Paper— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答前后矛盾：“Definitely”表示肯定，但后面说没有做过。先明确回答做过或没做过，再补充一个具体例子或原因。注意说“paper crafts”，避免重复“made by”，并完整结束句子。

Exemplo: Yes, I have. I once made a paper crane at school, and I enjoyed folding the paper into a neat shape. It was delicate, though, so I had to handle it carefully.

Sugestão: 内容基本切题，但重复了“when I was a child”，而且过去经历应使用过去时，如“used”和“loved”。“career”可能想表达“crayon”；建议直接回答喜欢在纸上画画，并补充常画的内容。

Exemplo: As a child, I loved drawing on paper, especially pictures of animals and cartoon characters. I usually used pencils or crayons, and sometimes I coloured the pictures in afterwards.

Sugestão: 回答明确，也给出了理由，但“letters”是复数，应搭配“are”；“a signal to traditional culture”不自然，可改为“a meaningful part of our traditions”。“Although”不能和“but”同时使用。可举一个写信的场景，让内容更具体。

Exemplo: Yes, I do, although not very often. I sometimes write letters to older relatives because they appreciate receiving something handwritten. Even though we can send messages online, a physical letter feels more personal.

Sugestão: 问题问的是人们是否会保存手写信，而回答主要谈到一些人没有网络、需要手写，偏离了“保存信件”。先直接回答，再说明人们保存信件的原因，例如纪念意义或情感价值。注意用“handwritten letters”，而不是“handwriting”。

Exemplo: Yes, I think many people still keep handwritten letters, especially those from family members or close friends. They may reread them because the letters remind them of meaningful moments. Some people also keep them as personal keepsakes.

Sugestão: 回答立场清楚，也说明了原因，但“when I was outside”与一般习惯的时态不符，应使用“when I go out”；“a little hurdle”不适合表达携带物品不方便，可改为“a bit inconvenient”。可以补充你通常用什么替代。

Exemplo: No, I usually don't carry paper and pens when I go out because they take up space and can be inconvenient. I prefer to keep my bag light. If I need to write something down, I use the notes app on my phone.

× Definitely, I don't have any crafts with paper because I deem that the crafts made by made by paper is very delicate and is very vulnerable to fire and.

✓ Definitely, I don't have any crafts made of paper because I deem that crafts made of paper are very delicate and vulnerable to fire.

表示材料或制作原料时，通常用“made of”，而不是“made by”。“made by”通常表示由谁制作。建议区分“made of”（由某种材料制成）和“made by”（由某人制作）。

× Definitely, I don't have any crafts with paper because I deem that the crafts made by made by paper is very delicate and is very vulnerable to fire and.

✓ Definitely, I don't have any crafts made of paper because I deem that crafts made of paper are very delicate and vulnerable to fire.

主语“crafts”是复数，因此谓语动词应使用“are”，不能用“is”。建议先找到句子的主语，再根据主语的单复数选择相应的谓语动词。

× I usually use paper to paint when I was a child because when I was a child I love painting and use a used a pencil or career to paint what I like on paper.

✓ I usually used paper to paint when I was a child because I loved painting and used a pencil or career to paint what I liked on paper.

句子描述的是童年时期的习惯和喜好，相关动词应使用过去时：use 改为 used，love 改为 loved，like 改为 liked。建议叙述过去经历时，检查句中所有描述过去动作或状态的动词，并保持时态一致。

× Definitely. I actually write physical letters because I think that physical letters is very important and a signal to traditional culture.

✓ Definitely. I actually write physical letters because I think that physical letters are very important and a signal to traditional culture.

主语“physical letters”是复数，因此应使用“are”，不能使用“is”。建议确认主语的中心词，并让谓语动词与主语保持单复数一致。

× Although we have Internet in current society, but it's still important.

✓ Although we have the Internet in current society, it's still important.

“Although”已经引导让步状语从句，后面不能再用“but”连接主句。建议使用“Although ..., ...”或“..., but ...”其中一种结构，不要同时使用两者。

× Although we have Internet in current society, but it's still important.

✓ Although we have the Internet in current society, it's still important.

通常说“the Internet”，需要在“Internet”前加定冠词“the”。建议记住表示互联网时常用“the Internet”这一表达。

× I thought that people still keep handwriting in society because there are some people in poor areas and they have no access to Internet and electronic devices, so they must write by hand.

✓ I thought that people still keep handwriting in society because there are some people in poor areas and they have no access to the Internet and electronic devices, so they must write by hand.

通常说“have access to the Internet”，表示“能够使用互联网”，其中“Internet”前需要加定冠词“the”。建议将“access to the Internet”作为固定搭配记忆。

× Personally speaking, I won't carry paper and pens when I was outside because I think taking them is a little hurdle for me and I want to be completely free when I was outside.

✓ Personally speaking, I won't carry paper and pens when I go out because I think taking them is a little hurdle for me and I want to be completely free when I go out.

这里谈的是现在的想法以及将来或一般情况下外出时的行为，不应使用过去时“was”。在表示将来时间的 when 从句中，通常用一般现在时，因此应改为“when I go out”。建议先判断事件发生的时间，再统一选择合适的时态。