Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve clarity and correctness: state a clear topic sentence, avoid unclear phrases (e.g., “raw data free”, “along with my thigh”), and give one or two specific supporting details. Use appropriate linking words and correct collocations (e.g., “T-shirts and jeans”, “formal clothes such as shirts and trousers”). Keep within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I choose my clothes according to the occasion. For casual outings like going to the market I usually wear T-shirts and jeans because they are comfortable and easy to move in. For work I wear formal clothes such as shirts and trousers to look professional.

Sugestão: Make a direct clear answer first, then give concise reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and incomplete questions. Correct grammar (e.g., “it makes me feel comfortable/relaxed”) and use coherent connectors like “because” or “although.” Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me feel relaxed and confident. Although I wear smart clothes for the office to appear professional, I choose casual clothes in my free time because they are more comfortable.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear affirmative sentence, then give specific supporting details and avoid repetition. Use singular/plural correctly (T-shirts, jeans) and better vocabulary (e.g., “lightweight,” “prefer blue ones”). Use linking words like “for example” or “because.” Keep to 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and lightweight. For example, I usually pair a T-shirt with jeans when I run errands or visit friends. I especially prefer blue T-shirts because the color suits me and lifts my mood.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence about current habit, then briefly contrast with past behavior using linking words like “when” or “but now.” Correct vocabulary (e.g., “shopping” not “shooting”, “sizes and colors”). Keep response concise and coherent.

Exemplo: I don't spend much time choosing clothes now. When I was younger I used to browse shops carefully for styles, sizes and colors, but now I order online where sizes and colors are listed, so I usually pick items quickly.

Sugestão: Start with a direct yes/no and briefly explain the difference using clear linking words like “during” or “while.” Use correct collocations (e.g., “tie and corporate shoes,” “T-shirt and jeans”) and avoid repetition. Provide one specific example for weekend attire.

Exemplo: Yes, I dress differently on weekdays and weekends. During weekdays I wear smart office clothes such as shirts, trousers, a tie and corporate shoes to look professional for clients. On weekends I usually wear a T-shirt and jeans unless I'm going out to a special event.

Sugestão: Provide a clear statement about your preferred colour and one specific reason. Avoid contradictory or unclear sentences and repetition. Use cohesive linking words like “because” and keep it to 2–3 sentences. If discussing past preference, provide a concise contrast using “when I was younger.”

Exemplo: I prefer blue clothes because the color reminds me of the sky and makes me feel calm and cheerful. When I was younger I liked many different colours, but now blue is my favourite.

× If I'm going to the market I prefer to wear raw data free like T-shirt and jeans.

✓ If I'm going to the market, I prefer to wear casual clothes like a T-shirt and jeans.

The original uses incorrect words ('raw data free') and lacks article before 'T-shirt'. 'Casual clothes' fits the meaning. Add comma after clause and use 'a T-shirt' for singular countable noun. Use 'like' to introduce examples.

× If I'm going to work I I wear the casual, the formal clothes rather like the shirts and the trousers along with my thigh.

✓ If I'm going to work, I wear casual or formal clothes, such as shirts and trousers, and sometimes a tie.

Repeated 'I' is an error. 'The casual, the formal clothes' is incorrect article use and phrasing. 'Rather like' is wrong; use 'such as' to give examples. 'Along with my thigh' is likely intended as 'tie'—a different word. Use correct noun 'tie' and drop unnecessary articles.

× I prefer to wear comfortable casual clothes because it makes me better, it makes me it makes me cool and relax.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes because they make me feel better, cool, and relaxed.

'Clothes' is plural so verbs and pronouns should be plural ('they make'). 'It makes me... relax' is ungrammatical; use 'make me feel' and 'relaxed'. Remove duplicate phrase and add commas for clarity.

× Although smart clothes are for the for the office, when smart clothes makes me always know that I'm going to the office.

✓ Although smart clothes are for the office, wearing them always makes me feel like I'm going to work.

Sentence has awkward structure and repetition. Use 'wearing them' as the subject and correct verb form 'makes' agrees with singular gerund. 'Feel like I'm going to work' is clearer than 'always know that'.

× But casual clothes?

✓ But what about casual clothes?

Original is a fragment. To ask about casual clothes, include 'what about' to form a complete question.

× I usually pair pair it with a Jean to go for errands or to visit a friend.

✓ I usually pair it with jeans to run errands or visit a friend.

Duplicate 'pair' is an error. 'Jean' as singular is incorrect for the general clothing item; use 'jeans' plural. Use 'run errands' as the idiomatic expression.

× It makes me so comfortable and relax that I love wearing it on casual basis.

✓ It makes me so comfortable and relaxed that I love wearing it casually.

Use adjective 'relaxed' not verb 'relax' after 'comfortable and'. 'On casual basis' is unidiomatic; use adverb 'casually'.

× Some of them are light and I prefer the colored ones the blue color.

✓ Some of them are lightweight, and I prefer colored ones, especially blue.

'Light' should be 'lightweight' or 'light-colored' depending on meaning. 'The colored ones the blue color' is redundant and incorrect; simplify to 'especially blue'.

× I don't spend time shooting clothes now while I was younger I spent a lot of time choosing clothes, choosing the different type of clothes, the sizes, the color in in shops.

✓ I don't spend time shopping for clothes now; when I was younger, I spent a lot of time choosing different types, sizes, and colors in shops.

'Shooting clothes' is wrong word — should be 'shopping for clothes'. Tense contrast needs punctuation and 'when I was younger' introduces past tense. Use plural 'types' and 'colors'. Remove duplicate 'in'.

× But currently because of the online dating online shopping apps, they already stated the sizes and the colors of the cloth, so I just picked them directly.

✓ But now, because online shopping apps list sizes and colors, I just pick them directly.

'Online dating online shopping apps' is confusing; simplify to 'online shopping apps'. 'They already stated' is past tense and awkward; use present 'list' since it's current. 'Cloth' should be 'clothes' or 'items'. Match tense with 'I just pick' for current habit.

× Yes I obviously I dress differently on a weekday which is which are my work day I wear the smart office clothes, the shirts and the trousers with tie with corporate shoe to look smart for my client.

✓ Yes, I obviously dress differently on weekdays, which are my work days. I wear smart office clothes, such as shirts and trousers, with a tie and corporate shoes to look smart for my clients.

Remove duplicate 'I'. 'Weekday which is which are my work day' is confused—use 'weekdays, which are my work days'. Use 'a tie' and plural 'shoes'. 'Client' likely plural 'clients'. Use 'such as' for examples.

× While on the weekends it depends on the occasion. If I'm at home my wear just T-shirt and Jean while going out.

✓ On weekends it depends on the occasion. If I'm at home, I just wear a T-shirt and jeans when going out I wear something else.

'My wear' is wrong pronoun; should be 'I wear'. 'Jean' should be 'jeans'. Clarify contrast between staying home and going out.

× I love blue colour clothes because the that is the colour of the sky and it makes me calm and it cheers me up every time I put on the blue colour.

✓ I love blue clothes because it is the color of the sky; it calms me and cheers me up every time I wear it.

Remove redundant words 'colour' repeated and 'the that'. Use 'blue clothes' and 'it calms me'. 'Put on the blue colour' is unidiomatic; use 'wear it'.

× Growing up I usually prefer any colour. I'm not. I'm not really a colour fan, but I was not really a colour fan. What am I growing up?

✓ When I was growing up, I didn't prefer any particular color. I'm not really a color fan.

Original sentences are fragmented and contradictory. Use past tense 'when I was growing up' and negative 'didn't prefer any particular color' for clarity. Remove repeated and confusing questions.