うと効果的です。

Exemplo: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps people get along and creates a pleasant atmosphere. For instance, saying "please" and "thank you" can make daily interactions smoother and show respect to others.

× I was taught me that by my mother and father's.

✓ I was taught that by my mother and father.

The student used the reflexive/object pronoun 'me' incorrectly with the passive construction 'I was taught'. In passive voice the object is not stated separately; 'I was taught' already indicates the person who received the teaching, so adding 'me' is redundant and ungrammatical. Also 'father's' incorrectly uses a possessive apostrophe. Use the plural or coordinated noun 'mother and father' without an apostrophe. To improve, omit the extra pronoun and remove the incorrect possessive: 'I was taught that by my mother and father.' Grammar problem type ID:12

× I think being polite is very important. This is because being polite is. Good behavior and relieve.

✓ I think being polite is very important because it leads to good behavior and helps people feel respected and relieved.

The original contains sentence fragments and poor cohesion: 'This is because being polite is.' is incomplete, and 'Good behavior and relieve' is ungrammatical ('relieve' is a verb, not a noun). The corrected sentence joins ideas into one coherent sentence: 'because it leads to good behavior and helps people feel respected and relieved.' Use 'it' to refer to 'being polite', use the noun 'relief' or the adjective 'relieved'; here 'feel relieved' is appropriate. To improve, avoid sentence fragments, ensure verbs and nouns are used correctly, and connect clauses with appropriate conjunctions. Grammar problem type ID:26