Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve accuracy, clarity and fluency. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, correct grammar (e.g., "in human nature" → "part of human nature"), remove repetition, and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it under five sentences.

Exemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. For example, my mother taught me to say "please" and "thank you," and my father showed me how to greet guests respectfully. As a result, I practised these habits at home and later used them at school, which helped me build better relationships.

Sugestão: Make the answer more natural and slightly longer with a clear topic sentence plus a specific supporting reason and an example. Use a linking phrase (e.g., "for example" or "because") to connect ideas, and avoid quoting without context. Keep it concise (1–3 sentences).

Exemplo: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it shows respect and helps build trust. For example, when I thank colleagues for their help, they are more willing to cooperate in future tasks.

× Being polite is in the human nature.

✓ Being polite is in human nature.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'human nature' when speaking about the concept in general. Use 'in human nature' to express a general characteristic. Suggestion: Remove 'the' when referring to general concepts like 'human nature'.

× They they the first person who taught me how to be polite and observing other people.

✓ They were the first people who taught me how to be polite and to observe other people.

There are several issues: a repeated word 'they', incorrect article and number ('the first person' should match plural subject 'They' so use 'the first people' or reword), and incorrect verb forms ('observing' should be parallel with 'to be' as an infinitive or use the gerund consistently). Also the past tense is required because learning happened in the past. Suggestion: Use 'They were the first people who taught me' and keep parallel structure with infinitives ('to be polite and to observe').

× Treat other people the way you want to be treated.

✓ Treat other people the way you would like to be treated.

The original sentence is understandable and not strictly ungrammatical, but in the context of expressing a polite principle it's more natural to use 'would like' to indicate preference and hypothetical reciprocity. Suggestion: Use 'would like' for a more polite, idiomatic expression.