Paper— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific example. Avoid repeating “I have a lot of” and use “paper” as an uncountable noun. The phrase “the Flank” and the final clause are unclear, so describe the craft precisely and use correct past tense, such as “I made” and “I learned.”

Exemplo: Yes, I made several paper crafts when I was in secondary school. I usually watched YouTube tutorials and followed the instructions carefully. The craft I remember best was a paper flower because it was simple but looked attractive.

Sugestão: Use the past tense because the question asks about your childhood. Focus on one or two activities instead of listing unclear ideas, and connect them with linking words such as “also” or “because.” Replace unnatural phrases like “watching the videos in the YouTube” and “the later from the peasant” with specific, understandable examples.

Exemplo: As a child, I enjoyed making simple paper crafts, such as airplanes and flowers. I also liked writing short notes to my friends and passing them around at school. It was a fun way to communicate secretly during breaks.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct answer, such as “No, I don’t.” Use the present tense for your current habits and explain the reason clearly. “Lobby writing,” “application way,” and “throughout the communication” are not natural expressions; use “prefer typing messages on apps” and “communicating through social media” instead.

Exemplo: No, I rarely write physical letters nowadays. I used to write them in secondary school, but now I prefer sending messages through apps or social media. They are faster and more convenient, especially when I need to contact someone quickly.

Sugestão: Give a balanced answer rather than making an absolute claim. Use “keep handwritten letters” as the correct verb phrase, and replace “technology has never improved” with “technology has developed.” Explain that people mainly use digital communication, but some still keep letters for sentimental reasons.

Exemplo: Yes, some people still keep handwritten letters, although they are less common than before. Most people now use social media because it is quicker and easier. However, people may keep old letters from family members or loved ones because they have sentimental value.

Sugestão: Use the present tense consistently because you are describing your current routine. State the reason in a simple way and avoid repeating “paper” and “mobile phone.” Replace “when I was going” with “when I go out” and explain that your phone can replace paper for notes, lists, and communication.

Exemplo: No, I usually don’t carry paper or a pen when I go out. I always have my mobile phone with me, so I can take notes, make lists, and send messages digitally. I only bring a pen and notebook when I attend a meeting or class.

× Back to the days in the secondary school I have a lot of I have made a lot of crafts with papers.

✓ Well, back in secondary school, I made a lot of crafts with paper.

The question asks about past experiences, so the simple past made is more appropriate than the present perfect have made. Paper is generally uncountable when referring to the material, so it should not be pluralized here.

× I have made a lot of crafts with papers watching the video in the YouTube.

✓ I made a lot of crafts with paper while watching videos on YouTube.

Use on, not in, with YouTube. The phrase while watching clearly shows that the two activities happened at the same time.

× One thing I remember is that the Flank that is the most based of my craft.

✓ One thing I remember is that the Flank was the most basic part of my craft.

Because the craft was made in the past, the past form was is needed instead of the present form is. Basic is the correct adjective form in this context.

× I usually make a craft and also watching the videos in the YouTube.

✓ I usually made crafts and also watched videos on YouTube.

The phrase as a child refers to a past habit, so both verbs should be in the simple past: made and watched. The two verbs should also have parallel forms.

× I read I write the application in the paper.

✓ I read and wrote applications on paper.

Use on paper when referring to writing on a sheet or physical material. The preposition in is not appropriate in this expression.

× I read I write the application in the paper and throughout that we would talk and communicate between the friends.

✓ I read and wrote applications on paper, and through that, we would talk and communicate with our friends.

The two verbs read and wrote should be joined with and. With our friends is the natural conjunction and preposition combination; between is normally used when referring to two people or groups.

× I read I write the application in the paper and throughout that we would talk and communicate between the friends and throwing out the papers.

✓ I read and wrote applications on paper, and through that, we talked and communicated with our friends instead of throwing away the papers.

Since the answer describes childhood activities, wrote, talked, and communicated should be in the past tense. Throwing should be changed to the parallel past form threw if it is intended as another past action; here, instead of throwing away is used to make the meaning grammatical.

× I used physical letters in secondary high schools.

✓ I used to write physical letters in secondary school.

Used to write expresses a repeated past activity. Used physical letters is not grammatically complete because use needs an appropriate verb pattern in this context.

× Unfortunately today I will try to lobby writing in the application way throughout the communication in the social media rather than writing physical letters.

✓ Unfortunately, today I prefer writing messages through social media rather than writing physical letters.

The answer describes a current preference, so the present-tense verb prefer is more suitable than the future form will try. The phrase through social media correctly expresses the method of communication.

× Unfortunately today I will try to lobby writing in the application way throughout the communication in the social media.

✓ Unfortunately, today I prefer writing messages through social media.

Through is used to describe the medium used for communication. The natural expression is on social media or through social media, not in the social media.

× I don't think that people still handwritten letters today.

✓ I don't think that people still write handwritten letters today.

The clause people still handwritten letters is missing a main verb. Write is needed because handwritten is an adjective describing the letters.

× The technology has never improved in nowadays.

✓ Technology has improved nowadays.

The sentence refers to changes that have happened up to the present, so has improved is appropriate. The negative form has never improved gives the opposite meaning from the intended idea.

× They instantly go into social media and communicate each other.

✓ They immediately go on social media and communicate with each other.

The standard expression is go on social media. Communicate is followed by with when identifying the people involved, so communicate with each other is required.

× They also share a lot of memories throughout the video call.

✓ They also share a lot of memories through video calls.

Video calls are being discussed generally, so the plural form without the definite article is more appropriate. Through correctly indicates the medium used to share memories.

× I don't carry paper and pen with me when I was going.

✓ I don't carry paper and a pen with me when I go out.

The question asks about a present habit, so go should be in the present tense instead of was going. A pen is countable and singular here, so it needs the article a.

× I don't carry paper and pen with me.

✓ I don't carry paper and a pen with me.

Paper is used as an uncountable material noun, while pen is a singular countable noun. Therefore, pen needs the article a.

× Because moreover I carry a mobile phone throughout that I can do everything what I want.

✓ I carry a mobile phone, so I can do everything I want.

Because and moreover do not work together in this sentence. So correctly shows the result, and everything I want does not require the relative pronoun what.

× I can do everything what I want.

✓ I can do everything I want.

After everything, use a defining relative clause without what in this structure. Everything I want is the correct grammatical form.

× The paper and paper things also I can do in the mobile phones.

✓ I can also do things that I would normally do on paper on my mobile phone.

Use on paper for activities normally done with paper and on my mobile phone for the device used. The original preposition in is incorrect in both expressions.