Paper— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly in the present perfect: “No, I haven’t.” Avoid repeating the same idea and remove unclear phrases such as “my math and physical is very low.” Give one clear reason and, if possible, add a specific example. Use correct verb forms, such as “I haven’t made” and “I’m focused on.”

Exemplo: No, I haven’t made any paper crafts. I’m mainly focused on my school subjects because I find maths and physics quite challenging. However, I used to enjoy drawing on paper when I was younger.

Sugestão: Use the past tense consistently because the question asks about childhood: “When I was a child, I liked drawing.” Explain what you drew and mention your teacher’s advice clearly. Avoid repetition and the incorrect phrase “use the paper to drink”; say “use paper for drawing” instead. Use linking words such as “because” and “also” naturally.

Exemplo: When I was a child, I loved drawing pictures on paper, especially houses and people. I was interested in art, and my art teacher often gave me advice on improving my technique. As a result, I spent a lot of time practising at home.

Sugestão: Clarify whether you write letters regularly or only occasionally. Use the correct expression “write physical letters” or “write handwritten letters,” rather than “I’m right.” Avoid the inaccurate claim that you do not use a mobile phone if you mean you use it less often. Give a specific reason, such as finding handwritten letters more personal.

Exemplo: Yes, I still write handwritten letters, although I only do it occasionally. I usually write to close friends or relatives on special occasions because a physical letter feels more personal than a text message. I mainly use my phone for everyday communication.

Sugestão: State your opinion clearly and use “handwritten letters” instead of “the handwriting letters.” The answer should focus on whether people keep letters, not whether they can write them. Explain that digital communication has reduced the habit, but acknowledge that some people keep letters for sentimental reasons. Avoid repeating “message” and “mobile phone.”

Exemplo: I think fewer people keep handwritten letters nowadays because they usually communicate through text messages and social media. However, some people still preserve letters from loved ones because they have sentimental value. For example, a handwritten letter from a family member can become a meaningful memory.

Sugestão: Use the present simple for a regular habit: “Yes, I usually carry a pen and some paper.” Explain how you use them, for example, to take notes or complete assignments. Avoid unclear phrases such as “they give me a lot of assignments” and “give the good things.” Do not repeat “so that’s why”; one linking phrase is enough.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually carry a pen and a small notebook when I go out. As a student, I sometimes need to take notes or write down reminders about my assignments. I also prefer writing important information by hand because it helps me remember it.

× Uh, no, I'm not made any craft with paper because in school I am also studying in the in main subject because my math and physical is very low.

✓ Uh, no, I haven't made any crafts with paper because I am mainly studying my core subjects at school, and my math and physical education grades are very low.

Use the present perfect form have not made to talk about an experience up to the present. Crafts should be plural because you are speaking generally. The original sentence also has an incorrect and repetitive structure, so the ideas should be connected more clearly.

× I'm not focused on the craft with paper.

✓ I'm not focused on crafts with paper.

Use the plural noun crafts when referring to this activity in general. The definite article the is not needed here because you are not referring to specific crafts.

× When I am child I always drawing on the paper because I am interested in the drawing.

✓ When I was a child, I always drew on paper because I was interested in drawing.

Use the past tense was and drew because the question asks about your childhood. Use the gerund drawing after the preposition in. Paper is uncountable in this context, so no article is needed.

× My art teacher also give me a good advice how to train the art art like a house and children pics.

✓ My art teacher also gave me some good advice about how to draw things such as houses and pictures of children.

Use gave because you are describing something that happened in the past. Advice is an uncountable noun, so say some good advice rather than a good advice. Use about after advice to introduce the topic.

× Because I am testing in these these things so I always use the paper to drink.

✓ Because I was interested in these things, I always used paper for drawing.

Use was interested because you are talking about your childhood. The repeated word these should be removed. The verb drink does not fit the meaning; for drawing activities, use used paper for drawing.

× Uh, absolutely I'm right, the physical letters to my friend because the physical letter is very important in my life.

✓ Absolutely, I write physical letters to my friends because physical letters are very important in my life.

Use the present-tense verb write, not right, because write describes the action. Use friends in the plural when speaking generally. Physical letters should also be plural because you are discussing letters in general.

× Uh, I always send with my, with my friend and family because I'm not using the mobile phone in the recent time, because I am a student, I am a recently focused on my studies.

✓ I always send them to my friends and family because I have not been using my mobile phone recently. As a student, I have been focusing on my studies.

Use send something to someone, not send with someone. Recently is the natural adverb for this time expression. The original phrase I am a recently focused is grammatically incorrect; use have been focusing to describe an activity continuing up to the present.

× I think people cannot write the handwriting letters because they are so depend on the things.

✓ I think people do not write handwritten letters because they are so dependent on technology.

Use handwritten letters, not handwriting letters, because handwritten is the adjective that describes letters written by hand. Dependent is an adjective and must follow the verb are. Technology is a more appropriate uncountable noun for the general idea.

× They always send the message on the send the text message on the mobile phone and they also connected to the social media and Instagram.

✓ They always send text messages on their mobile phones, and they are also connected to social media platforms such as Instagram.

Remove the repeated and incomplete phrase send the message on the. Use text messages in the plural for a general statement. The adjective connected needs the helping verb are, and social media is normally used without the definite article.

× Absolutely, I am carrying paper and pen because I am a student.

✓ Absolutely, I carry paper and pens because I am a student.

Use the simple present carry for a regular habit. The present continuous am carrying is usually used for an action happening now, not for a general routine. Pens should be plural because students normally carry more than one or are speaking generally.

× I and they also give me a lot of assignments and I will also give give the good things.

✓ My teachers also give me a lot of assignments, and I complete them carefully.

The original sentence has an unclear subject and a repeated verb. Place the subject my teachers before give, and connect the two complete ideas with and. The corrected second clause has a clear subject and verb.

× It give me a good feeling so that's why.

✓ It gives me a good feeling, which is why I carry them.

The subject it is third-person singular, so the present-tense verb must be gives. The original ending so that's why is incomplete; which is why connects the reason to the main idea more clearly.

× So that's why I'm also carrying the paper and a pen because it give me a good feeling.

✓ That is why I also carry paper and a pen, because carrying them gives me a good feeling.

Do not use the definite article the before paper when referring to paper generally. Use the simple present carry for a regular habit. The subject carrying them is singular, so the verb must be gives.