Paper— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and natural: start with a clear topic sentence saying whether you made paper crafts. Avoid grammatical errors (use 'some' instead of 'any' here) and tighten the response to one to three sentences. Give one specific example of a paper craft and a brief reason why you enjoyed it, using a linking word like 'for example' or 'because'.

Exemplo: Yes, I have made some paper crafts. For example, I often folded origami cranes because I enjoyed their delicate shapes and it helped me relax.

Sugestão: Clarify and stay on topic: answer directly which paper activity you liked (or say you did not like paper activities). Avoid confusing phrases like 'wood paper' and long unrelated content. Use a topic sentence and one or two supporting details with linking words like 'however' or 'instead'.

Exemplo: I didn't do many paper crafts as a child; instead, I preferred playing outside with friends. However, sometimes we drew pictures on scrap paper for fun.

Sugestão: Fix grammar and word choice: use 'handwritten letters' (not 'pskir' or 'fiscal'). Give a concise reason and one brief example of when you write letters. Keep it to two sentences and use 'because' to link reason and result properly.

Exemplo: Yes, I still write handwritten letters because they feel more personal than typed messages. For example, I write thank-you notes to friends after special occasions.

Sugestão: Be more fluent and grammatically correct: say 'Yes, some people do' if answering generally, then give a personal example. Use linking words like 'for example' and correct verb forms ('encouraged' → 'encouraged myself' or 'I feel encouraged'). Keep it to two sentences and be specific about why you keep them.

Exemplo: Yes, many people still keep handwritten letters, especially as keepsakes. For example, I keep several letters from friends because I read them when I feel down and they boost my mood.

Sugestão: Make your answer clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence, then give the reason using linking words like 'because' and a short example. Replace 'I have fun' with a clearer reason (e.g. 'I find my phone more convenient'). Keep it within two sentences.

Exemplo: No, I usually don't carry paper and pens because I find my phone more convenient. For example, I use note apps like Notion or Notes to record things I need to remember.

× Yes, I have made any crafts with paper.

✓ Yes, I have made some crafts with paper.

The present perfect 'have made' is correct but 'any' is inappropriate in affirmative sentences; use 'some' for positive statements about an unspecified number. Also 'made' is fine as past participle.

× I'm not sure drawing can be called crafts, but I love drawing so I used to draw.

✓ I'm not sure drawing can be called a craft, but I love drawing, so I used to draw.

'Crafts' as a category can be countable; here 'a craft' or 'craft' feels more natural when referring to the activity. Commas improve sentence flow. 'Drawing' correctly functions as a gerund (present participle form used as noun).

× When I was a child I didn't like to do wood paper so I used to play with my friends in the playground or I loved talking with my friends so I didn't do anything.

✓ When I was a child I didn't like working with wood or paper, so I used to play with my friends in the playground. I also loved talking with them and often didn't do much else.

Original mixes ideas and has unclear phrases like 'do wood paper'. Clarify 'working with wood or paper'. Break into two sentences for clarity and correct parallelism. Use 'often didn't do much else' to express inactivity.

× Yes, I do because I love pskir letters rather than typing letters because it is more like handmade.

✓ Yes, I do because I prefer handwritten letters to typed ones; they feel more handmade.

Present tense 'do' is fine. Replace 'pskir' (typo) with 'handwritten'. Use 'prefer X to Y' for comparison and 'they feel' matches plural 'letters'. Use clearer phrasing.

× So when I get a fiscal letters

✓ So when I get a physical letter,

Fragment sentence and incorrect word 'fiscal' (likely 'physical') and article misuse. Use singular 'a physical letter' or plural 'physical letters' and finish the sentence; here corrected fragment only fixes immediate phrase.

× Yes, I do. I have a lot of paper letters since I get a handwritten letters because whenever I felt down I encouraged to read it.

✓ Yes, I do. I have a lot of paper letters because whenever I feel down, I like to read them.

Use simple present 'feel' for habitual action rather than past 'felt'. 'I encouraged to read it' is incorrect; use 'I like to read them' or 'I am encouraged to read them'. Match plural 'letters' with 'them'.

× No I don't because I have fun so whenever I have to remember or type it I usually use my phone app like notion or notes.

✓ No, I don't. I'm usually busy, so when I need to remember something or type a note I use apps on my phone like Notion or Notes.

Original 'I have fun' is vague; replace with 'I'm usually busy' to explain not carrying paper. Use 'when I need to' for necessity and pluralize or specify 'a note'. Capitalize app names as proper nouns. Improved word order and clarity.