Paper— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 句子不自然且有许多发音或用词错误，表达不清。回答应直接且简短，先给出主题句（有或没有），然后用一两句具体说明原因或例子，避免冗长或不相关的词汇。注意时态和常用搭配，如 “make paper crafts” 或 “do crafts”。

Exemplo: No, I haven’t made many paper crafts. I only made a few simple projects with my mother when I was young, such as paper flowers and origami, because we didn’t often have craft supplies at home.

Sugestão: 表达含糊且有语法错误与重复。回答需先明确主题句（我小时候喜欢做……），然后用具体细节和连接词（for example, we used to…／we would…）补充。避免重复单词并注意名词复数与动词时态一致。

Exemplo: As a child, I enjoyed making paper plants and origami. For example, my friends and I would have little competitions to see whose paper flower looked the most realistic, which was simple but very exciting for us.

Sugestão: 回答不流畅并有语法错误（如动词形式、冠词）。应直接回答：Yes/No，然后用一两句具体说明原因或举例。避免重复短语（例如 “to be honest” 两次）。

Exemplo: No, I don’t usually write physical letters nowadays. I prefer texting or emailing because it’s faster, and I can’t remember the last time I wrote a letter by hand.

Sugestão: 总体意思清楚但存在语法与用词问题（如 “prefer to texting” 应为 “prefer texting”；比较级错误 “much more quicker”）。回答可以更自然并加入连接词（for example, nowadays, because）来流畅衔接。

Exemplo: Not as much as before. Nowadays people, especially younger generations, prefer texting or emailing because these methods are quicker and more convenient than writing physical letters.

Sugestão: 回答不自然且含糊，出现许多错误（搭配、词序、词汇，如 “calmingness and posture” 不合适）。应直接回答 Yes/No，并给出简短明确原因或例子，使用常用表达如 “I usually carry a notebook and a pen” 或 “I usually don’t carry them because I use my phone” 。

Exemplo: No, I don’t usually carry paper and pens when I go out. I rely on my smartphone for notes and messages, so I find typing on my phone more convenient than carrying a notebook.

× No, I haven't made DIY press in fact the number of the press I made can be considered in one hand.

✓ No, I haven't made many DIY presses; in fact, the number of presses I've made can be counted on one hand.

原句中主谓和名词单复数不一致。“press”在此指多件作品，应用复数“presses”；另外“the number of the press I made can be considered in one hand”结构不自然，改为“the number of presses I've made can be counted on one hand”更符合英语表达。建议注意名词复数形式和常见固定表达“counted on one hand”。

× Purgally my mom is the same so I guess that's why my weight I often get pooped off my traps and crafts class.

✓ Partially my mom is the same, so I guess that's why I often get bored of art and crafts classes.

原句拼写和代词使用混乱。“Purgally”应为“Partially”；“my weight I often get pooped off my traps”完全错误，应为“I often get bored of art and crafts classes”。代词与主语、动词搭配要清晰，保持句子主干完整。建议用简单句表达因果关系：‘Partially... so I often...’。

× While making paper fair plants is the most interesting of the island.

✓ Making paper fairies/plants was the most interesting thing on the island when I was a child.

原句结构混乱，“While making...”后应接主句，但句子缺少清晰主谓。可能想表达“我小时候做纸制仙女/植物是岛上最有趣的事”。需重组为完整的主谓结构并明确时态。建议先确定名词（fairies 或 plants）并用“was the most interesting thing”。

× My friend and I often have competitions to see whose whose plan can follow the forest that's a really simple activity but give us a lot of excitement.

✓ My friend and I often had competitions to see whose plan could follow the rules; that's a really simple activity but gave us a lot of excitement.

句子重复“whose whose”，且时态与上下文（过去）不一致，主谓不配合。“can follow the forest”语义不明，猜测为“follow the rules/plan”。把动词改为过去式“had/could/gave”以符合叙述过去的情景。建议使用清晰的名词短语并保持时态一致。

× write visible letters these days actually to be honest I prefer to texting or emailing with others and to be honest I can't remember the last time I read something by hand.

✓ I don't write physical letters these days. Actually, to be honest, I prefer texting or emailing others, and I can't remember the last time I wrote something by hand.

原句缺少主语和助动词，时态混乱。“write visible letters”应为否定形式“I don't write physical letters”。“prefer to texting”是错误搭配，应为“prefer texting”或“prefer to text”。“read something by hand”也错误，应为“wrote something by hand”。建议注意主语、助动词和动词形式的一致性。

× Well, not as much as before. People today prefer to texting or emailing rather than writing physical letters, especially for the younger generations, it's much more quicker and more convenient.

✓ Well, not as much as before. People today prefer texting or emailing rather than writing physical letters. Especially among younger generations, it's much quicker and more convenient.

“prefer to texting”错误搭配，改为“prefer texting”；“younger generations”前用介词“among”。“more quicker”是冗余比较级错误，应为“quicker”或“more convenient”二者分开。建议避免重复比较词，保持表达简洁。

× Actually, I bring nothing but my fingers so in other words I bring absolutely nothing because well when I'm all sides I prefer typing because it's more of calmingness and posture.

✓ Actually, I don't bring anything but my phone and my fingers; in other words, I bring nothing else because when I'm outside I prefer typing since it's better for my posture and it calms me.

原句多处结构和词汇错误：“bring nothing but my fingers”不自然，应该说明带手机并用手指打字。“when I'm all sides”应为“when I'm outside”。“more of calmingness and posture”为非英语表达，改为“better for my posture and it calms me”。建议用常见搭配如“bring nothing but...”，“when I'm outside”，“better for my posture”。