Paper— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clearer and more natural: start with a topic sentence directly answering the question, correct grammar and word choice, and give one or two specific examples using linking words. Keep it under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes. I used to make lots of paper crafts as a child. For example, I often folded paper airplanes and little paper boats to give to my friends, and we would play with them together in the park.

Sugestão: Answer directly, fix verb tenses and word choice, and provide specific, coherent details with linking words. Avoid repetition and keep sentences concise.

Exemplo: I liked drawing and making paper models when I was a child. For example, I would draw faces on paper and fold paper flowers and aeroplanes to play with my friends.

Sugestão: State your main point clearly, correct grammar (negation and article use), and expand briefly with a reason and an example. Use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘so’.

Exemplo: No, I rarely write physical letters nowadays because social media and mobile phones make it much easier to stay in touch. For example, I usually send text messages or emails instead.

Sugestão: Make the contrast clear, correct vocabulary and grammar, and give a concrete reason or example for each group. Use linking words such as ‘however’ or ‘on the other hand’.

Exemplo: Some people still keep handwritten letters because they are sentimental and feel more personal. However, many others prefer digital messages because they are faster and more convenient.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, correct vocabulary (e.g., ‘pen’, ‘notebook’), and provide a coherent, specific reason for carrying them. Keep to two or three short sentences and use linking words like ‘for example’.

Exemplo: Sometimes I carry a small notebook and a pen when I go out, especially on trips. For example, I use them to write down interesting facts about the places I visit or to sketch flowers I see.

× Yes, I made many pepper crab as a child.

✓ Yes, I made many paper crafts as a child.

The original uses singular nouns 'pepper crab' incorrectly and likely intended 'paper crafts' (plural). This is a pluralization and word choice error. Use plural form for countable items made in multiple instances and correct the word to 'paper crafts.' Suggestion: say 'many paper crafts' when referring to multiple items.

× For example, I often float a paper airplanes and the craft paper rows to give to my friends and we play with them in a park.

✓ For example, I often made paper airplanes and paper crowns to give to my friends, and we played with them in the park.

The sentence mixes present tense verbs ('float') with plural agreement errors ('a paper airplanes') and incorrect noun forms ('craft paper rows'). The task asks past habits, so use simple past ('made', 'played'). Also correct noun phrases: 'paper airplanes' (plural) and likely 'paper crowns'. Use 'in the park' for a specific place. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (simple past) and ensure noun plurality and correct vocabulary.

× I like drawing and making paper models.

✓ I liked drawing and making paper models when I was a child.

The question asked about childhood preferences, so the verb should be in the past tense ('liked') to match the time frame. Using present tense 'like' creates a tense mismatch. Suggestion: use past tense when referring to past habits or preferences.

× When I was a child, for example, I drew a face and since on a paper and also floored paper flowers and aeroplanes to play with my friends.

✓ When I was a child, for example, I drew faces and scenes on paper and also folded paper flowers and aeroplanes to play with my friends.

Multiple issues: 'since on a paper' is ungrammatical and likely meant 'scenes on paper'; 'floored' is wrong form—should be 'folded'. Use plural 'faces' if more than one, and keep past tense 'folded'. The sentence structure needs reordering to be clear. Suggestion: use correct verbs ('folded') and clear noun phrases ('scenes on paper') and maintain past tense.

× No, I really write a physical letters nowadays because social media and mobile phones make it much easier to stay in touch.

✓ No, I rarely write physical letters nowadays because social media and mobile phones make it much easier to stay in touch.

The original 'really write a physical letters' is ungrammatical and confused. 'Rarely' fits meaning (not often). Also remove the article before 'physical letters' and use plural 'letters'. 'Nowadays' requires present tense; 'write' is fine. Suggestion: use adverbs like 'rarely' to express infrequency and correct articles and plurality.

× Some people still keep handwriting letter because they are a sentimental and a personal bottom.

✓ Some people still keep handwritten letters because they are sentimental and personal keepsakes.

Errors: 'handwriting letter' should be 'handwritten letters' (adjective + plural noun). 'They are a sentimental and a personal bottom' is incorrect vocabulary and article usage; likely meant 'sentimental and personal keepsakes' or 'sentimental and personal belongings.' Replace with 'keepsakes' and remove unnecessary articles. Suggestion: use 'handwritten letters' and choose appropriate nouns like 'keepsakes'.

× Many others prefer a digital message because they are a faster and the convent.

✓ Many others prefer digital messages because they are faster and more convenient.

Mistakes: 'a digital message' should be plural 'digital messages' to match general preference. 'They are a faster' has wrong article and comparative form; use 'faster' without 'a'. 'the convent' is wrong word—should be 'convenient.' Suggestion: use correct comparative forms and correct vocabulary ('convenient').

× Sometimes I carry a notebook and a paint when I go out, especially on a trip.

✓ Sometimes I carry a notebook and a pen when I go out, especially on a trip.

'a paint' is the wrong noun; for writing use 'a pen'. Also 'a notebook' is fine. This is a word choice/pronoun-noun error. Suggestion: use the correct item name ('pen') when referring to writing instruments.

× For example, I use them to squish my new flowers.

✓ For example, I use them to sketch new drawings.

'Squish my new flowers' is semantically odd and likely misused. Given carrying notebook and pen, the intended meaning is probably 'sketch' or 'draw' notes about new sights. This is a verb choice error. Suggestion: replace with appropriate verb like 'sketch' or 'write down'.

× I see I see no down the interesting facts about the place I visit.

✓ I write down interesting facts about the places I visit.

Original repeats 'I see I see', includes 'no down' (nonsense) and wrong tense/number. The intended meaning is 'I write down interesting facts about the places I visit.' Use present tense for current habit and plural 'places'. Suggestion: simplify to 'I write down interesting facts about the places I visit.'