Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 句子不够自然，存在语法错误和用词不当且信息组织混乱。建议： 1) 开头直接回应问题，用一句主题句说明你是如何学会礼貌的（例如通过父母的榜样、家庭教育或学校）。 2) 使用1–2个支持细节说明具体方法（例如父母教导、示范、惩罚或奖励、日常礼仪练习），并用连接词（such as, for example, because）衔接。 3) 注意基本语法：主谓一致、正确的时态和冠词，避免把“plight”误用。可用更恰当的词如“politeness”或“manners”。 4) 保持回答自然简洁，不超过5句。

Exemplo: My parents taught me to be polite from a young age. For example, they always reminded me to say ‘please’ and ‘thank you’ and showed respectful behavior themselves. At school, teachers also reinforced good manners by praising polite actions, so I learned both by example and practice.

Sugestão: 内容表达模糊且多处词汇使用错误（如“plight”误用），句子结构和逻辑不清。建议： 1) 直接回答“是”或“不是”，并给出一到两个具体原因支持你的观点（例如促进人际关系、减少冲突、显得专业）。 2) 用连接词（because, however, for example）使理由和例子衔接自然。 3) 避免泛泛而谈或带有歧视性的表述，描述社会现象时要具体且中性。 4) 修改词汇错误，用“polite”或“politeness”而非“plight”。保持句子简短清晰。

Exemplo: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps people communicate more smoothly and reduces misunderstandings. For example, saying ‘excuse me’ or listening carefully can prevent conflicts and make daily interactions more pleasant.

× I always think the plight is who you born with and also our parents will teach us to be a nice people, respect other people and doing things politely.

✓ I always think politeness is something you are born with, and our parents also teach us to be nice people, respect others and do things politely.

问题类型：形容词/副词使用不当（13）。 解释与改进建议：原句中“the plight” 用词不当，意图应为“politeness”（礼貌），且“who you born with” 的结构错误，正确应为被动或状态动词短语“you are born with”。“a nice people” 中“people”为复数名词，不应与不定冠词“a”连用，且“nice”修饰复数人时直接用“nice people”。短语“doing things politely” 应使用动词原形并与前面并列结构保持一致，改为“do things politely”。建议记住：1) 用词要准确（plight意为困境，不适用于礼貌）；2) 被动或状态表达用“be born with”；3) 名词单复数与冠词一致；4) 并列动词保持相同形式。

× For myself, the answer is yes, but most of people in society don't make me feel they are plightful.

✓ For me, the answer is yes, but most people in society don't make me feel they are polite.

问题类型：量词/限定词使用不当（14）及用词错误（13）。 解释与改进建议：原句中“most of people” 应为“most people” 或“most of the people”；同时“plightful” 不是正确的形容词，想表达“有礼貌”应为“polite”。另外“for myself” 在口语中更常说“For me”。建议：1) 使用“most people”表示大多数人；2) 注意词汇搭配，选用恰当形容词（polite）；3) 简化表达为“For me”。