Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi từ vựng/ý nghĩa ("feels really poor" không phù hợp). Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, dùng từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: "comfortable"), giải thích ngắn gọn lý do và thêm một chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh mâu thuẫn ý và giữ tối đa 3–4 câu.

Exemplo: I usually wear T-shirts and shorts because they are very comfortable and practical. For example, on hot days I prefer breathable cotton T-shirts that keep me cool. This lets me stay active and relaxed throughout the day.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời lặp từ ("comfortable" nhiều lần) và hơi dài. Nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng liên từ để nối ý và đưa ví dụ ngắn hoặc một lý do cụ thể. Giữ trong 2–3 câu, tránh lặp từ vựng.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me move freely and feel relaxed. For example, when I study or hang out with friends I usually choose a T-shirt and jeans so I can focus on activities without worrying about my outfit.

Sugestão: Câu bị bỏ dở ở cuối và có lỗi ngữ pháp ("let me" -> "lets me"). Nên hoàn thiện ý với một ví dụ cụ thể và dùng thì đúng. Giữ tối đa 3 câu: chủ đề + lý do + ví dụ hoàn chỉnh.

Exemplo: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and let me move freely. For example, when I play football with my friends I always wear a T-shirt so I can run and jump easily.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời bị dở và có lỗi lặp từ ("on on") và ngữ pháp ("a comfortable clothes"). Nên trả lời rõ ràng: nêu tần suất, nêu điều kiện và hoàn thành ý với một ví dụ. Sử dụng cấu trúc có liên từ để nối mệnh đề.

Exemplo: Sometimes I spend a lot of time choosing clothes, but it depends on the situation. If I'm busy I usually pick a simple T-shirt and trousers, but for special events I spend more time choosing something appropriate.

Sugestão: Câu có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, trình tự từ và câu thừa/thiếu khiến ý không rõ. Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề, phân biệt rõ hai phần (weekdays vs weekends) với từ nối, và dùng ví dụ cụ thể về kiểu trang phục vào cuối. Giữ 2–3 câu.

Exemplo: Yes. On weekdays I wear my school uniform, which is simple and practical. On weekends I dress more casually or stylishly when I go out with friends so I feel more confident and attractive.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời thiếu tự tin (nhiều tiếng ngập ngừng) và lặp ý ("makes me feel"). Nên trực tiếp nêu màu yêu thích, giải thích ngắn gọn vì sao và đưa ví dụ cụ thể về khi nào mặc màu đó. Tránh "I don't know" trong phần thi; thay bằng lý do cụ thể.

Exemplo: I prefer wearing red and white because red makes me feel energetic and confident, while white looks clean and fresh. For instance, I often choose red clothes for celebrations and white for important meetings or photo events.

× I love wearing T-shirts and short pants because it feels really poor when I wear it and I feel very comfortable.

✓ I love wearing T-shirts and shorts because they feel really cool when I wear them and I feel very comfortable.

The sentence uses incorrect pronouns and singular/plural forms. 'Short pants' is better as 'shorts'. Pronoun 'it' should agree with plural noun 'T-shirts and shorts', so use 'they' and 'them'. 'Feels really poor' is incorrect collocation; likely intended 'feels really cool' or 'feel very light'. Use plural verbs/pronouns to match plural nouns.

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because they make me feel very comfortable and relaxed so I can do every activities in a comfortable way.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because they make me feel relaxed so I can do every activity comfortably.

'Doing' as gerund not needed here; 'every activities' is plural after 'every' which requires singular 'every activity'. Also adverb 'comfortably' should modify 'do'. Removed redundancy 'very comfortable and relaxed' to streamline.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because it makes me feel relaxed and let me move freely. For example, when I'm doing exercise or doing PE with my friends, I.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they make me feel relaxed and let me move freely. For example, when I'm exercising or doing PE with my friends, I can move easily.

'It makes' should be 'they make' to match plural 'T-shirts'. Use 'exercising' instead of 'doing exercise' for natural phrasing. Sentence fragment at end completed with 'I can move easily.' Ensure subject-verb agreement and complete clause.

× Yes I do but it depends on on situation because when I'm too busy I just choose a comfortable clothes like T-shirt and pants but when I'm.

✓ Yes I do, but it depends on the situation because when I'm too busy I just choose comfortable clothes like a T-shirt and pants.

Duplicate 'on on' is an error and 'depends on situation' requires 'the situation'. 'A comfortable clothes' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'comfortable clothes' or 'a comfortable outfit' or 'a T-shirt and pants'. Sentence was incomplete at the end; removed trailing fragment.

× Yes I do. On weekdays I usually wear uniform to go to school and pants or T-shirt put. On weekends I usually go usually having hanging out with my friends so I we are dressed to make me feel more confident and beautiful.

✓ Yes I do. On weekdays I usually wear a uniform to go to school. On weekends I usually hang out with my friends, so I dress to feel more confident and attractive.

Original has mixed fragments and wrong word order ('pants or T-shirt put'). 'Wear uniform' needs article 'a uniform'. 'Go usually having hanging out' is ungrammatical; use 'hang out'. 'We are dressed to make me feel' mixes subjects; change to 'I dress to feel' for clarity and correct subject-verb alignment.

× I like, uh, color for clothes because it makes me feel more confident and I love to wear red or white clothes because, uh, I don't know, but it makes me feel lucky.

✓ I like colorful clothes because they make me feel more confident, and I love to wear red or white because they make me feel lucky.

'I like, uh, color for clothes' is awkward; use 'colorful clothes'. 'It makes me' should be 'they make me' to agree with plural 'clothes'. Remove filler 'I don't know' for a cleaner response. Ensure pronoun agreement and natural adjective use.