Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 语法和用词错误较多，影响表达清晰度。建议：1) 改正关键词汇和拼写（例如“Rudy”应为“rude”；“accessible and touch me”句子不通，应改为具体行为）。2) 句子结构要简洁，先给出主题句，然后用1–2句具体细节补充（如何被教导、具体实例）。3) 注意时态一致（过去经历用过去时）。4) 使用适当的连接词（for example, because, so）使逻辑更流畅。

Exemplo: I was shy as a child, so I often avoided greeting people. My parents taught me simple manners, such as saying "hello", "please" and "thank you", and they encouraged me to practice by meeting relatives and neighbours. Because of their guidance, I gradually became more confident when talking to teachers and classmates.

Sugestão: 表达总体可理解但有明显词汇错误（"played"应为"polite"或"politeness"；"politics"误用）。建议：1) 使用准确名词或抽象名词（politeness/being polite）。2) 开头要有明确主题句，然后用原因和例子支持。3) 增加一两个连词（because, for instance, moreover）让论证更连贯。4) 词汇可稍扩展（e.g. mutual respect, social norms）。

Exemplo: Yes, I believe politeness is very important because we interact with other people every day. Politeness helps build mutual respect and prevent misunderstandings; for instance, saying "please" and "thank you" can make conversations smoother and keep relationships friendly.

× When I was a child, I was quite shy and often didn't greet my friends or teachers, so I sometimes behaved Rudy.

✓ When I was a child, I was quite shy and often didn't greet my friends or teachers, so I sometimes behaved rudely.

问题类型：句子结构/词性使用错误（对应清单中的“Sentence structure errors”）。原句中的“Rudy”被错误地用作形容词或副词，实际应使用副词“rudely”来修饰动词“behaved”。建议：在描述行为方式时使用副词（如：rudely, politely）。

× My parents told me that it wasn't accessible and touch me, say hello and please, which helped me becomes more confident when meeting people.

✓ My parents told me that it wasn't acceptable to not touch people and that I should say hello and please, which helped me become more confident when meeting people.

问题类型：动词形式和句子结构错误（可归入“Sentence structure errors”和“Verb in the present participle/ past participle”类）。原句有多处错误：1) “accessible” 用词错误，应为“acceptable”；2) 句子缺少不定式或从句连接，原文“and touch me, say hello and please”不通顺，意图应是教我打招呼和说请/谢谢；3) “becomes” 主语为“me”应使用不带-s 的原形“become”。建议：用正确词汇“acceptable”，用不定式或that从句连接要教的行为，并注意主谓一致。

× Yes, I think being played is very important because we talk with other people every day and politics helps to build trust and avoid misunderstandings.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because we talk with other people every day and politeness helps to build trust and avoid misunderstandings.

问题类型：形容词/名词使用错误（“Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs”）。原句中“being played”为错误词组，应该是“being polite”；“politics”是“政治”的意思，应改为名词“politeness”或形容词“polite”配合结构。建议：注意区分相近词的词义（played/polite，politics/politeness），并根据句子需要选择正确的词类（在此用“politeness”或“being polite”）。

× For example, saying please and thank you can make communication smoother and help maintain good relations.

✓ For example, saying "please" and "thank you" can make communication smoother and help maintain good relationships.

问题类型：词汇选择/名词搭配错误（可归入“Incorrect use of quantifiers”或一般词汇使用问题）。原句“good relations”虽然可接受，但更自然的表达是“good relationships”。建议：选择更常用的搭配“good relationships”以提高表达自然度。