Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cố gắng trả lời rõ ràng theo cấu trúc: câu chủ đề + chi tiết hỗ trợ; dùng thì và ngữ pháp đúng (ví dụ: past tense), hạn chế tiếng lấp và sửa phát âm từ quan trọng. Nên nói: ai dạy bạn, cụ thể cách dạy (ví dụ: bằng ví dụ, nhắc nhở, khen thưởng) và kết quả. Hạn chế lỗi chính tả như 'Poly' -> 'polite' và 'teach' -> 'taught'.

Exemplo: My mother taught me to be polite when I was a child. She often reminded me to say 'please' and 'thank you' and showed me how to greet adults respectfully. As a result, I learned to use polite language in public and at family gatherings.

Sugestão: Trả lời trực tiếp với câu chủ đề rõ ràng rồi bổ sung lý do cụ thể; dùng liên từ để nối ý (for example, because, therefore). Tránh lặp từ và nói lộn (ví dụ: 'people, people'). Cung cấp ví dụ thực tế về lợi ích của lịch sự và sửa ngữ pháp (e.g., 'it is really important').

Exemplo: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps people get along. For example, saying 'thank you' or 'please' makes others feel respected, which often leads to friendlier interactions and better cooperation.

× When I was a child my mom asked me uh and teach me how to be Poly for the adult people.

✓ When I was a child my mom taught me how to be polite to adults.

Errors: verb tense and form (asked me and teach me -> taught me) and word choice/capitalization (Poly -> polite), and preposition/article use (for the adult people -> to adults). Reason: 'teach' must be in past tense 'taught' to match 'When I was a child' and to follow 'my mom' as the subject; 'asked me and teach me' is incorrect structure — use one verb 'taught' to convey instruction. Use 'polite' (lowercase) for the adjective. Use 'to adults' rather than 'for the adult people' because 'polite to someone' is the correct prepositional collocation and 'adults' plural is natural. Suggestion: Use past simple for past habits (my mom taught me), choose correct collocations ('polite to someone') and avoid unnecessary words like 'the' with general plural nouns.

× In my opinion is really important because when we go out we say thank you. If we have need for the people, people, I always feel happy.

✓ In my opinion it is really important because when we go out we say 'thank you'. If we need help from people, I always feel happy.

Errors: missing subject 'it' after 'In my opinion' (sentence structure), awkward phrase 'have need for the people, people' and repetition, incorrect preposition usage ('need for the people' -> 'need help from people'). Reason: English requires a subject in clauses like 'In my opinion it is...'. Use 'need help from people' to express receiving assistance; avoid repeating 'people'. Also put 'thank you' in quotes or as a phrase. Suggestion: Always include explicit subjects in opinion phrases, use natural verbs and prepositions ('need help from'), and remove redundant words.