Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid redundant phrases and incorrect prepositions (e.g., “suits my personality” not “suits to”).

Exemplo: I like to wear comfortable clothes. For example, during clinic hours I prefer sportswear because it allows me to move easily and makes me feel more confident and professional.

Sugestão: Reduce repetition and fix grammar (e.g., “while wearing them”). Use one strong reason and one brief supporting detail with a linking word. Avoid vague claims like “I always look good.”

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me feel relaxed and confident. For instance, I don’t have to worry about my appearance and I can move freely during work.

Sugestão: Correct singular/plural forms and article use (e.g., “a huge collection of polo shirts,” “simple trousers”). Give one concise reason and a specific example. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I have a large collection of polo shirts because I find them comfortable for exercise; for example, I usually wear a polo shirt and simple trousers when I go for a morning workout.

Sugestão: Finish sentences and avoid small errors. Combine ideas clearly: state the main point, then add a concise reason with an example. Remove trailing incomplete phrases.

Exemplo: Not really. As a dietitian I have little free time, so I shop online because it offers more variety and convenience; for instance, I can buy clothes from my phone after work.

Sugestão: Organize the answer: give a clear topic sentence, then a reason and a specific example. Avoid filler words (“umm”) and unclear phrases (“temperatures umm surface”). Correct grammar (weekends/weekdays, tired of wearing).

Exemplo: Not really. I usually wear comfortable traditional clothes, such as a kurta and pajama, both on weekdays and weekends because we live in a hot, tropical climate and light clothing is more comfortable.

Sugestão: Use correct collocations (e.g., “suit my personality,” “pick one”). Explain reasons clearly and avoid awkward phrasing (“without any kind of destruction”). Keep it natural and give one personal example.

Exemplo: I like most colours, but if I have to choose one it would be white, because it feels calm and helps me stay focused. For example, I often encourage my children to wear white for formal events because it looks neat.

× Although I appreciate all the style as well as the design of the clothes because this suits to my personality, but during my clinic hours, I love to wear comfortable clothes, especially sportswear because it is easy to move in and I feel more confident while wearing those.

✓ Although I appreciate all the styles and designs of clothes because they suit my personality, during my clinic hours I prefer to wear comfortable clothes, especially sportswear, because it is easy to move in and I feel more confident wearing them.

Words like 'style' and 'design' should be plural to match 'all'; 'suits to my personality' is incorrect—use 'suit my personality' and plural 'they' to refer back to 'styles and designs'; 'but' is redundant after 'although' so remove it; 'love to wear' can be more natural as 'prefer to wear' for context; 'while wearing those' -> 'wearing them'. Suggestions: use plural nouns when referring to multiple items, avoid combining 'although' and 'but', and use appropriate pronoun reference.

× I always prefer to wear comfortable clothes because I feel more confident and relaxed while wear them and moreover, I need not to think about my look in these casual clothes because I always look good in this attire. Moreover, I can move frequently.

✓ I always prefer to wear comfortable clothes because I feel more confident and relaxed wearing them and, moreover, I do not need to worry about my appearance in these casual clothes because I usually look good in this attire. I can also move around more easily.

'while wear them' is ungrammatical; use 'wearing them' (gerund). 'I need not to think' is wrong in present tense; use 'I do not need to worry' or 'I need not worry'. 'My look' should be 'my appearance'. 'I can move frequently' is awkward—use 'move around more easily'. Suggestions: use gerund after prepositions like 'while', use correct negative auxiliary form 'do not need', and choose natural collocations (appearance, move around).

× Definitely yes, I have huge collection of polo brand.

✓ Definitely yes, I have a huge collection of polo shirts.

Missing article 'a' before 'huge collection' and 'polo brand' is awkward; use 'polo shirts' or 'polo-brand shirts'. Suggestions: include articles before singular countable noun phrases and use correct noun ('shirts') after brand type.

