Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and avoid repetition/fillers. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail using a linking word. For example mention what ‘simple’ means for you (e.g., styles or materials).

Exemplo: I prefer simple, comfortable clothes. For example, I usually wear plain cotton shirts and jeans because they’re easy to mix and feel breathable.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer and finish your supporting reason without trailing off. Use a linking word (because/so) and a specific example of activity that requires movement.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable casual clothes because they let me move easily for activities like commuting or running errands.

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and use a clearer adjective (e.g., relaxed). Add a brief specific detail about when or why you wear T-shirts.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy wearing T-shirts because they’re comfortable and relaxed; I often wear them at home or when I meet friends on weekends.

Sugestão: Structure the answer: give a direct yes/no then give precise reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., "I am picky" -> "I’m picky") and give one specific criterion you check (fit, fabric, color).

Exemplo: Yes, I spend quite a lot of time choosing clothes because I’m picky about fit and fabric; for instance, I always check the sleeve length and material before buying.

Sugestão: Answer directly and add a brief clarification about the uniform and any small differences on weekends. Use linking words like however or but if adding a contrast.

Exemplo: No, not really. Because I have to wear a uniform for work, my weekday clothes are the same; however, on weekends I choose more casual items like jeans and sneakers.

Sugestão: State the color clearly, avoid repetition, and give a specific reason why you prefer it (mood, skin tone, or how it matches other clothes). Use one linking word to connect reason.

Exemplo: I prefer pink shirts because they’re my favorite and the color makes me feel cheerful; it also goes well with neutral trousers.

× I like, I like to wear, umm, simple clothes, simple clothes. What important to me is I'm comfortable.

✓ I like to wear simple clothes. What's important to me is that I'm comfortable.

Sentence was repetitive and missing subject/verb structure: 'What important to me is' lacks 'is that'. Remove repeated fragments and add 'that' to introduce the clause for clarity. Also combine into two clear sentences.

× I prefer to wear casual, comfortable, I mean comfortable clothes because it makes me feel like I can move really without. Without being.

✓ I prefer to wear casual, comfortable clothes because they make me feel like I can move freely without being restricted.

Incorrect phrasing and sentence fragments. 'comfortable clothes' is plural so verb should be 'make' (subject-verb agreement). 'Move really without. Without being.' is ungrammatical; use adverb 'freely' and complete the idea with 'without being restricted.' Also removed repetition.

× Yes, I like I like wearing T-shirt because it makes me comfortable and also makes me feel freely.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they make me comfortable and also make me feel free.

Use plural 'T-shirts' for general statements (singular/plural issue) and match plural subject with 'make'. 'Feel freely' is incorrect; use adjective 'free' to describe a feeling. Removed repetition 'I like I like'.

× Yes, I really do need a lot of time when choosing clothes because aside from I am a picky, I also want clothes that is comfortable enough.

✓ Yes, I really need a lot of time when choosing clothes because, aside from being picky, I also want clothes that are comfortable enough.

'Apart from I am a picky' is incorrect; use 'aside from being picky'. 'Clothes' is plural, so verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Removed unnecessary 'do' for natural present-tense statement.

× No, I don't usually wear different styles in in everyday life because I am working and we have uniform.

✓ No, I don't usually wear different styles in everyday life because I work and we have a uniform.

Remove duplicate 'in'. Use simple present 'I work' rather than 'I am working' for habitual action. Use article 'a uniform' when referring to the type of clothing required. 'Everyday' as adjective is correct here, but keep phrase 'in everyday life' or better 'in my everyday life' — adjusted to 'in everyday life'.

× I always like to wear pink shirt because it is my favorite and and it is so I feel like it's it's light because of its color.

✓ I always like to wear a pink shirt because it is my favorite; I feel it looks light because of its color.

Use indefinite article 'a' before singular countable noun 'pink shirt'. Removed repeated words. Rephrased to avoid awkward 'it is so I feel like it's it's light'—use 'I feel it looks light'.