Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and small hesitations.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable clothing. For example, I usually wear T-shirts and track pants at home because they let me move freely, but at work I wear smart-casual attire such as chinos and a button-down shirt.

Sugestão: Give a direct preference first, avoid fillers and repetition, then contrast with a brief reason or condition using a linking word (e.g., however, but).

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me relax; however, I wear smart-casual or business clothes at work to look professional.

Sugestão: Structure the answer: state your liking, then give one clear, specific example. Remove hesitations and correct tense/grammar (e.g., "I collect T-shirts from events").

Exemplo: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. I collect souvenir T-shirts from events — for instance, I bought a band T-shirt at a concert last year and I often wear those casually.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct short answer, then offer a concise reason using linking words (e.g., because). Fix awkward phrasing and avoid word repetition.

Exemplo: Not really. I usually pick the first suitable outfit I see because I don't care much about fashion and prefer to save time.

Sugestão: Answer directly, avoid filler and repetition. Use linking words (e.g., during weekdays vs at weekends) and give one concise contrast with specific clothing examples.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. During weekdays I wear smart-casual clothes such as shirts and chinos for work, but at weekends I wear track pants and T-shirts so I can relax comfortably.

Sugestão: Start with a clear statement of preferred colours, then briefly explain the reason with natural phrasing. Avoid awkward metaphors like "be a shadow of the people."

Exemplo: I prefer black and gray because they’re easy to match and don’t attract attention; I like to blend in and keep my outfits low-key.

× I like to wear comfortable clothes. When I go to work, I have to wear some kinds of casual business clothes, but other than that I really like to wear something comfortable, such as trainings and just T-shirts like that.

✓ I like to wear comfortable clothes. When I go to work, I have to wear casual business clothes, but other than that I really like to wear something comfortable, such as training clothes and T-shirts.

'Some kinds of' is wordy and awkward; 'casual business clothes' already covers plurality. 'Trainings' is incorrect in English for exercise clothing; use 'training clothes' or 'tracksuits'. Use consistent plural 'T-shirts'. Use concise noun phrases. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I prefer to wear comfortable clothes and relax relaxing clothes such as uh uh, track shirts, track suits. But I do have to wear smart casual, smart business when I go to work.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, relaxed clothes such as track shirts and track suits. But I do have to wear smart-casual or smart business attire when I go to work.

Use adjective form 'relaxed' not 'relax relaxing'. Combine adjectives with commas and hyphenate 'smart-casual'. Use 'attire' for formal clothing. Remove filler 'uh uh'. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× I do like wearing T-shirts and I have a little habit to collect T-shirts from from every event I went.

✓ I do like wearing T-shirts and I have a small habit of collecting T-shirts from every event I attend.

Use 'habit of doing' rather than 'habit to do'. Remove duplicated 'from'. Use present tense 'attend' to match habitual action rather than past 'went'. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× For example, I went to the OSS concert recently, happened last year and I bought a like merchandise T-shirts from that and that is my kinds of little hobby.

✓ For example, I went to the OSS concert last year and I bought a merchandise T-shirt there; collecting shirts is a small hobby of mine.

'Recently, happened last year' is redundant and inconsistent; choose 'last year'. 'A like merchandise T-shirts' is ungrammatical; use 'a merchandise T-shirt' or 'merchandise T-shirts'. 'My kinds of little hobby' should be 'a small hobby of mine'. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× Not really, I just wear what I see at the first time. I don't want to spend much time in closing because I do not really care about clothing and fashion.

✓ Not really, I just wear what I see at first. I don't want to spend much time on choosing clothes because I do not really care about clothing and fashion.

Use 'at first' not 'at the first time'. Use 'spend time on choosing clothes' or 'spend time choosing clothes' rather than 'in closing'. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× Yeah, I definitely wear different style of clothes and weekdays and weekends, like I said before, in the weekdays I try to use, uh, try to wear business schedule at clear, But in the weekend I try to wear the comfortable, the comfort as comfortable as possible because I like to, I would like to chill and relax in the weekend.

✓ Yeah, I definitely wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends. Like I said before, on weekdays I try to wear business attire, but at the weekend I try to be as comfortable as possible because I like to chill and relax then.

Multiple issues: 'different style' should be plural 'different styles'; use 'on weekdays' not 'and weekdays'; remove filler 'uh' and unclear phrase 'business schedule at clear' and replace with 'business attire'. Use 'at the weekend' or 'on the weekend' consistently and 'as comfortable as possible'. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I like to wear clothes with black or Gray because I just want to blend in with among people and I don't want to get attention from people. I just want to be a shadow of the people.

✓ I like to wear black or gray clothes because I just want to blend in with other people and I don't want to attract attention. I just want to be like a shadow among people.

Use 'black or gray clothes' order; 'blend in with other people' is correct collocation, not 'with among people'. Use 'attract attention' instead of 'get attention from people'. 'Be a shadow of the people' is unnatural; use 'be like a shadow among people'. Grammar problem type ID: 11