Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar and sentence structure: start with a clear topic sentence, use past tense consistently, and break into shorter sentences. Add a specific example of what your parents taught and use linking words to make it coherent. Avoid redundancy and incorrect phrasing (e.g., “not to be rude” instead of “not to rude”).

Exemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They taught me simple rules, such as saying “please” and “thank you,” and how to greet elders respectfully. For example, my mother always reminded me to listen quietly when someone else was speaking, so I learned to wait my turn. As a result, these habits became natural to me.

Sugestão: Make a clear, direct opinion statement and support it with two concise reasons using linking words. Correct grammar and word choice (e.g., “important” instead of “vital” is fine, but ensure sentence flow). Avoid repetition and fix errors like “we all all” and “and not willing to.”

Exemplo: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps people feel respected and makes communication smoother. For instance, when you speak politely at work, colleagues are more likely to cooperate. Therefore, politeness prevents misunderstandings and creates a pleasant atmosphere.

× When I was a child that I learned these things from my parents, they told me how to express in a correct way to others or even I should follow some rules and not to rude to others.

✓ When I was a child, I learned these things from my parents. They told me how to express myself correctly to others and that I should follow some rules and not be rude to others.

Errors: run-on sentence, incorrect use of 'that' after a past time clause, missing reflexive pronoun, incorrect adjective/adverb form, and incorrect verb construction 'not to rude'. Suggestions: split into two sentences to avoid run-on; remove unnecessary 'that' after 'When I was a child'; use 'express myself' and 'correctly' (adverb modifies the verb); use 'that I should' for reported advice; use the verb 'be' with adjective 'rude' (not 'to rude').

× In my opinion I would say this would be very vital that when we communicate with others and we all all need to in a polite way and others would not have and uncomfortable feeling or even think we are so rude and not willing to.

✓ In my opinion, I would say it is very important that when we communicate with others we all need to do so politely, so others will not feel uncomfortable or think we are rude or unwilling to communicate.

Errors: inappropriate conditional/modal layering ('would say this would be'), word repetition ('all all'), missing verb after 'need to', incorrect adverb/adjective forms ('in a polite way' better as 'politely'), incorrect word 'and' before 'uncomfortable', fragment 'not willing to' incomplete. Suggestions: use simple present 'it is very important' for general statements, remove duplicate words, include the correct verb phrase 'need to do so', use adverb 'politely', replace 'would not have and uncomfortable feeling' with 'will not feel uncomfortable', and complete the idea 'unwilling to communicate'.