Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and filler words; give one clear topic sentence then a brief specific detail. Use a linking word to introduce the example.

Exemplo: I usually prefer casual clothes because they make me feel comfortable and relaxed. For example, I often wear jeans and T-shirts when I go out with friends because they are practical and easy to move in.

Sugestão: Clarify the context (avoid saying casual for formal events if you mean everyday). Reduce fillers, correct word choice, and use linking words to explain why.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes for everyday occasions because they help me feel relaxed. However, I will choose smart clothes for truly formal events, such as weddings, to show respect.

Sugestão: Use correct vocabulary and clear sentences. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g. “favorite sport in clothes”) and remove fillers. Give one reason and a short example.

Exemplo: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially oversized ones, because they are comfortable and suit my style. For instance, I often pair an oversized T-shirt with slim jeans for a relaxed look.

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and fix grammar. Start with a direct topic sentence, then explain exceptions with a linking word and a brief reason.

Exemplo: Usually I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I'm quite easygoing. However, I do take more time when choosing outfits for formal events like weddings to ensure I look appropriate.

Sugestão: Use correct labels (jeans and T-shirts are casual, not formal). Give a clear contrast with linking words and correct vocabulary for weekend clothes.

Exemplo: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smart-casual clothes for work, such as chinos or a neat shirt, while at the weekend I switch to more relaxed outfits like tracksuits or hoodies for comfort.

Sugestão: Reduce fillers and correct grammar. State a clear preference, give a reason and a brief example using linking words.

Exemplo: I'm not very picky and will wear many colors, but I tend to choose black most often because it looks stylish and is easy to match. For example, I often buy black jeans and jackets because they go with everything.

× Usually I like to wear casual clothes because because they make me feel comfortable and relax.

✓ Usually I like to wear casual clothes because they make me feel comfortable and relaxed.

The adverb 'relaxed' (past participle used as an adjective) should follow 'feel' to describe a state. Also there is a duplicated 'because'. Suggestion: remove the repeated word and use 'relaxed' to describe how the clothes make you feel.

× Umm, for instance, I prefer to wear jeans and T-shirts.

✓ For instance, I prefer wearing jeans and T-shirts.

After 'prefer' it is common to use the gerund (verb + -ing) to indicate a general habit. Both 'prefer to wear' and 'prefer wearing' are acceptable, but using 'prefer wearing' makes the sentence flow better for general preferences.

× Usually I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes, especially for main events and formal dates 'cause they make me feel, uh, relaxed and they're easy to move on.

✓ Usually I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes, especially for casual occasions; for major events and formal dates I choose smarter clothes, because comfortable clothes make me feel relaxed and are easy to move in.

The phrase 'for main events' is unnatural; use 'major events' or 'formal occasions'. 'Move on' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'move in' after 'easy to'. Also the sentence mixed ideas: separate preference for casual clothes and choice for formal events for clarity.

× Yeah, the T-shirts are my favorite sport in clothes, especially the oversized T-shirts.

✓ Yeah, T-shirts are my favorite type of clothing, especially oversized ones.

'Favorite sport in clothes' is incorrect. Use 'favorite type of clothing' or 'favorite clothing item'. Also 'oversized T-shirts' can be shortened to 'oversized ones' for naturalness.

× They make me feel comfortable and they suit me well. The man they give me. Good, uh.

✓ They make me feel comfortable and suit me well; they also make me feel good.

The original contains fragmented and unclear sentences ('The man they give me.'). Likely intended meaning: clothes make the speaker feel good. Recast into a single coherent sentence and replace fragments.

× Usually I don't. Usually I don't I'm I'm easy one, especially in clothes.

✓ Usually I don't. I'm an easygoing person, especially when it comes to clothes.

The phrase 'I'm I'm easy one' is ungrammatical. Use 'I'm an easygoing person' to describe personality. Also clarifies context with 'when it comes to clothes.'

× But sometimes I spend a lot of time especially when I have to got some clothes for a formal date or a wedding or main event.

✓ But sometimes I spend a lot of time choosing clothes, especially when I have to get clothes for a formal date, a wedding, or another major event.

'Have to got' is incorrect; use 'have to get' or 'need to get'. Also 'spend a lot of time' should be followed by a gerund 'choosing clothes'. Replace 'main event' with 'major event' for naturalness.

× So I should be more strict in closest.

✓ So I should be more strict when choosing clothes.

'Strict in closest' is ungrammatical. Likely intended 'strict about clothes' or 'strict when choosing clothes'. Use 'when choosing clothes' for clarity.

× Yes I do, usually in the weekdays I wear a formal outfit like jeans and T-shirts but in the weekend I change my style to an on formal outfit like track suits and uh this styled on.

✓ Yes, I do. Usually on weekdays I wear smart-casual outfits like jeans and T-shirts, but on weekends I change my style to informal outfits like tracksuits and similar styles.

Use 'on weekdays' and 'on weekends' (preposition + plural). 'A formal outfit like jeans and T-shirts' is contradictory; 'smart-casual' fits better. 'On formal' is wrong; use 'informal'. 'Track suits' should be 'tracksuits'.

× Actually I'm not a picky one, especially in Clovis.

✓ Actually I'm not picky, especially about clothes.

'Picky one' is informal but acceptable; more natural is 'not picky'. 'In Clovis' seems to be a misspelling of 'clothes' or 'Clovis' (a place). Context shows 'clothes' is intended; use 'about clothes'.

× I wear any color but usually I tend to black colors. I really like it. Like it's making me feel umm, stylish or something like that.

✓ I wear any color, but I usually tend to choose black. I really like it because it makes me feel stylish.

'Tend to black colors' is incorrect; say 'tend to choose black' or 'prefer black.' 'Like it's making me feel' is awkward; use 'because it makes me feel' to explain the reason.