Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more direct and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh) and repetition, and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., "street style", "oversized shirts").

Exemplo: I prefer wearing street-style clothes, such as oversized shirts and wide pants. This style makes me feel confident and comfortable, and I think it looks cool when I read or go out with friends.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer, then add a specific reason with linking words and correct grammar. Mention how climate affects your choice and one example of comfortable clothing.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because Thailand’s hot climate makes light fabrics more practical. For example, I usually wear cotton T-shirts and loose shorts because they help me move freely and stay cool.

Sugestão: Answer directly without hesitation and avoid contradicting yourself. Use one or two sentences with clear reasons and an example. Correct sentence endings and avoid filler sounds.

Exemplo: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are the most comfortable and keep me cool in hot weather. For example, I often choose breathable cotton T-shirts for studying and going out with friends.

Sugestão: Speak more clearly and organize ideas: state a simple topic sentence, then use linking words (but, however) to contrast daily routine with special occasions. Avoid repeated words and incorrect verbs ("shoot").

Exemplo: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes on a regular day because I pick simple outfits quickly. However, for special occasions I take more time to plan and try different outfits to find the best one.

Sugestão: Provide a clear contrast between weekdays and weekends, use correct style names (street style, modern style), and give one concrete example of what you wear on each occasion. Reduce hesitations.

Exemplo: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear casual, comfortable clothes like T-shirts and jeans for university. On weekends I try different looks, such as street style with oversized jackets or a more modern dressy outfit when I go to events.

Sugestão: Give a concise topic sentence and then specific reasons with correct grammar. Avoid unclear phrases ("color of three color of natural"). Mention examples where you wear green and how it makes you feel.

Exemplo: My favorite colour is green, so I often choose green clothes. I find green calming because it reminds me of nature, for example I wear a green shirt or jacket when I want to feel relaxed and comfortable.

× Kind of coat I like to wear is, uh, St. style.

✓ The kind of coat I like to wear is street style.

The original sentence omits the definite article 'The' before 'kind' and uses unclear abbreviation 'St.' which should be 'street'. Use 'The kind of' to introduce a category. Also 'street style' is the correct noun phrase.

× It's about big, big shirt, big pants, yes.

✓ They're oversized shirts and pants.

Using 'big, big' is informal and repetitive; 'oversized' is the appropriate adjective for fashion. Also use plural 'shirts and pants' to match typical reference to garments.

× Because I think it's cool when I read it and I have a confidence when I wear in this.

✓ Because I think it's cool when I wear it and I feel confident in it.

'Read it' is incorrect contextually; likely intended 'wear it'. 'Have a confidence' is ungrammatical; use adjective 'confident' after 'feel'. Preposition 'in' should follow 'confident' when referring to clothing.

× I prefer to wear a comfortable clothes because in Thailand have a hot climate, so I come comfortable clothes.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because Thailand has a hot climate, so I choose comfortable clothes.

'A comfortable clothes' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a'. 'In Thailand have' lacks subject; add 'Thailand has'. 'Come comfortable clothes' is incorrect verb choice; use 'choose' or 'wear'.

× It makes me move the way I want and it's not.

✓ They allow me to move the way I want and are not uncomfortable.

Pronoun reference unclear ('It' vs 'They'). Clarify plural 'they' for 'clothes'. Complete the second clause 'are not uncomfortable' to make sense.

× Actually, I don't like wearing oh, oh, do you mean T-shirt? OK, so I, I, I love it.

✓ Actually, at first I wasn't sure if you meant T-shirts, but now I love them.

Use plural 'T-shirts' and match pronoun 'them'. Remove filler 'oh' and repetitive 'I'. Maintain tense coherence.

× I love to wear T-shirts really much.

✓ I really like wearing T-shirts.

'Really much' is awkward; place adverb before verb phrase: 'really like'. Use 'wearing' gerund for preference.

× It's the most comfortable type of clothing that I like because it's, it's not hot when I.

✓ They're the most comfortable type of clothing I like because they don't make me hot.

Sentence fragments and pronoun mismatches: 'It' should be 'they' for plural 'T-shirts'. Complete clause 'when I...' to 'they don't make me hot'.

× No, actually, if, uh, if, if, uh, daily, look daily 'cause I don't have, I don't you.

✓ No, actually I don't spend much time choosing clothes on a daily basis.

The original is disfluent and ungrammatical. Simplify to clear statement: 'I don't spend much time choosing clothes daily'.

× I don't spend much time for, for, for shooting, but if it's a special day, I will have a lot of time for shoot my clothes that I want to wear.

✓ I don't spend much time choosing clothes, but if it's a special day, I will spend a lot of time deciding what to wear.

'Spend time for' is incorrect; use 'spend time choosing' or 'deciding what to wear'. 'Shoot my clothes' is wrong verb; use 'deciding' or 'choosing'.

× Yes, I I like to try another style, a mini style such such as a street strike, modern strike, uh, or casual or maybe some time aware there is yeah dress.

✓ Yes, I like to try different styles, such as street style, modern style, casual, or sometimes dresses.

Replace 'another' with 'different' for variety. 'mini style' unclear; 'street strike' and 'modern strike' are incorrect—use 'street style' and 'modern style'. 'Some time aware there is yeah dress' is jumbled; interpret as 'sometimes dresses'.

× I like to wear green clothes because green is my favorite color.

✓ I like to wear green clothes because green is my favorite color.

Sentence is grammatical; no article errors. Provided here for completeness; no change needed.

× I like green because it makes me relaxing.

✓ I like green because it makes me feel relaxed.

'Makes me relaxing' is incorrect; use causative pattern 'makes me feel' plus adjective 'relaxed'.

× Comfortable is the color of three color of natural so I like it.

✓ It is a natural color, so I like it.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Simplify: 'green is a natural color' or 'it is a natural color'.

× I feel relaxing when I see them.

✓ I feel relaxed when I see it.

'Feel relaxing' is wrong; use 'feel relaxed'. 'Them' refers to clothes/colors; singular 'it' for 'green' or 'them' for 'clothes'—choose 'it' if referring to the color.