Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Reduce repetition and organize into a clear topic sentence plus one or two supporting details. Use linking words (for example, "because" and "but") correctly and avoid filler words. Also correct small grammatical slips ("and easy" → "at ease").

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable, breathable fabrics at home because they help me relax and sleep, especially when I read in bed. However, when I go out I usually wear smarter clothes to look more presentable.

Sugestão: Keep the clear contrast but vary vocabulary and streamline sentences. Use a concise topic sentence and one supporting reason for each choice. Avoid repeating the same phrase "it makes me" too often.

Exemplo: It depends: at home I usually wear loose, breathable T-shirts because they let me study comfortably in bed; when I'm outside I choose smart T-shirts with jeans to give a more professional impression.

Sugestão: Avoid hesitations and colloquial fillers like "I mean" or questions mid-answer. Give one clear statement with a brief reason. Use consistent tense and vocabulary.

Exemplo: Yes, I do like wearing T-shirts. At home I choose loose, breathable ones for comfort when I'm reading in bed, and I also wear fitted T-shirts outside because they are versatile and easy to style.

Sugestão: Make sentences grammatically correct and more precise: use "choose" not "to choose" and replace vague phrases like "put all my best" with specific actions ("take more time to coordinate my outfit").

Exemplo: Not usually: at home I quickly choose comfortable clothes to relax. For going out I spend more time coordinating my outfit so I look neat and professional.

Sugestão: Good structure and specific examples. Improve by correcting small plurality/date errors ("at weekend" → "at the weekend") and shorten slightly to avoid redundancy. Add a linking phrase like "for example" to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes. For example, on weekdays I wear business casual clothes such as shirts and chinos for work, while at the weekend I relax in casual clothes like T-shirts and even pajamas.

Sugestão: Clarify and correct grammar ("refresh" → "refreshing"). Avoid contradictory ideas without explanation (black at home sounds odd as "professional"); give a reason why each color fits the situation. Keep it concise and natural.

Exemplo: It depends on the situation. At home I often wear black because it feels simple and comfortable, while outside I prefer white clothes because they feel bright and refreshing.

× they make me feel more relaxed and and easy

✓ they make me feel more relaxed and at ease

The phrase 'and easy' is incorrect; the idiomatic expression is 'at ease'. Also there is a duplicated 'and'. Use the adjective phrase 'at ease' to express comfort. Suggestion: replace 'and and easy' with 'at ease'.

× Especially because of the fact that I I read when I'm in bed but when I'm outside I wear something smart

✓ Especially because I read when I'm in bed, but when I'm outside I wear something smart

There is a duplicated pronoun 'I I' and an unnecessary phrase 'because of the fact that'. Simplify to 'because I read' or just 'Especially because I read'. Also add a comma before 'but' to join contrasting clauses.

× When I am at home, I prefer to wear loose T-shirts or breathable fabrics because it makes me more relaxed when I'm in bed studying

✓ When I am at home, I prefer to wear loose T-shirts or breathable fabrics because they make me more relaxed when I'm studying in bed

Subject 'T-shirts or breathable fabrics' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' rather than 'makes'. Also move 'in bed' to 'studying in bed' for natural word order.

× But when I'm outside, I prefer to put on smart T-shirts and jeans because it makes me look more professional

✓ But when I'm outside, I prefer to put on smart T-shirts and jeans because they make me look more professional

The subject 'T-shirts and jeans' is plural; use 'they make' instead of 'it makes'. Use a plural verb to agree with the plural subject.

× Honestly it depends. When I'm inside the house I prefer to wear loose T-shirts. I mean something more breathable because it gives me comfort when I'm in bed, but when I'm outside? Yes, I like wearing T-shirts

✓ Honestly, it depends. When I'm inside the house I prefer to wear loose T-shirts, something more breathable because they give me comfort when I'm in bed. But when I'm outside, yes, I like wearing T-shirts

Change 'it gives me comfort' to 'they give me comfort' to agree with plural 'T-shirts'. Add commas for clarity and smooth sentence flow. Replace the fragment 'I mean something more breathable' with a single clause 'something more breathable' to avoid awkwardness.

× When I'm home I don't spend much time to pick or to choose my clothes

✓ When I'm home I don't spend much time picking or choosing my clothes

After 'spend time' we use the gerund form, not the infinitive. Use 'picking' or 'choosing' rather than 'to pick' or 'to choose'.

× I just pick something that makes me more comfortable and more relaxed when I'm in bed

✓ I just pick something that makes me more comfortable and relaxed when I'm in bed

Using both 'more comfortable and more relaxed' is redundant; 'more' can be applied once. 'More comfortable and relaxed' is more concise and natural.

× But when I'm going out I put all my best to look more neat and professional

✓ But when I'm going out I do my best to look neater and more professional

Use the common collocation 'do my best' instead of 'put all my best'. Also use comparative 'neater' and 'more professional' for correct adjective forms and parallel structure.

× On weekdays, I prefer to wear smart or business casual clothes for work like shirts and chinos, but at weekend I prefer casual comfortable clothes such as T-shirts and pajamas when I'm relaxing

✓ On weekdays, I prefer to wear smart or business-casual clothes for work, like shirts and chinos, but at the weekend I prefer casual, comfortable clothes such as T-shirts and pajamas when I'm relaxing

Add hyphen in 'business-casual', add 'the' before 'weekend' (British English) or 'on weekends' (American). Add commas to separate adjectives 'casual, comfortable'.

× When I am at home, I prefer to wear black because it makes me feel more relaxed and comfortable and more professional

✓ When I am at home, I prefer to wear black because it makes me feel more relaxed, comfortable, and even more professional

Use commas to separate items in a list and streamline phrasing. Adding 'even' clarifies the increase in professionalism; remove repeated 'and'.

× But when I am outside, I prefer to wear white because it's energizing and refresh

✓ But when I am outside, I prefer to wear white because it's energizing and refreshing

'Refresh' is a verb; the intended adjective is 'refreshing'. Use 'refreshing' to describe how the color feels.