Paper— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific example and a brief reason. Use linking words like 'for example' and correct verb forms (e.g., 'in primary school', 'paper flowers').

Exemplo: Yes. I learned papercraft in primary school and made things like origami cranes and paper flowers. For example, I used to fold cranes for classmates, but now I rarely do it because I'm busy with work and other commitments.

Sugestão: Correct grammar and avoid redundancy. Give a clear statement, a concise reason, and one contrasting detail. Replace vague phrases ('when I go to try') with precise expressions.

Exemplo: No, I don't write physical letters anymore because I am usually too busy. However, I used to write letters to friends and family quite often, and I still enjoy receiving them on special occasions.

Sugestão: Fix grammar and clarity. Begin with a clear opinion, then give a specific reason and an exception. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however'. Avoid words like 'nobody' which are confusing here.

Exemplo: I think handwritten letters are less common today because technology makes it easy to message people quickly. However, some people—including me—still write handwritten notes for personal occasions or to show appreciation.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and phrasing to sound more natural. Start with a direct answer, then give a specific reason and an example of when you use them. Correct small errors like 'jot down ideas'.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually carry a small notebook and a pen when I go out, although I sometimes forget. I find them handy for jotting down ideas or important information, for example when I suddenly think of something for work.

Sugestão: Organize your response: give a clear topic sentence about what you liked, then two specific examples. Avoid filler words and correct tense/word choice (e.g., 'I did', 'I liked to draw', 'write down my thoughts'). Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: As a child I loved using paper for drawing and writing. For example, I would draw things I saw around me and write down my thoughts or stories, which helped me remember ideas and practice creativity.

× Yes, when I was a child I learned how to make papercraft as primary school, such as origami and paper flower.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I learned how to make papercrafts in primary school, such as origami and paper flowers.

Errors: singular/plural with count nouns and incorrect preposition. 'Papercraft' and 'paper flower' should be plural when speaking generally: 'papercrafts', 'paper flowers' (Grammar Problem Type IDs 1 and 11). Also use the preposition 'in' for attending a level of school: 'in primary school' instead of 'as primary school' (Grammar Problem Type ID 11). Suggestion: make count nouns plural when referring to types or examples and use 'in' for school level contexts.

× Now I rarely do them because I'm too busy with work and other commitments.

✓ Now I rarely do them because I'm too busy with work and other commitments.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change necessary. Present simple 'rarely do' is appropriate to describe a habitual present situation (Grammar Problem Type ID 6).

× No, I don't write physical letter anymore because I'm way too busy and have another commitment, but I still love receiving them when I go to try.

✓ No, I don't write physical letters anymore because I'm way too busy and have other commitments, but I still love receiving them when I try.

Errors: 'letter' should be plural 'letters' when speaking generally (Grammar Problem Type ID 22/1). 'another commitment' suggests a single commitment; context implies multiple or unspecified commitments so 'other commitments' is better (Grammar Problem Type ID 14). 'when I go to try' is unclear and ungrammatical; replace with 'when I try' to convey trying is the time or context (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Suggestions: use plural for general reference, match singular/plural for 'commitment(s)', and choose clear verb phrases like 'when I try' or 'when I can'.

× I used to write letter to my friend and family quite often.

✓ I used to write letters to my friends and family quite often.

Errors: 'letter' should be plural 'letters' when referring to multiple instances (Grammar Problem Type ID 1). 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match general reference to more than one person in 'family and friends' contexts (Grammar Problem Type ID 1). 'Used to' correctly signals past habitual action (Grammar Problem Type ID 5). Suggestion: make nouns plural when referring to multiple recipients and general habits.

× I think handwritten letter are less common nobody because technology has developed a lot and people can easily text or message friend and family.

✓ I think handwritten letters are less common now because technology has developed a lot and people can easily text or message friends and family.

Multiple errors: 'handwritten letter' should be plural 'handwritten letters' (Grammar Problem Type ID 1). 'nobody' is incorrect here; context likely intended 'now' (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). 'friend' should be plural 'friends' (Grammar Problem Type ID 1). Suggestion: use plural for general nouns and proofread for word choice errors like 'nobody' vs 'now'.

× However, I still enjoy writing letter and I often send handwritten notes to my friends.

✓ However, I still enjoy writing letters and I often send handwritten notes to my friends.

'letter' should be plural 'letters' when speaking generally (Grammar Problem Type ID 22/1). The rest of the sentence is fine. Suggestion: use plural for general activities referring to multiple items.

× Yes, I usually try to carry a notebook and a pen when I go out, although I sometimes forget.

✓ Yes, I usually try to carry a notebook and a pen when I go out, although I sometimes forget.

This sentence is grammatically correct. Present tense verbs 'try' and 'forget' are appropriate for habitual actions (Grammar Problem Type ID 10/6). No change needed.

× I like having them handy so I can quickly just down idea or important information.

✓ I like having them handy so I can quickly jot down ideas or important information.

Errors: word order and incorrect verb choice. 'quickly just down idea' is incorrect. The correct verb is 'jot down' meaning to write briefly, and 'ideas' should be plural when referring generally (Grammar Problem Type IDs 13 and 1). Place adverb 'quickly' before the verb phrase 'jot down'. Suggestion: use established verb collocations like 'jot down' and pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally.

× I do a lot of thing crazy with paper as a child.

✓ I did a lot of crazy things with paper as a child.

Errors: tense is wrong — use past 'did' for childhood actions (Grammar Problem Type ID 5). 'thing' should be plural 'things' (Grammar Problem Type ID 1). Word order: 'a lot of crazy things' is the correct sequence: quantifier + adjective + noun (Grammar Problem Type ID 18). Suggestion: use past tense for past habitual actions and correct adjective order and plural nouns.

× Umm, let me think, yeah, maybe I try to draw all the thing I saw and I feel interesting and sometimes I dry my thought down because I need to thinking about my thoughts.

✓ Umm, let me think, yeah, maybe I tried to draw all the things I saw because I found it interesting, and sometimes I wrote my thoughts down because I needed to think about them.

Multiple issues: tense mismatch — use past 'tried', 'saw', 'found', 'wrote', 'needed' for past actions (Grammar Problem Type ID 5). 'thing' should be plural 'things' (Grammar Problem Type ID 1). 'I feel interesting' is incorrect; 'I found it interesting' correctly expresses that the activity was interesting to the speaker (Grammar Problem Type ID 13). 'dry my thought down' is wrong verb choice; correct phrase is 'write my thoughts down' and 'thinking about my thoughts' is redundant — use 'think about them' (Grammar Problem Type IDs 8/9/26). Suggestion: keep past tense consistent for past experiences, use correct collocations like 'write down' and avoid redundancy.