Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be improved by using a stronger topic sentence, adding one or two specific examples, and linking ideas with a connective. Also watch subject-verb agreement and verb tense for accuracy (e.g., "show" → "showed" or rephrase). Keep answers concise (no more than 5 sentences).

Exemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my mother and teachers. For example, whenever I interrupted someone, my mother would gently remind me to wait my turn and say "please" and "thank you." In the same way, my teachers corrected rude behaviors in class and gave praise when I used good manners, which encouraged me to continue.

Sugestão: Your response shows agreement but is unclear and contains grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your opinion, give a reason, and provide a brief specific example. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and correct subject-verb agreement and phrasing (e.g., "it shows respect").

Exemplo: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it shows respect and makes social interactions smoother. For example, when people say "please" and "thank you," conversations feel friendlier and cooperation at work or school improves.

× 'When I was a child, if I had some rude behaviors, my mother and my teachers usually taught me the correct manners immediately.'

✓ 'When I was a child, if I behaved rudely, my mother and my teachers would usually teach me the correct manners immediately.'

'Original sentence mixes past time reference with a conditional structure that uses the past perfect or simple past incorrectly for habitual past actions. Use simple past for habitual past actions (behaved rudely) and use would/used to or simple past for the habitual result (would usually teach me / usually taught me). Also replace the noun phrase "rude behaviors" with the adverbial phrase "behaved rudely" for natural English. Suggestion: use consistent past-tense forms for habitual actions and prefer verb/adverb collocations.'

× 'Absolutely, because I want to help people who are polite and so do my friends and it show the respect.'

✓ 'Absolutely, because I want to help people who are polite, and so do my friends, and it shows respect.'

'Original sentence has a subject-verb agreement error: "it show" should be "it shows" because the third person singular requires -s. Also the phrase "show the respect" is unnatural here; use "shows respect" without the definite article. Added commas to separate clauses for clarity. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with their subjects and avoid unnecessary articles.'