Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but a bit repetitive (mentioning 'comfortable' twice). Add one specific detail to enrich the answer and use a linking phrase to connect ideas. Keep it concise (under 5 sentences).

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable clothes such as jeans and a T-shirt because I'm often on the move. For example, I like breathable fabrics that let me walk around the city without feeling restricted.

Sugestão: Good direct response and reason given. Improve by starting with a clear topic sentence (e.g., 'I prefer casual clothes') and add a specific detail about commuting (how long or mode) with a linking word. Avoid repeating 'comfortable'.

Exemplo: I prefer casual clothes because I commute by subway for an hour each day. Therefore, I choose loose-fitting items and practical shoes to stay comfortable on crowded trains.

Sugestão: Short and natural answer. To improve, combine into one coherent statement and add a brief specific reason or example of how you style T-shirts for work using a linking word.

Exemplo: Yes, T-shirts are my go-to for work; I usually pair them with a blazer for a smart-casual look, which keeps me comfortable while still appearing professional.

Sugestão: Answer is relevant but slightly wordy and repeats ideas. Start with a clear topic sentence ('No, I don't') then give one specific detail (e.g., how long it takes or a routine) and use a linking word to clarify the process.

Exemplo: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes. Usually I decide within a few minutes by imagining the outfit and picking the simplest combination I own.

Sugestão: Clear contrast and good structure. Improve by tightening language (use 'semi-formal') and adding a specific example of weekday vs weekend items with a linking word to make the comparison smoother.

Exemplo: Yes, I dress differently: on weekdays I wear smart-casual items like chinos and a shirt for work, whereas on weekends I prefer sweatpants and hoodies to relax at home.

Sugestão: You answer the question but the phrase 'I am in Marana' is unclear and the explanation is slightly informal. Start with a topic sentence about preferring darker colours, then give a specific reason (e.g., skin tone, practicality) and use a linking word. Avoid vague or irrelevant location references.

Exemplo: I prefer darker colours such as maroon, brown and black because they suit my skin tone and hide stains better. For instance, I rarely buy white shirts since they show dirt easily.

× I prefer clothes that are comfortable like a pair of jeans and T-shirt because I'm always on the go and I like to move freely and comfortably.

✓ I prefer clothes that are comfortable, like a pair of jeans and a T-shirt, because I'm always on the go and I like to move freely and comfortably.

Missing article before 'T-shirt' and missing comma for clarity. Add 'a' before 'T-shirt' because singular countable nouns require an article. Also add a comma after 'comfortable' to separate clauses for readability.

× Yes, I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because as someone who always commute to work, I really need to be comfortable in what I wear.

✓ Yes, I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because, as someone who always commutes to work, I really need to be comfortable in what I wear.

Subject-verb agreement: 'who' refers to 'someone' (singular), so the verb should be 'commutes' (third person singular). Also add commas around the introductory phrase 'as someone who always commutes to work' for clarity.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. That is my go to outfit for everyday work. I just top it off with a blazer and that's it.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. That is my go-to outfit for everyday work. I just top it off with a blazer and that's it.

Compound adjective 'go-to' should be hyphenated when used before a noun. No article error per se but hyphenation improves correctness. 'Everyday' is correct as one word meaning ordinary; keep as 'everyday work'.

× I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because first I don't have a lot of clothes to choose from and I prefer to run the outfit in my mind and then choose what I will wear.

✓ I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because, first, I don't have a lot of clothes to choose from, and I prefer to run the outfit through my mind and then choose what I will wear.

Add commas for clarity around 'first'. Use the phrasal verb 'run through (in my mind)' rather than 'run' alone; 'run the outfit in my mind' is non-idiomatic. Structure otherwise fine.

× Yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends because on weekdays I go to work so I wear casual to a semi formal clothes. Then on weekends I just stay at home so I prefer wearing very comfortable and relaxed outfits.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends because on weekdays I go to work, so I wear casual to semi-formal clothes. Then on weekends I just stay at home, so I prefer wearing very comfortable and relaxed outfits.

Remove the article 'a' before 'semi-formal clothes' because 'clothes' is plural. Hyphenate 'semi-formal' as a compound adjective. Add commas for clarity.

× I am in Marana so I prefer clothes that are darker in color like maroon, brown and black. That is usually the color of most of my clothes because I don't think the lighter ones like whites actually suit.

✓ I am in Marana, so I prefer clothes that are darker in color, like maroon, brown, and black. Those are usually the colors of most of my clothes because I don't think the lighter ones, like white, actually suit me.

Add commas for clarity. 'That' should be 'Those' to refer to plural 'colors'. Use 'colors' plural. Use 'white' (not 'whites') when referring to the color in general, and include the object 'me' after 'suit' because 'suit' is transitive here ('suit me').