Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cần cải thiện về ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì, chia động từ, đại từ phản thân), cấu trúc câu và tính tự nhiên. Tránh lỗi như “used to be teach” (phải là “was taught” hoặc “learned”), “just aware me” (phải là “I became aware” hoặc “I realized”), và số nhiều/ít không đúng (“This skills” → “These skills”). Ngoài ra, thêm câu chủ đề rõ ràng ở đầu và một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể, dùng liên từ thích hợp để kết nối ý (e.g. because, so, therefore). Giữ tối đa 4-5 câu, ngắn gọn và tự nhiên.

Exemplo: I learned to be polite mainly at school where teachers taught us manners. For example, we practiced saying "please" and "thank you" and were reminded to respect elders. Because of these lessons, I became aware of how important politeness is in everyday life. Therefore, I try to use polite language when I meet others.

Sugestão: Cần sửa phát âm/viết sai từ vựng và ngữ pháp ("police" → "polite"); tránh câu lặp ý và cấu trúc rời rạc. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi nêu lý do cụ thể, dùng liên từ để giữ mạch lạc (e.g. because, so, therefore). Thêm một ví dụ ngắn hoặc kết quả để câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn. Giữ độ dài 2-4 câu và dùng từ vựng phù hợp (e.g. "trust", "get along", "respect").

Exemplo: Yes, I believe politeness is very important because it helps people get along and build trust. For instance, polite behavior like listening and saying thank you makes social interactions smoother. Therefore, being polite shows respect and makes others feel comfortable.

× Actually I used to be teach and learn at school how to be polite with everyone.

✓ Actually, I used to be taught and learned at school how to be polite to everyone.

The original sentence misuses 'be teach'; the passive past participle 'taught' is required after 'used to be' to indicate past passive experience. Also 'to be polite to everyone' is the correct prepositional phrase. Suggestion: use 'taught' for passive and 'to' with 'polite'.

× So when I grow up, I just aware me that the politeness is really important for child.

✓ So when I grew up, I became aware that politeness is really important for children.

Tense and verb choice are incorrect. 'When I grow up' should match past context 'grew up'. 'I just aware me' is ungrammatical; use 'I became aware' or 'I realized'. 'The politeness' should be 'politeness' (no article) and 'for child' should be plural 'for children'. Suggestion: match past tense and use correct verb collocations and noun forms.

× This skills can help the children give their respect to the elders and everyone.

✓ These skills can help children show respect to elders and to others.

'This skills' is incorrect: use plural demonstrative 'these' with plural noun 'skills'. 'the children' can be general 'children'. 'give their respect' is unnatural; use 'show respect'. 'the elders and everyone' is awkward; use 'elders and others'. Suggestion: ensure demonstrative and noun number agree and prefer natural collocations like 'show respect'.

× Yes, of course, being police is very crucial in play, an essential role for everyone.

✓ Yes, of course, being polite is very important and plays an essential role for everyone.

'being police' is incorrect adjective/noun choice; should be 'being polite'. 'very crucial in play' is unclear; use 'very important' and 'plays an essential role'. Suggestion: use correct adjective 'polite' and natural collocations 'important' and 'play a role'.

× People need to be polite, to mix everyone, feel trustworthy and this can show their respect to everyone.

✓ People need to be polite to get along with others, to seem trustworthy, and to show respect to everyone.

The original sentence has awkward coordination and incorrect infinitive phrases: 'to mix everyone' is incorrect for 'get along with others'. 'feel trustworthy' should be 'seem trustworthy' or 'appear trustworthy'. 'this can show their respect to everyone' is a clause fragment; better to parallel the infinitives. Suggestion: restructure into parallel infinitives and use idiomatic expressions like 'get along with others' and 'show respect'.