Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. what you generally prefer), then give two specific examples (one for parties and one for the gym) using linking words (e.g. "for example", "and"). Avoid hesitation and repeated words. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g. "T-shirt", "gym clothes", "dresses").

Exemplo: I usually choose clothes based on the occasion. For parties, I prefer dresses because they make me feel elegant and confident. For the gym, I wear comfortable gym clothes such as a breathable T-shirt and trainers, so I can move freely.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear preference, then explain why using logical linking words ("because", "however"). Avoid irrelevant questions back to the examiner and reduce repetition. Use correct grammar: "I prefer casual clothes" rather than informal phrasing.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes in most situations because they help me feel relaxed and allow me to move freely. However, I will wear smart clothes for formal events or work when appearance matters.

Sugestão: Give a clear, direct answer (yes or no), then support it with specific reasons and examples. Use correct vocabulary and avoid confusing words. If you sometimes wear T-shirts, say "sometimes" and explain contexts (e.g. at home, exercising).

Exemplo: Yes, I often wear T-shirts in my daily routine because they are comfortable and suit my body shape. For example, I usually wear a T-shirt and shorts when I exercise or when I stay at home.

Sugestão: Start with a clear statement and give a specific condition and example. Use correct tense and reduce repetition. Mention how much time and what you do (try on outfits, check accessories).

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes spend a lot of time choosing clothes, especially for special events. If I have plenty of time before a party, I try on several outfits and choose accessories so I look stylish and feel confident.

Sugestão: Provide a clear direct answer then explain with specific details: why your styles are similar (e.g. staying at home) and when you change them (e.g. going out with friends). Avoid filler words and repeated phrases.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually wear different styles because I often stay at home during both weekdays and weekends. I only change my style when I go out with friends, choosing something more casual or dressy depending on the plan.

Sugestão: State your favourite colours clearly and give a specific reason for each. Make sure colour names are correct and consistent. Avoid contradictory sentences (you said black and white but then mentioned red).

Exemplo: My favourite colours are black and white, and most of my clothes are in these shades. I like black because it looks smart and slim, and I choose white because it makes me feel clean and confident.

× That's a good question. And before wearing dress because they made me feel elegant and more beautiful, especially in in the party.

✓ That's a good question. Before, I used to wear dresses because they made me feel elegant and more beautiful, especially at parties.

Original sentence has broken structure, incorrect verb tense and articles, and wrong preposition. I changed 'before wearing dress' to 'Before, I used to wear dresses' to show past habitual action (correct verb form and plural noun). 'They made me feel' is kept but 'in in the party' should be 'at parties' (correct preposition and plural). Suggestion: keep subject and verb together and use appropriate prepositions and plurals for general statements.

× Uh, for the gym, I usually wear comfortable shoes, uh, like AT shirt and also like a team gym clothes so and can I can do and.

✓ For the gym, I usually wear comfortable shoes, a T-shirt and team gym clothes so I can exercise.

Errors: missing and incorrect articles, misspelled 'T-shirt', wrong word order and extra words. Use 'a T-shirt' (indefinite article) and 'team gym clothes' without 'a' when plural. Removed redundant fragments and used 'so I can exercise' to complete the sentence.

× It's a good version, it's depend on the situation best and how best in my personality.

✓ It depends on the situation and my personality.

Original uses incorrect verb form 'it's depend' (subject-verb agreement/present tense). Simplified phrase to 'It depends' and removed redundant words 'best and how best'. Suggestion: use simple present 'depends' for general truths and keep phrases concise.

× I love to wear a casual clothes and more comfortable clothes because it's made me relax and do exercise freely.

✓ I love to wear casual, comfortable clothes because they help me relax and exercise freely.

Errors: article with plural 'a casual clothes' incorrect; 'it's made me' wrong tense and pronoun. Changed to 'casual, comfortable clothes' (adjective order) and 'they help me' for present habitual. Suggestion: do not use 'a' with plural nouns and use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to clothes.

× Wine without without restrict. Wow are you?

✓ They do not restrict my movement. How about you?

Original is unintelligible ('Wine without without restrict'). Interpreted intent: clothes should not restrict movement. Rewrote as 'They do not restrict my movement.' 'Wow are you?' likely 'How about you?' Suggestion: keep simple clauses and use standard questions for interaction.

