Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar and clarity: start with a clear topic sentence, correct word choice (e.g. 'baggy' vs 'buggy'), and remove redundancy. Use one or two supporting details with a linking word. Be concise (max 5 sentences).

Exemplo: I prefer baggy, simple clothes because I feel more comfortable in them. For example, looser T-shirts and straight-leg jeans hide my slightly chubby build, so I don't feel self-conscious. Also, simple styles are easier to match and feel more relaxed.

Sugestão: Give a slightly fuller explanation and an example using linking words. Correct phrasing and avoid repeating vague phrases. Keep it natural and concise.

Exemplo: I prefer smart clothes because they look more professional and boost my confidence. For instance, I usually wear a blazer and chinos to meetings, which helps me make a better impression.

Sugestão: Make the answer grammatically correct and more specific. Use linking words to connect reasons and an example about when you wear them.

Exemplo: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and affordable. For example, in summer I often wear cotton T-shirts with shorts because they keep me cool and are easy to wash.

Sugestão: Make sentences grammatically correct, avoid repetition, and add a brief explanation of your usual process with linking words. Specify how you decide to give a clearer picture.

Exemplo: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I prefer quick decisions. Usually I ask a friend for advice and pick the outfit they recommend, which saves time when I'm in a hurry.

Sugestão: Correct word order and grammar, and make the contrast clear with linking words. Be specific about what you wear on each occasion and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I dress differently on weekdays and weekends. During the week I usually wear smart-casual clothes, such as shirts and chinos for work, while on weekends I wear more relaxed outfits like jeans and a T-shirt when I go out with friends.

Sugestão: Clarify and correct repetitive phrasing, explain the personal connection briefly and naturally, and use proper capitalization for colours. Keep it concise and meaningful.

Exemplo: I like blue because it has a personal meaning to me: my name includes 'Oyama,' which can be interpreted as 'blue mountain' in Japanese. Therefore, I often choose blue clothes because they feel meaningful and calming.

× I like clothes something baggy and simple because my body style is a little bit chubby compared to other people, so if I wear something too fancy it looks a little bit too much. But if I wear something simple and I'm buggy, it looks fit on me.

✓ I like clothes that are somewhat baggy and simple because my body type is a little chubby compared to other people, so if I wear something too fancy it looks a bit excessive. But if I wear something simple and loose, it looks better on me.

The original uses incorrect adjective/adverb forms (’something baggy’, ’a little bit too much’, ’I'm buggy’, ’it looks fit on me’). Replace with correct adjectival phrases: 'that are somewhat baggy' and 'a little chubby' are natural. Use 'a bit excessive' instead of 'a little bit too much'. 'I'm buggy' is incorrect; likely intended 'loose' or 'baggy' about the clothing. 'It looks better on me' is the correct idiomatic expression.

× I prefer to wear smart clothes because it looks more professional and I just really like the way it is.

✓ I prefer to wear smart clothes because they look more professional and I just really like the way they look.

Subject 'smart clothes' is plural, so verbs and pronouns must be plural. Use 'they look' instead of 'it looks' and 'the way they look' instead of 'the way it is'.

× Yes I do, T-shirt is very comfortable and then very cheap compared to fancy clothes so I usually get the T-shirts and I prefer wearing T-shirts in summer.

✓ Yes I do. T-shirts are very comfortable and quite cheap compared to fancy clothes, so I usually buy T-shirts and prefer wearing them in summer.

Use plural 'T-shirts' to refer generally; match verb 'are'. Use 'buy' rather than 'get' for common purchases. Use pronoun 'them' to refer back to plural noun. Also separate into clearer sentences.

× No, because I don't really want to spend the time on deciding something so I usually just ask my friends which clothes is good on me and then it's really quick.

✓ No, because I don't really want to spend time deciding, so I usually just ask my friends which clothes are good on me and then it's really quick.

Remove unnecessary 'the' before 'time' and simplify 'spend the time on deciding something' to 'spend time deciding'. Use plural verb agreement 'clothes are' and avoid 'which clothes is'. Sentence flow improved.

× Yes, I wear different clothes weekend and on the weekend. In the during the week I wear casual and then professional clothes and then on the weekend I wear dress because I go out with my friends.

✓ Yes, I wear different clothes on weekdays and weekends. During the week I wear casual or professional clothes, and on the weekend I wear a dress because I go out with my friends.

Correct structure: 'on weekdays and weekends' not 'weekend and on the weekend'. Remove extra 'In the' and 'the during the week'. Use 'casual or professional' to show alternatives. Use 'a dress' to indicate a single item; if plural, 'dresses'. Improve conjunction use.

× I like Blue because my name is Blue Mountain in Japanese Oyama which means Blue Mountain in Japanese. So I personally have a meaning in Blue.

✓ I like blue because my name is 'Oyama', which means 'blue mountain' in Japanese. So blue has personal significance for me.

Lowercase color 'blue'. Reorder and punctuate the explanation: put the Japanese name in quotes and clarify meaning. 'I personally have a meaning in Blue' is ungrammatical; use 'blue has personal significance for me' to convey the intended idea.