× I am very much into health and moreover all the physical activities I love to do by wearing polo T-shirts and simple trouser because I feel more presentable and enthusiastic in the sports wear while doing any exercise.

✓ I am very much into fitness, and I prefer to do physical activities wearing polo T-shirts and simple trousers because I feel more presentable and enthusiastic in sportswear while exercising.

'Into health' is not natural; use 'into fitness'. Sentence is run-on and needs conjunctions and commas. 'All the physical activities I love to do by wearing' is awkward; restructure to 'I prefer to do physical activities wearing...'. 'Trouser' should be plural 'trousers'; 'sports wear' should be one word 'sportswear'. Suggestions: use natural collocations (fitness, sportswear), correct plural form, and break long run-on sentences.

× Not really being a dietitian, I hardly have time for shopping or going to the market.

✓ Not really. As a dietitian, I hardly have time for shopping or going to the market.

Original attempts to combine ideas into one clause creates clarity issues. Insert 'As a dietitian' to give reason; separate into two sentences for natural speech. Tense is present and appropriate; change improves structure.

× Most of the shopping I'm doing these days is online because it has a variety as well as a convenience that I can get at home by just scrolling some photographs, which is not possible in the.

✓ Most of the shopping I do these days is online because it offers variety and convenience; I can do it at home by just scrolling through photos, which is not possible in a market.

Use simple present 'I do' for habitual actions rather than 'I'm doing'. 'It has a variety as well as a convenience' -> 'it offers variety and convenience'. 'Scrolling some photographs' -> 'scrolling through photos'. Sentence ended abruptly 'in the.' and needs completion. Suggestions: use simple present for routines and natural prepositions 'through' with 'scrolling'.

× Not really, there is no huge difference between the clothes I wear on weekend or on the weekdays because I always choose comfort style, for example a kurta and pajama.

✓ Not really. There is no huge difference between the clothes I wear on weekends or on weekdays because I always choose comfortable styles, for example a kurta and pajama.

Use plural 'weekends' and 'weekdays'. 'Comfort style' should be 'comfortable styles'. Also split into two sentences for clarity. Suggestions: ensure plural forms for repeated time periods and use adjective 'comfortable' to describe styles.

× I never tired of why wearing these clothes because in India we are living in hot and tropical region, moreover temperatures umm surface.

✓ I never get tired of wearing these clothes because in India we live in a hot, tropical region; moreover, temperatures are high.

'I never tired of why wearing' is ungrammatical and mixes tenses; use present 'never get tired of wearing'. 'We are living' can be simplified to 'we live'. 'Hot and tropical region' needs articles and comma: 'a hot, tropical region'. The fragment 'temperatures umm surface' is unclear—replace with 'temperatures are high'. Suggestions: keep consistent present tense for general facts, remove fillers, and use clear adjective phrases.

× I think all shades suits to my personality, but if I have to pick anyone, I'll go for white because it provides peace and alertness that helps me to remain focused without any kind of destruction.

✓ I think all shades suit my personality, but if I had to pick one, I'd choose white because it gives a sense of calm and alertness that helps me remain focused without any distractions.

'Shades suits to' has subject-verb agreement and preposition errors: use 'shades suit' and no 'to'. 'If I have to pick anyone' -> 'if I had to pick one'. 'I'll go for' fine but 'I'd choose' matches conditional. 'Provides peace and alertness' -> 'gives a sense of calm and alertness'. 'Without any kind of destruction' is wrong word; use 'without any distractions'. Suggestions: match verb to plural subject, use correct conditional phrasing, and choose appropriate nouns (calm, distractions).

× Moreover, I guide my kids to wear a white dress.

✓ Moreover, I encourage my children to wear white clothes.

'Guide my kids to wear a white dress' is unnatural; use 'encourage my children' and 'white clothes' or 'a white dress' depending on number. 'Kids' is informal—'children' is more natural here. Suggestions: use appropriate verbs (encourage) and match singular/plural nouns correctly.