Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời ngắn gọn và rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và một vài điểm cần cải thiện: (1) Sửa lỗi động từ: dùng 'to wear' thay vì 'to wearing'. (2) Mở rộng thêm một câu chi tiết để cụ thể hóa (ví dụ: loại trang phục nào là “basic” và vì sao). (3) Dùng liên từ để nối ý nếu thêm chi tiết. Hạn chế: không quá 3-4 câu để giữ tự nhiên.

Exemplo: I prefer to wear basic clothes that make me comfortable. For example, I often choose simple T-shirts and jeans because they are easy to move in and suit my everyday activities.

Sugestão: Nên sửa cấu trúc câu để tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ 'comfortable'. (1) Chú ý ngữ pháp: 'it's not make me feel' → 'they don't make me feel'. (2) Nên mở rộng lý do cụ thể hơn và dùng liên từ (for example, when... so...). (3) Giữ tối đa 2-3 câu, tránh lặp ý.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart outfits because they allow me to move freely. For example, when I exercise or run errands, casual clothes are much more practical and they don't make me feel restricted.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và thiếu chi tiết. Dùng một câu chủ đề và thêm một câu hỗ trợ nêu lý do hoặc ví dụ. Tránh cụm từ không trang trọng như 'why not?' trong thi IELTS; thay bằng lý do rõ ràng.

Exemplo: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. I often wear a plain T-shirt with jeans for a casual look.

Sugestão: Tránh cụm từ nói chuyện thừa như 'Oh, you know' trong bài thi. Sửa ngữ pháp: 'don't waste lot of time' → 'don't waste a lot of time'. Loại bỏ lặp 'I just I'. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể (khi nào hoặc làm thế nào bạn chọn màu) để tăng tính cụ thể.

Exemplo: I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I usually stick to basic outfits. Mostly I only decide on the color of my T-shirt and jeans, so getting dressed is quick.

Sugestão: Câu thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi từ vựng 'not busy clothes' không phù hợp. Nên mở đầu trực tiếp, dùng liên từ và sửa ngữ pháp (e.g., 'I wear less formal clothes on weekends' or 'I dress up on weekends'). Thêm ví dụ cụ thể về 'dress or skirt' và khi nào bạn mặc chúng.

Exemplo: On weekdays I usually wear casual, practical clothes for work or study. On weekends I often dress up a bit and wear a dress or a skirt when I go out with friends.

Sugestão: Câu thiếu cấu trúc; 'Absolutely white and black' không chính xác ngữ pháp. Sửa: 'I like black and white.' Giải thích cụ thể hơn tại sao: ví dụ 'they are versatile' or 'they make my skin look brighter' và sửa thì: 'it makes' → 'they make'. Giữ 1-2 câu.

Exemplo: I like black and white clothes because they are versatile and easy to match. I also feel that white and black make my skin look brighter and suit many occasions.

× For me, I like to wearing basic clothes that make me comfortable.

✓ For me, I like to wear basic clothes that make me comfortable.

Incorrect use of verb + -ing after 'like' when expressing general preference: in this context 'like' should be followed by the base form 'to' + verb (to infinitive) or the gerund. More natural: 'I like to wear' or 'I like wearing'. Suggestion: use 'I like to wear' or 'I like wearing' consistently.

× I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because when I exercise it's convenient for me and it's not make me feel uncomfortable.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because when I exercise it's convenient for me and it does not make me feel uncomfortable.

Mix of contractions and verb forms: 'it's not make' is ungrammatical. After auxiliary 'do' we use base verb form. Use 'does not make' or contracted 'doesn't make' with singular subject 'it' or rephrase: 'it does not make me feel uncomfortable.' Suggestion: use correct auxiliary 'does' + base verb.

× Of course, yes, why not?

✓ Of course, yes.

This sentence is acceptable colloquially but redundant: 'Of course' or 'Yes, why not?' alone would be more natural. No strict grammatical error; consider simplifying to one affirmation.

× Oh, you know, I just wear basic clothes so I don't waste lot of time for choosing clothes. I just I choose the color of the T-shirt and the jeans.

✓ Oh, you know, I just wear basic clothes so I don't waste a lot of time choosing clothes. I just choose the color of the T-shirt and the jeans.

Missing article before 'lot' — should be 'a lot of time'. Also 'for choosing' is unnecessary; use the gerund 'choosing' without 'for'. Remove duplicate 'I'. Suggestion: 'I don't waste a lot of time choosing clothes.'

× Hmm on the weekends I wear not busy clothes anymore but I will wear dress or skirt to go out with friends.

✓ Hmm, on the weekends I don't wear busy clothes anymore, but I will wear a dress or a skirt to go out with friends.

'Not busy clothes' is unnatural and likely a false friend; use 'don't wear busy clothes' or better 'I wear more relaxed clothes'. Also articles missing before 'dress' and 'skirt' — use 'a dress or a skirt'. Suggestion: 'I wear more relaxed clothes on weekends, but I might wear a dress or a skirt to go out with friends.'

× Absolutely white and black. That color is very beautiful and it made my skin more bright.

✓ I absolutely like white and black. Those colors are very beautiful and they make my skin look brighter.

Fragment 'Absolutely white and black' lacks subject and verb. 'That color' singular is wrong for two colors; use 'those colors'. Tense 'made' should be present 'make' to match general statement. Use comparative 'brighter' not 'more bright'. Suggestion: form a full sentence: 'I absolutely like white and black. Those colors make my skin look brighter.'