Paper— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答切题，并使用了具体经历、制作过程和结果，内容较丰富。不过，部分表达不自然或有语法问题，例如“different size of roses”应改为“roses of different sizes”，“another paper”可改为“another piece of paper”，“I am really proud”应使用过去时“I was really proud”。句子较长，可以使用“After that”或“As a result”连接细节，使表达更清晰。

Exemplo: Yes, I have. When I was a child, I made paper roses for my mother’s birthday. I used several colors of paper, folded them into roses of different sizes, and arranged them like a bouquet. She was really pleased, and I felt very proud of my handmade gift.

Sugestão: 回答提供了个人喜好和学校比赛的具体细节，结构基本清楚。但由于问题询问过去，应将“I like”改为“I liked”，将“we will fold”改为“we would fold”或“we folded”。“which goes the forest furthest”表达错误，应改为“which one could fly the farthest”。此外，“fold knives”虽然可以理解，但“make paper knives”更自然。

Exemplo: I liked making paper knives and airplanes. At primary school, my classmates and I would often have paper-airplane contests. We folded different types of planes and threw them to see which one could fly the farthest. It was a simple activity, but we really enjoyed it.

Sugestão: 回答有明确观点，也尝试解释手写信的情感价值，但内容与问题不完全匹配：完成作业和文章不属于“写信”。“as middle school student”应改为“as a middle school student”，“in every occasion”应改为“on every occasion”，“writing ... have”应改为“writing ... has”。还要注意避免重复“different different”，并明确回答现在是否仍然写信，而不是只描述过去。

Exemplo: Not very often. I used to write physical letters when I was in middle school, especially to keep in touch with close friends. Although typing is much faster, handwritten letters feel more personal because people can recognize someone’s handwriting. Nowadays, I usually send messages online instead.

Sugestão: 回答尝试讨论学校和工作场景，但“kept in a lot of different ranges”不符合英语习惯，而且把“保留手写信”和“被要求书写”混淆了。应直接说明人们是否保存手写信，并给出具体原因，例如纪念意义或个人情感。“in work”应改为“at work”，“type out the words”可简化为“type”。

Exemplo: Yes, some people still keep handwritten letters, especially if they have sentimental value. For example, people may save letters from family members, old friends, or loved ones as special memories. However, most everyday communication is now done through emails and messaging apps.

Sugestão: 回答最终表达了清楚的否定观点，并给出了使用手机的原因，但开头出现自我纠正和重复，影响流利度。应直接说“I don’t usually carry paper and pens”，不要先说“I often carry my pen”。“I will be provided by this”表达不自然，可改为“I can usually find some”或“I can ask someone for them”。

Exemplo: No, I don’t usually carry paper and pens when I go out. I normally take my phone with me, so I can use the notes app if I need to write something down. If I ever need a pen and some paper, I can usually borrow them from someone or find them nearby.

× I used different kinds of colored paper and folded them into different size of roses.

✓ I used different kinds of colored paper and folded them into different sizes of roses.

“Different”表示不止一种尺寸，因此后面的可数名词“size”要用复数形式“sizes”。建议注意“different + 可数名词复数”的搭配。

× I used another paper to cover them like a bouquet.

✓ I used another piece of paper to cover them like a bouquet.

“Paper”表示纸这种材料时通常是不可数名词。表示“一张纸”时，应使用“a piece of paper”；“another”也应修饰具体的可数单位。

× I like to use paper to fold knives and airplanes.

✓ I liked to use paper to fold knives and airplanes.

问题使用“as a child”询问过去的经历，所以回答应使用一般过去时。“like”要改为过去式“liked”。建议根据时间状语判断时态。

× We used to have paper airplane contests at our primary school and we will fold the different kinds of airplanes and throw them to see which goes the forest furthest.

✓ We used to have paper airplane contests at our primary school, and we would fold different kinds of airplanes and throw them to see which one went the farthest.

整句话描述童年时期的习惯，不能使用将来时“will fold”。在过去的习惯中，可以使用“would fold”。“goes”也应改为过去式“went”。此外，“which one went the farthest”是更合适的比较表达。

× Of course, as middle school student, I found myself writing physical letters every day and in every occasion.

✓ Of course, as a middle school student, I found myself writing physical letters every day and on every occasion.

“middle school student”是单数可数名词，前面需要不定冠词“a”。另外，固定搭配是“on every occasion”，表示“在每一个场合”。后一处同时涉及介词使用。

× Of course, as middle school student, I found myself writing physical letters every day and in every occasion.

✓ Of course, as a middle school student, I found myself writing physical letters every day and on every occasion.

表示“在某个场合”时，英语中使用介词“on”，所以应说“on every occasion”，而不是“in every occasion”。

× I think that writing physical letters have more kind of feeling than typing letters on the computer.

✓ I think that writing physical letters has more of a personal feeling than typing letters on the computer.

“Writing physical letters”是动名词短语，整体作主语时看作单数，因此谓语动词应使用“has”，不能使用“have”。建议先判断真正的主语，再决定谓语动词的单复数。

× I think that writing physical letters have more kind of feeling than typing letters on the computer.

✓ I think that writing physical letters has more of a personal feeling than typing letters on the computer.

“Kind”是可数名词，不能直接说“more kind of feeling”。表达“更多一种个人感受”时，应使用“more of a personal feeling”。同时，“feeling”前的表达也需要符合英语中的数量结构。

× But maybe in work you need to type out the words a bit more.

✓ But maybe at work you need to type out the words a bit more.

表示“在工作场所”或“上班时”时，固定搭配是“at work”，而不是“in work”。建议积累常见的介词搭配。

× If I really require a paper and pen, I think I will be provided by this.

✓ If I really need a piece of paper and a pen, I think they will be provided to me.

原句的被动结构不正确。“I will be provided by this”表示“我将被这个东西提供”，语义和结构都不对。这里应以物品作主语，使用“they will be provided to me”，表示“它们会被提供给我”。