Paper— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer in the correct tense: use “Yes, I have” for a question using “Have you...?” Clarify the unclear phrase “graph flavor color” and avoid repeating “when I was in foundation.” Give a direct topic sentence, followed by specific details about the craft, such as what it looked like, why you made it, and how you felt about it. Use natural vocabulary such as “paper model,” “Minecraft character,” and “university assignment.”

Exemplo: Yes, I have. I made a paper model of a Minecraft character for a university assignment when I was a foundation student. It was quite challenging, but I really enjoyed designing and coloring it. In the end, I was proud of the result.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear answer, such as “I liked making paper flowers.” Use the past tense consistently because the question asks about childhood: “used to make,” “gave,” and “was.” Correct the unclear opening and use natural phrases such as “on Valentine’s Day,” “a memorable gift,” and “she was always happy.” Add one specific detail about how you made the flowers or your mother’s reaction, and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: As a child, I liked making paper flowers. I usually made them for my mother and gave them to her on Valentine’s Day. They were simple, but she was always happy to receive them. I remember feeling proud because I had made a meaningful gift with my own hands.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and includes examples, but improve grammar with “I’m the kind of person who loves writing physical letters” and “It’s very important to me.” Use “letters” or “in a journal” accurately, since writing about daily activities and goals sounds more like keeping a diary than writing letters. Organize the ideas with a linking phrase such as “For example” and avoid repeating “write.”

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I’m the kind of person who enjoys writing physical letters, especially to close friends and family. I like describing my daily activities and sharing my goals and plans with them. Writing by hand feels more personal than sending a quick text message.

Sugestão: You give a clear opinion, but “handwriter” is incorrect; say “handwritten letters” or “handwriting.” Avoid making a broad claim such as “it is very common in many countries” unless you can support it. Explain why some people keep letters, for example because they are personal, memorable, or connected to important relationships. Use a natural structure with a reason and a personal example.

Exemplo: Yes, I think some people still keep handwritten letters, although they are less common than text messages. People often save them because they are personal and remind them of special moments or loved ones. For example, I would keep a letter from a close friend or family member because it would have sentimental value.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer first: “It depends.” Then explain the situations clearly. Correct the grammar with “it depends,” “when I go to a coffee shop to study,” and “I keep a pen and some paper with me.” The final part is unclear, so explain when you do not carry them, such as when attending a formal event or traveling light. Use one or two specific reasons, such as taking notes or recording new ideas.

Exemplo: It depends on where I’m going. I usually carry a pen and a small notebook when I go to a coffee shop to study or explore a new place because I like taking notes and recording ideas. However, I normally leave them at home if I’m going somewhere formal or if I only plan to be out for a short time.

× Yes I do.

✓ Yes, I have.

The question uses the present perfect tense, Have you made...? Therefore, the answer should use have rather than do: Yes, I have.

× I have made a graph flavor color from Minecraft. It is my school assignment when I was in foundation, when I was in foundation in the university and this is the best experience ever.

✓ I made a colorful Minecraft graph for a school assignment when I was in foundation at university, and it was the best experience ever.

The activity happened in the past, so made and was are more appropriate than the present forms is and this is. The past simple is normally used for a finished past event connected with a specific past time.

× I usually take paper to make something like flower and giving it to my mom in the Valentine day.

✓ I usually took paper to make things like flowers and give them to my mom on Valentine's Day.

The plural noun flowers is needed after things like. The pronoun them refers to the plural noun flowers. Valentine's Day is the correct form of the holiday name.

× I usually take paper to make something like flower and giving it to my mom in the Valentine day.

✓ I used to take paper to make things like flowers and give them to my mom on Valentine's Day.

Because the speaker is describing a repeated childhood activity, used to take and give clearly express a past habit. The verbs take and giving also need to be parallel: take and give.

× She always happy every every time she get it.

✓ She is always happy every time she gets one.

The adjective happy needs the linking verb is. The third-person singular subject she requires gets, not get. The repeated word every should also be used only once.

× I'm a kind of person who love write physical letter.

✓ I am the kind of person who loves writing physical letters.

The relative pronoun who refers to the singular noun person, so the verb must be loves. After loves, the gerund writing is natural. The plural noun letters is appropriate when speaking generally.

× especially write about my daily activity, for example in the morning what I do, what is my goal to finish doing this year or to our plan.

✓ I especially like writing about my daily activities, such as what I do in the morning, what my goals are for this year, and our plans.

The verb like is followed naturally by the -ing form writing. The items in the list should have a parallel structure, and the plural noun activities is suitable for general daily routines.

× Yes, it is a very important for me.

✓ Yes, it is very important to me.

Important is an adjective, so it cannot be preceded directly by the article a. Removing a produces the correct structure: It is very important to me.

× Handwriter is very common in many countries around the world and it is a meaningful thing to do and remind about childhood.

✓ Handwritten letters are very common in many countries around the world, and they are meaningful because they remind me of my childhood.

Handwritten letters is plural, so it requires are rather than is. The plural pronoun they refers back to letters. The verb remind needs an object, me, and the correct preposition is of.

× Handwriter is very common in many countries around the world and it is a meaningful thing to do and remind about childhood.

✓ Handwritten letters are very common in many countries around the world, and they are meaningful because they remind me of my childhood.

The standard expression is remind someone of something, not remind someone about something in this context. The preposition of must be used before my childhood.

× For me it is very memorable thing and I love it so much.

✓ For me, it is a very memorable thing, and I love it so much.

The singular countable noun thing requires an article. The correct form is a very memorable thing.

× I would say it depend on the situation when I go to the coffees to studying or I sitting to explore something new.

✓ I would say it depends on the situation, such as when I go to cafés to study or sit and explore something new.

The subject it is third-person singular, so the verb must be depends. After go to, the infinitive study is needed, and sit must include the subject and finite verb in the coordinated phrase.

× I would say it depend on the situation when I go to the coffees to studying or I sitting to explore something new.

✓ I would say it depends on the situation, such as when I go to cafés to study or sit and explore something new.

The preposition to in go to is followed by a place, and the purpose expression is to study, not to studying. The phrase I sitting is also incomplete; sit is the correct base form after or when it is coordinated with go.

× I always keep and and handwriter always keep pen and Curry paper with me every time I go out.

✓ I always keep pens and paper with me whenever I go out.

The plural noun pens is appropriate because people generally carry more than one pen or are speaking about pens in general. Paper is usually treated as an uncountable noun in this meaning, so it does not need a plural ending.

× I always keep and and handwriter always keep pen and Curry paper with me every time I go out because I want to know something but if it come to going something special.

✓ I always keep pens and paper with me whenever I go out, but I do not usually take them when I am going somewhere special.

The adverb usually should be placed before the main verb take. The original sentence repeats always and and, which makes the structure unclear. The revised sentence places the adverb correctly and uses a complete contrast with but.

× because I want to know something but if it come to going something special.

✓ However, I do not usually take them when I am going somewhere special.

The original phrase contains an incomplete conditional structure and an incorrect verb form. The revised sentence has a clear subject, auxiliary verb, and main verb, and it uses am going for an action in progress or a planned movement.