Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence naming the styles you prefer (e.g. streetwear, classic/"old money"), then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Reduce filler words (umm, you know) and avoid vague phrases. Aim for 2–3 sentences total.

Exemplo: I prefer streetwear and a classic 'old money' style. For example, I like simple, well-cut trousers and blazers because they look elegant and are easy to mix and match.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons using linking words (because, so, for example). Reduce repetition and filler words. Keep sentences concise and varied.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they allow me to move freely and feel relaxed. For example, I often wear soft joggers and loose shirts so I can sit, walk, or travel without discomfort.

Sugestão: Start with a direct statement, then support it with specific, well-structured reasons and an example. Correct grammar (e.g. 'I wear T-shirts every day') and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to style. For instance, a plain T-shirt pairs well with jeans or a jacket for a quick, casual outfit.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer, then add one or two specific reasons. Fix grammar (e.g. 'I don't spend a lot of time') and avoid vague or unfinished sentences. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so'.

Exemplo: No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I own only a few items and prefer simple outfits. So I usually pick whatever is clean and comfortable without thinking too much.

Sugestão: Provide a clear yes/no and explain with specific examples. Avoid rambling and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to show contrast (e.g. 'but', 'however') and give one concrete example of what you wear on weekdays vs weekends.

Exemplo: Not really — it depends on my plans. For example, I usually wear smart-casual clothes for workdays, but on weekends I prefer cuffed jeans and a relaxed T-shirt for comfort.

Sugestão: Answer directly naming the colour you prefer, then briefly explain why with a specific reason or example. Avoid subjective words like 'messy' without explanation and reduce filler words. Use one linking word (e.g. 'because' or 'whereas').

Exemplo: I prefer black because it looks smart and pairs well with accessories like gold jewelry. I used to like red, but now I find black more versatile and elegant.

× Umm, the kind of clothes that I like to wear is umm, St. wear.

✓ Umm, the kind of clothes that I like to wear are streetwear.

Subject 'the kind of clothes' is plural, so verb should be 'are' (sentence structure/subject-verb agreement). Also 'St. wear' seems to be an abbreviation/misspelling; replace with 'streetwear' for clarity. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs and use clear vocabulary.

× And one more thing that I really love is umm, you know, the old money style that it looks true.

✓ One more thing I really love is the 'old money' style because it looks authentic.

The clause 'that it looks true' is ungrammatical; use a clear subordinate clause 'because it looks authentic.' Remove redundant pronoun 'it' after 'that.' Suggestion: use conjunctions like 'because' to give reason and choose precise adjectives like 'authentic.'

× So gentlemen and you know, yeah, this is very amazing.

✓ I think it looks very elegant and gentlemanly; it's really appealing.

Fragment 'So gentlemen and you know' is unclear and lacks proper structure. Replace with a complete sentence describing the style. Suggestion: avoid filler phrases and form full sentences: subject + verb + complement.

× Uh for me I would prefer to wear comfortable clothes because I am with this comfortable I can feel umm better and I can move better, walk better and doing a lot of thing like sit, lay down and something like that.

✓ For me, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because when I am comfortable I feel better and can move, walk, sit and lie down more easily.

Use present simple 'prefer' for habitual preference instead of 'would prefer' in this context (modal use). 'I am with this comfortable' is wrong preposition/structure; use 'when I am comfortable.' 'Doing a lot of thing' should be parallel verbs: 'can move, walk, sit and lie down.' Suggestion: keep tense consistent and parallel verb forms.

× Umm, I think I really do because I wearing T-shirt every days because it's easy and it fits me so well with my body and yeah, umm, it is really good.

✓ Umm, I think I do because I wear T-shirts every day; they're easy and fit my body well.

Use present simple 'wear' for habitual action instead of 'wearing.' 'Every days' should be singular 'every day.' 'T-shirt' plural is 'T-shirts.' 'It fits me so well with my body' is awkward; use 'fit my body well.' Suggestion: use present simple for habits and correct pluralization.

× I don't think I spending a lot of time on choosing clothes because, uh, I really don't have much clothes in my room and, you know, in my city people don't really like styling.

✓ I don't think I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I don't have many clothes in my room, and in my city people don't really like styling.

'I spending' is incorrect; use present simple 'I spend.' 'Much clothes' should be 'many clothes.' Remove unnecessary preposition 'on' after 'time' when followed by gerund 'choosing' (both 'spend time choosing' or 'spend a lot of time on choosing' — prefer 'spend a lot of time choosing'). Suggestion: use correct verb form and quantifier 'many' for countable nouns.

× So yeah, just. I just choose what I want to wear and they're really.

✓ So yeah, I just choose what I want to wear; it's simple.

Fragmented sentence and unclear 'they're really.' Replace with a complete thought. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and finish ideas.

× Uh, if it is depend on, umm, what I want to wear is, uh, it's not about the weekday and weekend.

✓ It depends on what I want to wear; it's not about weekdays or weekends.

'If it is depend on' is incorrect; use 'it depends on.' Use plural 'weekdays or weekends.' Suggestion: use correct idiomatic verb 'depends on' and parallel nouns.

× We sub you, you know that sometime I want to wear, umm, the cuffed up all.

✓ Sometimes I want to wear my sleeves or pants cuffed up.

Original contains unintelligible fragments 'We sub you' and 'the cuffed up all.' Replace with clear phrasing 'Sometimes I want to wear my sleeves or pants cuffed up.' Suggestion: express clothing details clearly.

× So I just wear today or tomorrow.

✓ So I might wear them today or tomorrow.

Add modal 'might' to indicate possibility and plural 'them' to refer to the clothes. Suggestion: use modals for possibility and clear pronouns.

× But if on if I want to wear.

✓ But if I want to wear them, I will.

Sentence fragment; complete the conditional thought. Suggestion: finish conditional clauses with result clauses.

× Uh, the color that I like is umm, black, but I used to like red, but now I think red is really messy, kind of messy.

✓ The color I like is black. I used to like red, but now I think red looks messy.

Mostly fine; change 'red is really messy' to 'red looks messy' to describe appearance. Suggestion: use 'looks' when commenting on appearance.

× And I think black look more gentleman with gold.

✓ And I think black looks more gentlemanly with gold.

Subject-verb agreement: 'black' requires 'looks.' 'Gentleman' used as adjective is incorrect; use adverb/adjective 'gentlemanly.' Suggestion: use correct verb form and choose proper adjective 'gentlemanly.'