Paper— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer first, then one or two concise supporting details. Use correct verb forms and avoid repetition. Mention when and who you made crafts with, and describe one simple detail (materials or difficulty) using linking words like "for example" or "but".

Exemplo: Yes. I often made paper crafts at home with my children. For example, we built paper houses using card and glue, but they were sometimes fragile so we reinforced the walls with extra layers of paper.

Sugestão: Start with a topic sentence answering the question about your childhood. Be specific about the activity and who did it, and avoid repeating words. Use linking words like "for example" to add detail and correct tense agreement.

Exemplo: As a child, I liked making small books from paper. For example, I would fold and staple pages to create storybooks, and my sons now enjoy drawing cartoons to put into similar handmade books.

Sugestão: Answer directly (yes/no) and give a concise reason with correct vocabulary and tense. Avoid filler words and repetition. Explain how technology has changed your habits using linking words like "because" or "so".

Exemplo: No, I rarely write physical letters now because email and messaging apps are more convenient and faster for staying in touch with friends and family.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion and support it with a specific reason or example. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating phrases. Mention who might keep letters and why (sentimental value, records).

Exemplo: I think some people still keep handwritten letters because they have sentimental value; for instance, parents often save notes from their children as memories.

Sugestão: Provide a direct answer and one or two specific details about when or why you carry them. Use correct articles and prepositions, avoid repeating words, and keep it concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually carry a small notebook and a pen in my bag to write shopping lists and reminders, especially when I go to the market.

× Yes, I have In I have been paper architecture in house at home, I used to make a paper house with my children.

✓ Yes, I have. I have made paper architecture at home; I used to make a paper house with my children.

Original sentence contains incorrect verb forms and extra words ('In I have been', 'paper architecture in house at home') and missing punctuation. The present perfect 'I have made' correctly describes experience up to now. 'Paper architecture' is acceptable but needs 'made' as the past participle; 'at home' replaces awkward 'in house at home'. Also split into two clauses for clarity. Suggestion: use 'I have made' for experience and keep clause structure simple.

× Sometimes a paper house is very was very weak.

✓ Sometimes a paper house was very weak.

The sentence mixes present and past forms ('is very was very'). Remove the extra 'is' to keep past tense 'was' consistent with 'used to make'. Use 'sometimes' at the beginning is fine. Suggestion: maintain consistent tense and avoid duplicating verbs.

× I used to make chapter book chapter book.

✓ I used to make chapter books.

Repetition and incorrect singular/plural. 'Chapter books' is the plural noun; 'used to' requires base verb 'make'. Remove duplicate phrase. Suggestion: use plural when referring to general habitual activity.

× For example, my sons like drawing a cartoon. So he often make make a cartoon book or a paper.

✓ For example, my son likes drawing cartoons. So he often makes a cartoon book or a paper one.

Subject number mismatch and verb agreement errors: 'sons' vs 'he' inconsistent; choose singular 'son' or plural consistently. With singular 'he', verb must be 'likes' and 'makes' (third person singular adds -s). Also 'drawing a cartoon' better as 'drawing cartoons'; remove duplicate 'make'. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree and remove repetition.

× Well So recently I didn't write a rhetor by physical physical because because internet in the internet enhanced to enhance to everywhere.

✓ Well, recently I didn't write a letter physically because the internet has become widespread.

Multiple problems: wrong word 'rhetor', repeated words, and awkward phrasing. Use 'didn't write' for recent past negative, 'letter' instead of 'rhetor', and 'physically' as adverb. 'The internet has become widespread' uses present perfect to explain why. Suggestion: choose correct vocabulary and simplify the clause.

× I think people like to write people like to write letters, handwriting because so in order to in order to send the

✓ I think people like to write handwritten letters because they want to send personal messages.

Sentence repeats phrases and misuses 'handwriting' (noun) when adjectival form 'handwritten' is needed. Also unfinished fragment 'in order to send the' must be completed; add object 'personal messages'. Replace duplicated 'people like to write' with single clause and use proper pronoun 'they'. Suggestion: avoid repetition and choose correct adjective form.

× Of course, I sometimes write write on paper to do list. So I I definitely take a pen and pencil with my back in my bag and every day.

✓ Of course, I sometimes write a to-do list on paper. So I definitely take a pen and a pencil in my bag every day.

Repeated words ('write write', 'I I') and awkward word order ('write on paper to do list'). Correct word order is 'write a to-do list on paper'. 'Take a pen and a pencil in my bag every day' clarifies intent; remove 'with my back' which is incorrect. Suggestion: remove duplicates, fix word order, and use articles 'a' where needed.