Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clear and use correct nouns; explain briefly why the clothing is comfortable with specific details (fabric, fit, breathability). Avoid vague or incorrect terms like “Magic room.” Keep to 2–3 sentences and link ideas with a reason word (because/so).

Exemplo: I like to wear loose cotton shirts because they are breathable and keep me cool in Malaysia's humid weather. Because they fit comfortably, I can move freely and feel relaxed when I go out.

Sugestão: Make one clear topic sentence stating preference, then give a concise, specific reason. Avoid repetition and incomplete clauses. Use linking words like because or so to connect reason and examples. Mention concrete activities.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they let me move freely. For example, I can run, walk, or cycle without feeling restricted.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use correct sentence structure (subject + verb). Give one or two specific reasons and an example. Avoid odd phrasing like “help me to walk everywhere.”

Exemplo: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are versatile and easy to pair with different bottoms. For instance, a plain T-shirt works well for exercising or casual outings.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and then two specific supporting points using linking words (because, so, which). Avoid repeating the same reason twice. Mention what you consider (style, occasion, fit).

Exemplo: Yes, I spend some time choosing clothes because the right outfit boosts my confidence for meetings or social events. I usually consider the fit and the occasion so I feel comfortable and look appropriate.

Sugestão: Be specific about differences between weekday and weekend clothing. Organize into one sentence stating the contrast and one sentence giving clear details. Avoid hesitations and repetition. Use linking words such as while or whereas.

Exemplo: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smart-casual clothes like collared shirts and chinos for work, whereas on weekends I choose more relaxed items such as T-shirts and shorts for comfort.

Sugestão: State your preferred colour clearly and give 1–2 specific reasons. Avoid confusing or incorrect phrases (e.g., ‘make my screen bright’). Use linking words (because/so) and describe feelings or occasions associated with the colour.

Exemplo: I prefer cream-coloured clothes because they give a calm, elegant look and are easy to match with other items. Wearing cream makes me feel more confident for casual and semi-formal occasions.

× I like to wear Magic room because it's very comfortable especially with the weather in Malaysia.

✓ I like to wear Magic Room clothes because they are very comfortable, especially in Malaysia's weather.

The original uses a proper noun 'Magic room' unclear and singular 'it' for clothing. Use plural 'clothes' and plural pronoun 'they'. Also use 'in Malaysia's weather' or 'in the weather in Malaysia' for correct prepositional phrase.

× Other than that, it also makes me feel safe whenever I am.

✓ Other than that, they also make me feel safe whenever I wear them.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect for 'clothes'; use 'they'. The sentence fragment 'whenever I am' is incomplete—add 'wear them' to clarify the action.

× For me, I more prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because it can.

✓ For me, I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because they are more practical.

The phrase 'more prefer' is ungrammatical; 'prefer' is enough. 'It can.' is a fragment; replace with a clear reason. 'They are more practical' fits context and corrects pronoun and verb agreement.

× Because it can allow me to do lots of activity, especially just as running or walking.

✓ They allow me to do many activities, especially running or walking.

Starting with 'Because' as a separate sentence creates a fragment. Use a complete sentence and correct noun 'activities' (plural) and remove 'just as'.

× Yes I do wearing T-shirt, very suitable for every purpose of activity.

✓ Yes, I do wear T-shirts; they are very suitable for all kinds of activities.

'Do wearing' is incorrect; use 'do wear'. Use plural 'T-shirts' and 'all kinds of activities' for natural phrasing. Add punctuation for clarity.

× Other than that it also can help me to walk everywhere.

✓ They also help me move around easily.

Use 'they' for clothes and a more natural verb 'move around' instead of 'walk everywhere'. Remove unnecessary 'to'.

× Yes I do because for me choosing the right clothes is very important because it can determine the confidence in yourself.

✓ Yes, I do, because choosing the right clothes is very important; it can determine your confidence.

Redundant 'because' should be reduced; 'confidence in yourself' is unnatural in this context—use 'your confidence'. Keep present tense 'is' and 'can determine' consistent.

× Other than that, it also can makes me to be comfortable whenever I meet others.

✓ Also, they can make me feel comfortable when I meet others.

'It' should be 'they' for clothes. 'Can makes' is incorrect; use 'can make'. Remove unnecessary 'to be'. Use 'feel comfortable' for natural phrasing.

× Yes I do. Usually during the weekdays I tend to wear something that more, umm needs or. And comfortable, but during the weekday I tend to wear something that more.

✓ Yes. Usually on weekdays I tend to wear clothes that are more functional and comfortable, but on weekends I tend to wear something different.

Replace 'during the weekdays' with 'on weekdays'. The original is fragmented and repetitive; clarify contrast between weekdays and weekends. Use 'are more functional and comfortable' for correct structure.

× I like to wear clothes with cream colour for me because green colour give clam vibe.

✓ I like to wear clothes in cream because green gives a calm vibe.

Use 'in cream' or 'cream-colored' rather than 'with cream colour'. 'Green colour give' needs subject-verb agreement: 'green gives'. 'clam' is a typo for 'calm'.

× Other than that it also helped me to be confident because I because it can make my screen bright.

✓ Also, cream helps me feel more confident because it brightens my appearance.

Tense inconsistency: 'helped' should be 'helps' to match present habitual action. Remove repeated 'because I because'. 'Make my screen bright' is incorrect—probably meant 'brighten my appearance' or 'make me look brighter'. Use clear verb 'brightens'.