Paper— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a direct, clear response with correct grammar and a brief supporting detail. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases. For example, say who you made crafts with, what you made, and when using one or two short sentences and a linking word if needed.

Exemplo: Yes, I have. I often made paper crafts with my wife, such as folded flowers and greeting cards, when we had free time on weekends.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a concise reason. Use correct tense and grammar, avoid repeating phrases like “sometimes I do it and sometimes not.” Use a linking word to connect reason.

Exemplo: Yes, I still write physical letters occasionally, but not regularly because I don’t have much free time, so I usually send messages instead.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give a specific reason with clearer language. Use linking words (for example, because, however) and avoid literal translations. Mention examples of devices and social trends briefly.

Exemplo: Not many people keep handwritten letters today, because digital communication on phones and laptops is more convenient and faster, so letters are less common.

Sugestão: Give a clear short answer plus a concise reason. Remove repeated words and correct phrasing. Mention an alternative (phone) and a brief example of when you might still carry pen and paper.

Exemplo: No, I usually don’t, because I can take notes on my phone; however, I sometimes carry a small notebook if I expect to jot down quick ideas or sketches.

Sugestão: Use past tense and be specific about activities and who you did them with. Provide one or two brief supporting details and use linking words for clarity.

Exemplo: As a child, I liked making paper models and drawing. For example, I often made paper planes and painted pictures with my family and friends on weekends.

× Actually, yes, I made some craft in in my wife.

✓ Actually, yes, I made some crafts with my wife.

The sentence has incorrect preposition use and noun number. Use 'with' to indicate accompaniment, not 'in'. 'Craft' should be plural 'crafts' because 'some' requires plural. Also remove duplicate 'in' and the extra article 'my' before wife is correct as 'my wife'. Suggestion: Use 'with' for companions and match plural with 'some'.

× Actually yes, I still but sometimes I do it and sometimes not because I don't have many time to do it.

✓ Actually, yes, I still do sometimes, but sometimes I don't because I don't have much time to do it.

Several issues: word order and auxiliary placement for frequency ('I still do sometimes' or better 'I still do sometimes' moved). 'Sometimes not' is awkward; use 'sometimes I don't'. 'Many time' is incorrect; use 'much time' with uncountable noun 'time'. Also include the auxiliary 'do' for negation. Suggestion: Place adverbs like 'sometimes' near the verb and use 'much' with uncountable nouns. Grammar problem types: Present tense issue (6), Incorrect use of quantifiers (14).

× Actually not be because this technology is more dependent and many people don't write handwriting because this use keyboard in the laptop or phone or anything.

✓ Actually no, because we depend more on technology and many people do not write by hand; they use a keyboard on a laptop or phone.

Multiple problems: 'not be' is ungrammatical—use 'no' or 'not' with proper clause. 'This technology is more dependent' is wrong; use 'we depend more on technology' (active structure). 'Don't write handwriting' should be 'do not write by hand'. 'This use keyboard' should be 'they use a keyboard'. Also 'in the laptop' -> 'on a laptop'. Suggestions: Use active voice for clarity, correct collocations ('depend on', 'write by hand', 'use a keyboard on a laptop'). Grammar problem types: Sentence structure errors (26), Incorrect use of pronouns (12), Incorrect use of prepositions (11).

× Actually no because I don't need need it because I have the my phone and easy to write in my phone phone.

✓ Actually no, because I don't need it; I have my phone and it's easy to write on my phone.

Errors include repeated word 'need need', incorrect article 'the my phone' (remove 'the'), missing subject for 'easy' (add 'it's'), and wrong preposition 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone'. Also duplicate 'phone'. Suggestions: Eliminate duplicates, use correct articles, include subject for adjectives, and use 'on' for devices. Grammar problem types: Incorrect use of articles (22), Incorrect use of prepositions (11), Sentence structure errors (26).

× Actually I like to do made something or drawing.

✓ Actually, I liked making things or drawing when I was a child.

Tense mismatch: question asks about childhood, so use past tense 'liked'. 'Like to do made' mixes infinitive and past participle incorrectly; use 'liked making' or 'liked to make'. 'Something' is vague; 'things' is better. Also 'drawing' should be parallel: 'making things or drawing'. Suggestion: Use past tense and consistent gerund forms for activities. Grammar problem types: Past tense issue (5), Verb + -ing form (8).

× I like drawing or painting with my family, friends.

✓ I liked drawing or painting with my family and friends.

Again the time frame is childhood, so use past tense 'liked'. Also coordinate 'family and friends' without a comma. Suggestion: Match tense to context and use 'and' to connect nouns in a list. Grammar problem types: Past tense issue (5), Incorrect conjunction use (16)}]}} PMID: None PMID: None}