Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答要更直接并且语法更准确，句子不宜重复，使用连接词使逻辑更清楚。可以先给出主题句（例如“我主要从父母那学会的”），然后用1-2句具体例子说明他们怎样教（示范、纠正、不定期提醒等），最后总结效果或感受。注意时态一致和代词用法（例如“they taught me to say ‘please’ and ‘thank you’”）。

Exemplo: I learned manners mainly from my parents. They taught me by example, correcting me when I used impolite words and showing polite behaviour in daily situations. For example, they always reminded me to say “please” and “thank you” and explained why it matters. As a result, I developed habits of polite communication.

Sugestão: 回答需要更简洁自然，避免含糊和不恰当的比喻（如“isolated sports”），并修正语法问题。先给出明确观点，然后用1-2句理由支持，使用连接词（because, so, therefore）并给出具体影响或例子（如建立关系、职业发展）。注意单词形式（e.g. “essential for survival and long-term development”）。

Exemplo: Yes, I believe being polite is very important because we live in a society where good communication matters. Politeness helps build trust and strong relationships, and it can also improve job prospects and teamwork. Therefore, polite behaviour benefits both personal life and long-term development.

× Well, it's mainly from my parents teaching.

✓ Well, it was mainly from my parents' teaching.

此处讨论的是过去习得礼貌的经历，用过去时更合适；同时 parents teaching 应改为 parents' teaching 表示“父母的教导”，需要所有格。建议使用过去时态并加上所有格标记以使表达更地道。

× This is because they will tell me which is applied or impolite and they will show me how to do this thing in the real in the real life.

✓ This is because they told me what is appropriate or impolite and they showed me how to behave in real life.

句子谈的是过去发生的教育行为，应使用过去时（told, showed）。原句中的 which is applied 用法不当，应用 what is appropriate 表达“什么是合适的”。“in the real in the real life”重复且结构错误，改为 in real life 或 in everyday life。建议用过去时并改用恰当表达。

× For example, they will they will taught me to say please and yes in the daily life and make me know which is suitable and essential.

✓ For example, they taught me to say 'please' and 'yes' in daily life and taught me which behavior is suitable and essential.

此处谈过去发生的事情，不应使用 will；原句中有 will 重复且动词时态混乱（taught 是过去式，但前面不应有 will）。此外 make me know 表达不自然，改为 taught me which behavior is suitable 更清楚。建议去掉 will，使用过去式并调整表达。

× Uh, at most of the time it is very important.

✓ Uh, most of the time it is very important.

短语应为 most of the time 或 most of the time（更常见为 most of the time），而不是 at most of the time。去掉多余的 at 即可。

× This is mainly because we live in the society rather than isolated sports.

✓ This is mainly because we live in society rather than in isolation.

原句中 the society 前后用法不自然，通常说 live in society 或 live in a society；而 isolated sports 完全不符合语境，应为 in isolation（孤立）。建议用 in society 和 in isolation 区分对比。

× So it's important to know how to communicate politely with other people and it is essential skills, umm, for survive and the long, long term development.

✓ So it's important to know how to communicate politely with other people, and it is an essential skill for survival and long-term development.

this 后半句存在多处错误：essential skills 应为 an essential skill（单数）或 essential skills（复数）需与不定冠词或复数一致；for survive 应为 for survival（名词形式）或 to survive（不定式）；long, long term 应为 long-term（复合形容词）。建议使用 an essential skill for survival and long-term development。