Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct pronoun/verb agreement, avoid repetition, and add one specific detail. Aim for 2–3 sentences with linking words.

Exemplo: I usually wear jeans and shirts because they are comfortable and practical. For example, when I go out with friends or go shopping, I choose jeans since they let me move around easily.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer and support it with one clear reason. Remove repeated words and unclear phrases. Use a linking word to connect your reason.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they are easy to move in and help me feel relaxed. For example, I rarely attend formal presentations, so I usually choose casual outfits.

Sugestão: Answer directly, correct sentence structure, and keep to relevant details. Use a topic sentence then one supporting detail; avoid confusing references.

Exemplo: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and suit my casual lifestyle. When I hang out with friends I often pair them with shorts, which makes me feel confident and relaxed.

Sugestão: Be clear about reasons and avoid unclear or incorrect phrases. Use one clear reason and a brief example. Check pronouns and word choice for accuracy.

Exemplo: Yes, I spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because I want them to fit well and look appropriate. For example, I often pick my outfit the night before to avoid rushing in the morning.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer and a short explanation. Fix grammar and use a linking word to show contrast if needed.

Exemplo: Not really. I usually wear casual clothes both on weekdays and weekends because I prefer comfort and rarely need to dress formally.

Sugestão: State your favourite colours clearly and give specific reasons. Avoid incomplete sentences and vague phrases; finish your thoughts and use linking words.

Exemplo: I like wearing red because it complements my skin tone and makes my complexion stand out. I also wear black often because it is slimming and feels versatile for many occasions.

× For example, they usually wear them when I'm going out with friends, shopping to the mall, and going to school because they're very easy to move around and and.

✓ For example, I usually wear them when I go out with friends, go shopping at the mall, and go to school because they're very easy to move around in.

The original sentence uses 'they usually wear them' which mismatches subject: the speaker 'I' should be the subject doing the wearing (subject-verb agreement / incorrect pronoun use). Also verbs describing repeated actions should be in simple present (I usually wear; I go), and the phrase 'easy to move around' needs the preposition 'in' to complete the idea. Remove the duplicated 'and'. Suggestion: keep the subject 'I' consistent and use simple present for habitual actions, and add necessary prepositions.

× I prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes aside side wear.

✓ I prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes instead.

'Aside side wear' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'instead' or 'aside from'. This is a sentence structure/word choice error. Use 'instead' to contrast a preference. Keep the verb form 'prefer wearing' which is acceptable.

× They're very easy to move around and and I just feel like myself wearing comfortable and casual clothes and I don't usually go to presentations.

✓ They're very easy to move around in, I just feel like myself wearing comfortable and casual clothes, and I don't usually attend presentations.

Repeated 'and' and awkward clause connections make the sentence structure unclear. 'Move around' requires the preposition 'in'. 'Go to presentations' is better expressed as 'attend presentations'. Use commas or separate sentences to join coordinated clauses clearly.

× Yeah, so like wearing T-shirts because someone who goes out and hangs out with friends very often, I usually wear shorts.

✓ Yeah, I like wearing T-shirts. Because I go out and hang out with friends very often, I usually wear shorts.

Original combined fragments create a run-on and unclear meaning. Split into two sentences: one stating the preference, another giving the reason. Use consistent subject 'I' and simple present verbs for habitual actions ('go', 'hang', 'wear').

× They're very comfortable to wear and I feel confident in them.

✓ They are very comfortable to wear, and I feel confident in them.

Mainly punctuation: add a comma before 'and' to join two independent clauses. This improves clarity. No major grammar type from list applied beyond sentence structure.

× Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I don't want to be with us and I'll fit your computer, so we tend to be picky with my clothes.

✓ Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I don't want clothes that don't fit me, so I tend to be picky about my clothes.

This sentence contains garbled phrases ('be with us', 'fit your computer') and mixed pronouns. Clarify meaning: speaker wants clothes that fit, so they are picky. Use consistent first-person singular pronouns ('I', 'me') and correct preposition 'about' with 'picky'.

× For example, I usually choose my clothes the night before.

✓ For example, I usually choose my clothes the night before.

This sentence is correct. It uses simple present to describe a habitual action, which fits the context, so no change is needed.

× Not really, weekdays usually wear casual clothes and the same goes for weekends.

✓ Not really. On weekdays I usually wear casual clothes, and the same goes for weekends.

Original lacks a subject for 'usually wear' leading to subject-verb agreement/structure issue. Add 'I' as the subject and 'on weekdays' as the time expression. Keep simple present for habitual actions.

× I'm not really the type of person or other type styles like smart clothes.

✓ I'm not really the type of person who wears other styles like smart clothes.

Original misuses conjunctions/phrases and lacks a relative clause. Use 'who wears' to link 'type of person' with the action. 'Other type styles' is incorrect word order; use 'other styles'.

× I really like wearing red because it suits my ink tone.

✓ I really like wearing red because it suits my skin tone.

'Ink tone' is a wrong word choice; likely intended 'skin tone'. This is a vocabulary/word choice error categorized under adjectives/adverbs issues. Use the correct noun 'skin' to describe complexion.

× It makes me, it makes my skin complexion stand out and glow.

✓ It makes my complexion stand out and glow.

Original repeats clause and uses redundant words 'skin complexion'. Simplify to 'my complexion'. Remove repetition and use a single clear clause.

× Aside from that, I also like wearing black because I'm a bit chubby and it makes me.

✓ Aside from that, I also like wearing black because I'm a bit chubby and it makes me look slimmer.

Original ends abruptly 'it makes me' without object. Complete the idea: 'it makes me look slimmer' explains why black is preferred. Use clear clause completion to avoid sentence fragment.