× Actually, no, I'm sometimes wearing tissues, uh, in my, in my daily routine because it's my, it's made me feel and comfortable and dishes is no shoes to my body frame.

✓ Actually, no. I sometimes wear T-shirts in my daily routine because they make me feel comfortable and they suit my body shape.

Errors: 'I'm sometimes wearing' awkward progressive for habit—use simple present 'I sometimes wear'; 'tissues' wrong word, should be 'T-shirts'; 'it's my, it's made me feel and comfortable' incorrect pronouns and tense—use 'they make me feel comfortable'; 'dishes is no shoes to my body frame' unintelligible—interpreted as 'suit my body shape'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and correct vocabulary.

× I wear to share why and do my exercise. Uh, it's let me do freely.

✓ I wear them to be comfortable while exercising. They let me move freely.

Original misuses infinitive and gerund forms. 'I wear to share why' unclear—interpreted as 'to be comfortable'. Use 'while exercising' (gerund clause) and 'They let me move freely' for clear subject and verb. Suggestion: use gerund after prepositions and ensure subject matches plural 'them'.

× Yes I do it's depend on the situation and also time that I have.

✓ Yes, I do. It depends on the situation and the time I have.

Error: 'it's depend' wrong verb form—should be 'it depends'. Also add 'the' before 'time' when referring to a specific amount. Suggestion: use simple present 'depends' for general statements.

× If I had a plenty of time or if I if I'm is I'm gonna go to South Ebony event.

✓ If I have plenty of time or if I'm going to a special event,

Original mixes conditional structures and informal future 'gonna' and has extra words. For real conditions use present 'have'. 'South Ebony event' unclear—interpreted as 'a special event'. Suggestion: use 'have' in first conditional and avoid 'gonna' in formal speech.

× I spend a lot of my time in changing clothes and to see my clothes that make that make mine look more beautiful and appreciate like I asked stylish by myself.

✓ I spend a lot of time changing clothes and choosing outfits that make me look more beautiful and stylish.

Original has redundant words and incorrect verb forms ('in changing', 'to see my clothes', 'make that make mine'). Simplified to 'changing clothes and choosing outfits' and corrected pronoun use 'make me look'. Suggestion: use parallel gerund structures and clear object pronouns.

× Actually, no, I'm, I'm, I'm not usually wearing it because I mind my daily it also in my weekday and weekend, I have to stay at my house.

✓ Actually, no. I don't usually change my style; my weekday and weekend clothes are similar because I stay at home most of the time.

Errors: 'I'm not usually wearing it' wrong progressive; 'I mind my daily it also in my weekday and weekend' unclear. Use simple present 'I don't usually change my style' and clarify reason 'stay at home'. Suggestion: use simple present for habits and connect ideas clearly.

× So my daily, my daily clothes time are almost the same as I have to go somewhere with my friend or I have to change my style and like really, uh, such as G&M.

✓ So my everyday clothes are almost the same unless I go out with friends and need to change my style for events like parties.

Original uses awkward phrasing 'clothes time' and wrong verb agreement 'are' with unclear subject. Rewrote to 'everyday clothes are almost the same' and clarified exception. Suggestion: use 'unless' for exceptions and proper nouns for events.

× My favorite color is black and white. So my my color my color clothes are also black and white too.

✓ My favorite colors are black and white, so most of my clothes are also black and white.

Repetition and article/number mismatch: 'color' singular but two colors listed—use plural 'colors'. 'My my color my color clothes' redundant. Suggestion: avoid repetition and match singular/plural forms.

× Because white and red color is made me more hairstyle and more confident in myself.

✓ Because white and black colors make me feel more stylish and confident.

Errors: 'white and red color is made me' incorrect subject-verb agreement and wrong color (student earlier said white and black); 'more hairstyle' wrong word—should be 'more stylish'. Use plural 'colors make'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and use correct adjective 'stylish'.

× So that's why I'm I choose to wear my daily color as a white and black.

✓ So that's why I choose to wear white and black every day.

Original has extra 'I'm' and awkward phrase 'wear my daily color as a white and black'. Use simple present 'I choose' for habitual preference and 'white and black every day' for clarity. Suggestion: remove unnecessary pronouns and simplify phrasing.