Paper— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a direct, grammatically correct response and add one supporting detail. Use correct tense and simpler phrasing. For example, say whether you have or haven't tried paper crafts, mention a specific type (origami, cards) or reason.

Exemplo: No, I haven't made many paper crafts. I tried simple origami once at school and folded a paper crane, but I haven't practiced it since.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence about current habit, then explain briefly why using correct connectors. Avoid awkward phrases like "in behalf of that". Use 'instead' or 'nowadays' and correct articles and pronouns.

Exemplo: I don't often write physical letters now. Instead, I usually use email or instant messaging to contact friends and colleagues because it's faster and more convenient.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion then support it with one or two specific contrasts. Use linking words like 'however' or 'on the other hand', and avoid unclear phrases. Mention reasons why older people keep letters and why younger people do not.

Exemplo: I think it depends on the generation. Older people often keep handwritten letters because they view them as sentimental keepsakes; however, younger people usually prefer digital messages and rarely save physical letters.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly. Use present or past consistently and avoid filler sounds. Explain one specific situation when you carry them and when you don't, using linking words like 'but' or 'however'.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually carry a notebook and a pen when I go to work for taking meeting notes. However, I don't bring them when I go out casually, because I prefer to use my phone for quick notes.

Sugestão: Use past tense consistently and be specific about the activity. Describe what you made (origami animals, paper dolls) and how you learned, using one linking phrase to connect ideas.

Exemplo: When I was a child, I enjoyed making paper dolls and origami animals. My friends and I learned by following picture books, and we would show each other how to fold different models, which was very fun.

× I haven't experience with craft papers.

✓ I haven't had experience with craft paper.

The original uses the base verb 'experience' after 'haven't', which requires a past participle form or a perfect construction. Use 'haven't had experience' or 'have no experience'. Also 'craft papers' is better as uncountable 'craft paper' when referring to the material.

× I really liked physical letters.

✓ I really like physical letters.

The question asks about current habits. Using past tense 'liked' implies a past preference. Use present simple 'like' to express a current general preference.

× Nowadays, in behalf of that, I usually use some computers to write emails or some message to or friend or co-worker.

✓ Nowadays, instead of that, I usually use a computer to write emails or messages to friends or co-workers.

Several problems: 'in behalf of that' is incorrect; 'instead of that' conveys contrast. 'Use some computers' is unnatural for a personal habit; use singular 'a computer' or 'computers' without 'some'. 'message' should be plural 'messages'. Preposition 'to or friend' incorrect; use 'to friends or co-workers'. Also remove extra 'or'.

× I think it depends on generations in older generations, they keep handwritten writing handwritten paper is sent out their life bets.

✓ I think it depends on the generation. Older people keep handwritten letters because those papers are important in their lives.

The original is ungrammatical and repetitive. 'Depends on generations in older generations' is redundant; use 'depends on the generation' or 'depends on one's generation'. 'Keep handwritten writing handwritten paper is sent out their life bets' is confused; clarify meaning with 'keep handwritten letters' and 'important in their lives'. Rearranged for clarity and correct noun forms.

× On the other hand, the young generation to be really yeah, write something it could be take us.

✓ On the other hand, younger people tend not to write by hand much; they prefer digital messages.

Original contains filler 'to be really yeah', incorrect structure 'write something it could be take us'. Use clear subject-verb 'younger people tend not to write by hand' and state contrast with older generation. 'Younger people' and 'tend not to' express the habit correctly.

× MMM. When I was in work, yes I do carry some papers and pens for meeting memos and some notes, but in other case I really blame that kind of item outside.

✓ When I am at work, I do carry some paper and pens for meeting memos and notes, but otherwise I usually leave those items at home.

Tense and phrasing errors: 'When I was in work' should be 'When I am at work' for habitual present. 'Some papers' is better as uncountable 'some paper' for sheets; 'some notes' is fine. 'In other case I really blame that kind of item outside' is incorrect; likely meant 'otherwise I leave those items at home' to express not carrying them usually.

× When I was a child, I like to make some friends from papers and also we could share their hope folding process through some books showing how to make some items from papers.

✓ When I was a child, I liked to make paper dolls and we could follow instructions in books to fold and make paper items.

Mix of past and present: 'When I was a child' requires past tense 'liked' not present 'like'. 'Make some friends from papers' is unclear; 'paper dolls' expresses the idea. 'Share their hope folding process' is unclear; replace with 'follow instructions in books to fold and make paper items' for clarity and correct verb tense.

× Yeah, it's it was enjoyable for young me.

✓ Yeah, it was enjoyable for me when I was young.

Redundant 'it's it was' and awkward order 'for young me'. Use single past 'it was enjoyable' and natural order 'for me when I was young'.