Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant and uses appropriate vocabulary, but it could be more concise, include a stronger topic sentence, and add a specific example to make it more vivid. Also adjust verb tense consistency (e.g., use past tense when describing childhood) and use linking words to connect ideas (for example, “for example” or “for instance”). Keep responses to a maximum of about 3–4 sentences to be natural and effective.

Exemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents when I was young. For example, they taught me to say “please” and “thank you” and to address elders respectfully, which I practiced at family gatherings. As a result, I still adjust my language depending on who I’m speaking to.

Sugestão: Your response directly answers the question and expresses an opinion, but it would be stronger with a brief reason and a linking word to support your view. Add a specific consequence or example to show why politeness matters. Also avoid redundancy (e.g., combine short sentences).

Exemplo: Yes, I do — politeness is essential because it helps people communicate smoothly and builds mutual respect. For instance, showing simple courtesy in public or at work can prevent misunderstandings and create a friendlier atmosphere.

× I would also use appropriate language depending on who I am.

✓ I would also use appropriate language depending on who I was.

The sentence uses a conditional 'would' which typically pairs with a past-tense or hypothetical time frame. Using 'am' (present) with 'would' creates a tense mismatch. Change 'am' to 'was' to match the conditional/hypothetical context. Alternatively, to state a general habit, use 'I also use appropriate language depending on who I am.' but given the surrounding past-focused statements, 'was' is the better choice.

× Old or young, we should all be respectful to other people.

✓ Whether old or young, we should all be respectful to other people.

The original starts with 'Old or young' as a reduced clause but sounds informal and slightly fragmentary. Adding 'Whether' makes the concessive clause explicit and grammatically complete ('Whether old or young' = 'Whether people are old or young'). This clarifies the comparison and improves sentence structure.