Paper— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答，再用一两个具体例子补充。注意“craft”要用复数“crafts”；讲过去的经历时用一般过去时，如“made”和“learned”。“orgami”应为“origami”，而“paper rolls”表达不清楚，建议确认是否想说“paper roses”。

Exemplo: Yes, I made quite a few paper crafts when I was younger. I especially enjoyed making paper airplanes and origami. I learned how to make paper roses from YouTube tutorials.

Sugestão: 回答时先说明你喜欢做什么，再补充是谁教你的。注意“organises”和“paper roast”不是这里合适的表达，可能想说“origami”和“paper roses”；“teachers teach”应改为过去式“teachers taught us”。句子目前较难理解，建议拆成两句。

Exemplo: As a child, I loved making origami, especially paper roses. My kindergarten teachers taught me how to fold the paper, and I enjoyed making them with my classmates.

Sugestão: 明确回答后，用一到两个理由解释即可。这里应使用“letters”，不是“lectures”；“to testing”可改为“for texting”，“more faster”应改为“faster”。避免把打电话和发信息重复表达，并尽量让句子简洁自然。

Exemplo: No, I hardly ever write physical letters nowadays. I usually text or call people because using my phone is much faster and more convenient.

Sugestão: 开头可以直接回答“没有以前那么常见”，然后说明原因。注意句首大写；“testing”应为“texting”，“emailing to the others”可改为“emailing others”。最后的“get information and tag”意思不清，建议删去或换成具体、相关的解释，并补全句子。

Exemplo: Not as much as they used to, to be honest. Most people text or email each other now because it is quicker and easier than sending letters. Some people still keep old handwritten letters because they have sentimental value.

Sugestão: 直接回答是否随身带纸笔，再解释你如何记录信息。避免“Now”和“these days”重复；“to techniques”表达不正确，可用“to take notes”。句子以“and”结尾，说明回答未完成；请补全句子或删去多余连接词。

Exemplo: No, I don’t usually carry paper and pens with me when I go out. I use my phone to take notes or record important information because it’s more convenient. I only bring a notebook if I know I’ll need to write something down.

× Yes, I have made quite a few paper craft when I was younger.

✓ Yes, I made quite a few paper crafts when I was younger.

“a few”后面要接可数名词复数，因此“paper craft”应改为“paper crafts”。

× Yes, I have made quite a few paper craft when I was younger.

✓ Yes, I made quite a few paper crafts when I was younger.

句中有“when I was younger”，明确表示过去的时间，因此应使用一般过去时“made”，而不是现在完成时“have made”。

× When I was a child I loved making organises especially paper roast and when I was in the kindergarten our teachers teach us the skills to make.

✓ When I was a child, I loved making organises, especially paper roast, and when I was in kindergarten, our teachers taught us how to make them.

泛指在幼儿园上学时，通常说“in kindergarten”，不需要在“kindergarten”前加“the”。

× When I was a child I loved making organises especially paper roast and when I was in the kindergarten our teachers teach us the skills to make.

✓ When I was a child, I loved making organises, especially paper roast, and when I was in kindergarten, our teachers taught us how to make them.

句子描述的是童年时期发生的事情，时间背景是过去，因此“teach”应改为过去式“taught”。

× When I was a child I loved making organises especially paper roast and when I was in the kindergarten our teachers teach us the skills to make.

✓ When I was a child, I loved making organises, especially paper roast, and when I was in kindergarten, our teachers taught us how to make them.

“the skills to make”后缺少“制作什么”的信息，句意不完整。可以改为“how to make them”，明确表示老师教会我们如何制作这些东西。

× No, I don't write any physical lectures nowadays because the mobile phone is more convenient for me to testing and calling people and it is more faster to message people.

✓ No, I don't write any physical lectures nowadays because the mobile phone is more convenient for me to test and call people, and it is faster to message people.

“to”引出不定式时，后面的动词要用原形。“to testing and calling”应改为“to test and call”。

× No, I don't write any physical lectures nowadays because the mobile phone is more convenient for me to testing and calling people and it is more faster to message people.

✓ No, I don't write any physical lectures nowadays because the mobile phone is more convenient for me to test and call people, and it is faster to message people.

“faster”本身已经是比较级，前面不能再加“more”。应使用“faster”，不能说“more faster”。

× not as much as before, to be honest. Nowadays most people testing and emailing to the others and it is more convenient to get information and tag

✓ Not as much as before, to be honest. Nowadays, most people are testing and emailing others, and it is more convenient to get information and tag.

“most people testing and emailing”缺少助动词，导致句子没有完整的谓语。若使用现在进行时，应在动词-ing形式前加“are”。

× not as much as before, to be honest. Nowadays most people testing and emailing to the others and it is more convenient to get information and tag

✓ Not as much as before, to be honest. Nowadays, most people are testing and emailing others, and it is more convenient to get information and tag.

动词“email”后面可以直接接收件人，不需要加介词“to”。因此应说“emailing others”。

× Now I don't carry pens and paper with me these days because I usually use my phone to techniques or record information since it's more convenient and

✓ Now I don't carry pens and paper with me these days because I usually use my phone to text or record information, since it's more convenient.

句末的“and”表示后面还应有并列内容，但原句没有完成这个结构，因此句子不完整。删去句末的“and”可以使句子结束完整。另外，“to”后应接动词原形；这里按语境将“techniques”改为“text”。