Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, you know), and use accurate phrases (in summer, I wear lighter clothes). Add one specific detail about fabric or style and limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I usually wear a nice T-shirt and shorts in summer because the weather in my country is very hot. I prefer cotton T-shirts because they are breathable and comfortable for daytime activities.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear choice, then give a reason. Fix contradictions (you said "comfortable" then "uncomfortable"). Use linking words (because, when) and one supporting detail about occasions.

Exemplo: It depends on the occasion, but I usually prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I find them more practical for everyday life. For example, I wear smart clothes for work meetings, but I choose casual outfits at home or with friends.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer then one or two specific reasons. Remove hesitations and clarify the example about the #10 (jersey). Use linking words (especially, because) to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially in summer because they are cool and comfortable. I also enjoy wearing football shirts with a number on the back, for example a Messi #10 jersey, when I go to the park or watch matches.

Sugestão: Provide a clear statement about frequency, then explain why with a complete reason. Avoid unfinished sentences and use linking words (because, so). Mention one strategy you use to decide.

Exemplo: I don't usually spend a long time choosing clothes, but I sometimes hesitate when shopping because I'm not sure what I need. So I often make a quick list or try items on to decide faster.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use correct verb forms (I wear, I go). Provide a clear contrast with linking words (whereas, but). Be specific about the types of clothes for each situation.

Exemplo: Yes, I wear different styles: when I go to work I usually wear classic or smart clothes like a shirt and trousers, whereas at the weekend I prefer sporty clothes such as tracksuits and trainers.

Sugestão: Start with a clear preference sentence, correct grammar (plural/singular, article usage), and give specific reasons and an example. Use linking words (because, for example).

Exemplo: I don't have a strong favorite color, but I often wear black or white because they look neat and match easily with other items. For example, I usually pair a white T-shirt with jeans for a simple, clean look.

× I usually, I usually wear uh, a T-shirt, a nice T-shirt and shorts because at summer, you know, in my country, uh, the weather is too hot, so I have to, to wear a little bit close.

✓ I usually wear a T-shirt and shorts because in summer in my country the weather is very hot, so I have to wear light clothes.

Multiple present-tense phrasing issues and inappropriate word choice. Use simple present 'I usually wear' (avoid repeating 'I usually'). Use 'in summer' not 'at summer'. 'A little bit close' is incorrect; use 'light clothes' to convey loose/cool clothing. Remove filler words for clarity.

× So in this situation depends on what I have or what's the the purpose to wear in the clothes. So I prefer of course a comfortable, uncomfort, uncomfortable clothes because I feel I I will.

✓ In this situation it depends on what I have and the purpose of the clothes, so I prefer comfortable clothes.

Sentence structure and conjunction misuse: 'depends' needs a subject ('it depends'). Use 'and' to link items rather than 'or' in this context. 'The purpose to wear in the clothes' should be 'the purpose of the clothes'. Remove contradictory 'comfortable, uncomfort, uncomfortable' and redundant phrases. Avoid repeating words like 'I I will'.

× First of all, I like of course wearing T-shirt, especially if we are in, uh, in summer. And they also if my, if, if my T-shirt has uh #10, in the park, you know what I mean? I like football and I like Lionel Messi. So yes, I like this.

✓ First of all, I like wearing T-shirts, especially in summer. Also, if my T-shirt has number 10 on it and I am in the park, I wear it because I like football and Lionel Messi.

Use plural 'T-shirts' for general preference. Use 'in summer' rather than 'we are in summer'. Clarify clause order: 'if my T-shirt has number 10 on it and I am in the park' is clearer. Use present simple consistently for habits.

× I usually have a difficult moment when I go to buying the clothes or choosing it because I don't know I want. Specific things and I hesitate to buy these clothes because I.

✓ I usually find it difficult when I go to buy clothes or choose them because I don't know exactly what I want, and I hesitate to buy clothes for that reason.

Incorrect verb patterns: use 'go to buy' not 'go to buying'. 'Choosing it' should be 'choose them' (plural). Sentence fragments corrected and rephrased for clarity. Combine clauses and remove unfinished ending.

× Yes, depends, uh, like I said before, depends the situation. If uh, I was going to work, for example, I have to to wear a classic clothes, you know, but if uh, if I was on weekend, I have to wear a sportive wear.

✓ Yes, it depends on the situation. If I am going to work, for example, I have to wear classic clothes, but if it is the weekend, I wear sportswear.

Tense and agreement errors: use present simple 'it depends' and 'if I am going to work' for planned typical situations. 'I was going to work' incorrectly uses past; 'classic clothes' (no article) and 'sportswear' (one word) are correct. Use 'if it is the weekend' not 'if I was on weekend'.

× To be honest I don't prefer any color to another one but I like wearing a black clothes or white clothes because it it look nice when I wear it and I don't choose many colors in my T-shirt.

✓ To be honest, I do not prefer one colour over another, but I like wearing black or white clothes because they look nice on me, and I do not choose many colours for my T-shirts.

Use 'prefer one colour over another' for comparisons. 'a black clothes' is wrong: 'black clothes' (no article) or 'a black shirt'. Match plural subjects/verbs: 'they look' not 'it it look'. Use 'colours' plural for choices and 'for my T-shirts' for general statement.