Paper— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答有直接提到纸盒和纸星星，也补充了制作方法，但“starts”应为“stars”，“scroll it together”表达不自然。可以用“roll”或“fold”描述把纸条卷起来，并说明你喜欢这类手工的原因。注意最多用5句话，避免重复解释。

Exemplo: Yes, I’ve made paper boxes and little paper stars. To make a star, I roll a long strip of paper into a small shape and tuck the end in. It’s simple and quite relaxing.

Sugestão: 题目问的是小时候的习惯，因此应使用过去时，例如“used to”或“enjoyed”，而不是现在时“like”。回答中的例子比较具体，但“a cute character or a cute figure”意思重复；“big mouth”前应加冠词或改为复数。可以补充画画时的感受或常画的内容。

Exemplo: When I was a child, I used to draw cartoon characters on paper. I especially liked giving them big eyes and funny expressions. It was a fun way to pass the time.

Sugestão: 回答直接且前后对比清楚。表达过去的经历时，“for practices”不自然，可以说“for practice”或“as a class exercise”；“use email for sending letters”也可以简化为“use email to keep in touch”。建议补充一条使用电子邮件的具体原因。

Exemplo: No, I don’t. I wrote letters in elementary school as a class exercise, but these days I usually use email to keep in touch with people. It’s much quicker and more convenient.

Sugestão: 你给出了具体的日本新年贺卡例子，能支持观点。不过“if they want to celebrate New Year”不够自然，“that basically they're all handwritten”结构也不清楚。可以直接说人们会寄手写的新年贺卡，并补充他们保存这些卡片的原因。注意这个例子说的是贺卡，不完全等同于信件。

Exemplo: Yes, I think some people still keep handwritten letters because they have sentimental value. For example, in Japan, people often send handwritten New Year’s cards to friends and family. They may keep them as special memories.

Sugestão: 回答直接，说明了携带的物品和用途，内容也比较具体。注意“a physical notebook”需要冠词，“my thought”应改为“my thoughts”或“ideas”。可以补充一个实际使用场景，让细节更鲜明。

Exemplo: Yes, I usually carry a small notebook and a pencil case with me. I use them to jot down ideas or sketch things I notice when I’m out. I prefer writing by hand because it helps me remember things.

× I like drawing different kinds of things. For example, I like to draw a cute character or a cute figure with big eyes and big mouth.

✓ I like drawing different kinds of things. For example, I like to draw a cute character or a cute figure with big eyes and a big mouth.

“mouth”是单数可数名词，前面需要使用冠词。这里应在“big mouth”前加不定冠词“a”。

× No, I wrote physical letters back in elementary school for practices, but now I mainly use e-mail for sending letters to others.

✓ No, I wrote physical letters back in elementary school for practice, but now I mainly use e-mail for sending letters to others.

“practice”在这里表示练习这一活动，是不可数名词，不应使用复数形式“practices”。

× Yes, I've learned that in Japanese culture, if they want to celebrate New Year, they will send cards to their friends or family members that basically they're all handwritten.

✓ Yes, I've learned that in Japanese culture, if people want to celebrate the New Year, they will send cards to their friends or family members, and the cards are basically all handwritten.

原句中的“members that basically they're all handwritten”把关系从句“that...”和完整句子“they're...”错误地连接在一起，造成句子结构混乱。可以改用“and”连接两个完整意思，并用“the cards”明确指出是卡片都是手写的。

× I carry my notebook and pencil case when I go out. I like using physical notebook and pens for writing down my thought or just drawing.

✓ I carry my notebook and pencil case when I go out. I like using a physical notebook and pens for writing down my thoughts or just drawing.

“notebook”是单数可数名词，前面需要加冠词。这里可以用“a”，所以应说“a physical notebook”。

× I carry my notebook and pencil case when I go out. I like using physical notebook and pens for writing down my thought or just drawing.

✓ I carry my notebook and pencil case when I go out. I like using a physical notebook and pens for writing down my thoughts or just drawing.

这里是在泛指平时写下的想法，通常会有多个想法，因此用复数“thoughts”更合适。