Paper— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 「I hope」は文脈に合わないため、「I remember」または「When I was...」を使いましょう。また、「paper animals」の具体例と感想があり、内容は十分です。過去の経験を自然に説明するため、時制を過去に統一し、最初に直接答えるとさらに明確になります。

Exemplo: Yes, I have. When I was in elementary school, I used to make paper animals, such as dogs and horses. It was a fun and creative way to spend my free time.

Sugestão: 「an animals」は「animals」または「an animal」、「papers」は通常「paper」、「aircrafts」は「paper airplanes」や「paper aircraft」に直しましょう。さらに、最初の文が長いため、「Also」や「In addition」を使って内容を分けると自然です。活動の理由や感想を1つ加えると、より具体的で効果的な回答になります。

Exemplo: When I was a child, I really enjoyed making paper animals, such as dogs and horses. I also liked making paper airplanes because I could decorate them and see how far they would fly.

Sugestão: 「prefer send」は「prefer to send」、「it very easy」は「it is very easy」にしましょう。また、2つの節をカンマだけでつながず、「because」や「and」を使って文を明確に分けてください。「physical letters」を直接言い換え、メールを使う理由を自然に説明するとよいです。

Exemplo: No, I don’t. I prefer to send emails to my friends because it is much quicker and more convenient than writing physical letters. I can also attach photos or documents easily.

Sugestão: 直接的な回答と理由があり、構成は良好です。「Yes, they do.」の後にコンマを入れ、「physical letter」は一般的な話なので「physical letters」または「handwritten letters」にしましょう。「I've heard that」は必須ではないため、自分の意見として述べると、より自信のある自然な回答になります。

Exemplo: Yes, they do. Some people still keep handwritten letters because they feel more personal and sincere than emails or text messages. They may also keep them as special memories of important relationships.

Sugestão: 「Yes, I do.」の後に句読点を入れ、文を分けてください。「notes」は「notebooks」または「some paper」、「it's unnecessary item」は意味が逆で、「they are necessary items」または「they are useful for me」が適切です。質問への直接回答後、英語学習でどのように使うかを具体的に説明すると、内容が明確になります。

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I usually carry a pen, a small notebook, and sometimes my English textbook. Since I have been studying English, these items are useful when I want to write down new vocabulary or take notes.

× When I was a child, I really enjoyed making an animals with papers such as dogs and horses and I also liked creating aircrafts with papers.

✓ When I was a child, I really enjoyed making animals out of paper, such as dogs and horses, and I also liked creating aircraft out of paper.

Animals is plural, so it cannot be preceded by the singular article an. Paper refers to the material and is normally uncountable in this context, so papers is incorrect. Aircraft is commonly used as both the singular and plural form.

× Not at all, actually, because I prefer send an email to my friend, it very easy and quick way.

✓ Not at all, actually, because I prefer sending emails to my friends. It is a very easy and quick way to communicate.

Prefer should be followed by a gerund when the sentence uses this structure: prefer doing something. Therefore, send should be changed to sending.

× Not at all, actually, because I prefer send an email to my friend, it very easy and quick way.

✓ Not at all, actually, because I prefer sending emails to my friends. It is a very easy and quick way to communicate.

The clause it very easy and quick way is missing the verb is and the article a before very easy and quick way. Separating the two complete ideas into two sentences also avoids an incorrect comma connection.

× Yes they do. I've heard that some people still prefer physical letter because they can express their feelings more sincerely.

✓ Yes, they do. I have heard that some people still prefer physical letters because they can express their feelings more sincerely.

The statement refers to letters in general, so the plural form letters is needed. Physical letter would refer to one particular letter and does not fit the general meaning.

× Yes I do when I go out I usually bring pens and notes and also textbooks because I've been studying English so it's unnecessary item for me.

✓ Yes, I do. When I go out, I usually bring pens, notes, and textbooks because I have been studying English, so they are necessary items for me.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to several items: pens, notes, and textbooks. Therefore, they are necessary is required. The plural noun items does not need the singular article a or an.