Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and an example. Avoid redundancy and minor grammar mistakes (e.g., "all kinds of clothes", "I wear").

Exemplo: I usually prefer comfortable clothes, especially bodycon dresses. Because I work in healthcare, I choose outfits that are easy to move in and look professional. For example, I often wear simple, stretchy dresses that allow me to walk quickly between patients while still feeling put together.

Sugestão: Give a direct short answer first (e.g., "I prefer casual clothes") and then add one clear, specific reason with a linking word. Avoid vague phrases and hesitations, and correct grammar ("all kinds", "my work").

Exemplo: I prefer casual clothes because they are more comfortable and practical for my daily tasks. For instance, casual outfits let me move freely during work and save time since they don’t require much maintenance or special care.

Sugestão: Answer directly and polish grammar. Keep it concise and give a clear example of when you wear T-shirts. Avoid rhetorical questions that show uncertainty ("Are T-shirts really suits to my personality?").

Exemplo: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. For example, I always choose a T-shirt for my morning walk and evening exercise because they are breathable and allow me to move easily without feeling restricted.

Sugestão: State your answer clearly and reduce hesitation. Use concise reasons and a specific detail about how you shop (e.g., online). Correct repeated or unclear phrases ("All the shopping I'm doing these days is online shopping").

Exemplo: No, I don’t spend much time choosing clothes because my schedule is very busy. I usually buy clothes online quickly, so I don’t spend hours deciding what to wear.

Sugestão: Be clearer and avoid unclear words ("divorce kind of style" is confusing). Start with a direct answer (yes/no), then give one or two specific differences between weekday and weekend styles using linking words. Keep sentences short and accurate.

Exemplo: Yes, I dress differently on weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I wear practical, professional clothes for work, while on weekends I experiment with more fashionable or fitted dresses that reflect my personal style.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer and a concise, logical reason. Reduce hesitations and complete the final thought. Use correct grammar ("wear white", "it helps me connect with patients").

Exemplo: I prefer wearing white because, as a healthcare worker, it helps me appear clean and professional and can make patients feel more at ease. White is common among healthcare providers and suits my work environment.

× Although I appreciate all kind of clothes but nowadays I'm wearing comfy and bodycon dresses.

✓ Although I appreciate all kinds of clothes, nowadays I wear comfy and bodycon dresses.

Use 'all kinds of' for plural countable nouns (kinds) and remove the unnecessary contrast 'but' with 'although' or keep one. Use simple present 'I wear' to describe habitual preference rather than present continuous 'I'm wearing'. Also add a comma after the introductory clause.

× Being in a healthcare profession, it is really easy to carry and also suits to my personality.

✓ Being in a healthcare profession, these clothes are easy to manage and also suit my personality.

The original has a dangling subject and incorrect verb forms. 'Being in a healthcare profession' should relate to the speaker, so use a clear subject 'these clothes' or rephrase. 'Suits to' is incorrect; use 'suit' (no 'to') and match plural subject 'clothes' with plural verb. 'Easy to carry' is awkward for clothes; 'easy to manage' fits better.

× Although I do appreciate wearing all kind of clothes but most of the time I'm wearing casual clothes because I am feeling quite comfortable and can perform my old task without worrying about maintenance of particular dresses or style.

✓ Although I do appreciate wearing all kinds of clothes, most of the time I wear casual clothes because I feel comfortable and can perform my usual tasks without worrying about the maintenance of particular dresses or styles.

Change 'all kind of' to 'all kinds of'. Remove duplicate contrast 'although' with 'but' (use one), and use simple present 'I wear' and 'I feel' for habitual actions. 'Old task' is unclear; 'usual tasks' is natural. Use plural 'styles' and 'maintenance of particular dresses or styles'.

× Uh. So this is my first to choose uh as.

✓ Um. So this is my first choice.

The original is fragmented and unclear. Simplify to a complete sentence 'So this is my first choice.' Remove filler words and incomplete phrase.

× Definitely yes. Are T-shirts really suits to my personality?

✓ Definitely, yes. Do T-shirts really suit my personality?

Question about T-shirts requires auxiliary 'do' and verb 'suit' without 'to'. Also 'T-shirts' is plural so use 'do' and base verb 'suit' (no third-person singular -s after auxiliary).

× Whenever I go for morning walk and do exercise in the evening hour, I always pick the T-shirt and I don't like wearing any other kind of tight clothes during my exercise time.

✓ Whenever I go for a morning walk or exercise in the evening, I always choose a T-shirt and I don't like wearing any other kind of tight clothes during exercise.

Use articles 'a morning walk'. Replace 'do exercise in the evening hour' with 'exercise in the evening'. Use 'choose' for habitual choice and remove unnecessary 'my' before 'exercise time'. 'Pick the T-shirt' -> 'choose a T-shirt' is more natural.

× Unfortunately not. I really want to uh, spend some time or dedicate, uh, a busy time of mine for choosing clothes, but it is not possible somehow because I'm having such a hectic schedule that I cannot even go to the market.

✓ Unfortunately not. I would like to spend some time choosing clothes, but it is not possible because I have such a hectic schedule that I cannot even go to the market.

Use 'would like' for desire and remove fillers. Use 'have' for possession of schedule instead of 'I'm having'. Simplify 'spend some time choosing clothes'. Avoid 'somehow' and redundant commas.

× All the shopping I'm doing these days is a shopping.

✓ All the shopping I'm doing these days is online.

Original repeats 'shopping' and is ungrammatical. Likely intended meaning is 'shopping online'—provide that correction. Use present continuous 'I'm doing' for current repeated action.

× Without a doubt, I love to style myself in divorce kind of style and I also also do pre preparation for that.

✓ Without a doubt, I love to style myself in diverse kinds of styles and I also do some preparation for that.

'Divorce kind of style' is incorrect; likely meant 'diverse' or 'various kinds of styles'. Remove duplicated 'also' and say 'do some preparation' for clarity.

× My husband told me that body can suit and dresses are really suits to my personality so I have a huge collection of that.

✓ My husband told me that bodycon dresses suit my personality, so I have a huge collection of them.

Clarify 'body' to 'bodycon dresses'. Use plural subject 'dresses' with verb 'suit' (no 'suits' when subject is plural). Replace 'suits to' with 'suit' and use pronoun 'them' to refer back to 'dresses'.

× Apart from that I do experiment with the different kind.

✓ Apart from that, I experiment with different kinds of clothes.

Use 'different kinds' (plural) and include 'of clothes' for clarity. Use simple present 'I experiment' for habitual action and add a comma after introductory phrase.

× I do like wearing white color because it, uh, immediately develop, uh, empathy and connection of, uh, umm, me with my patient being in healthcare profession.

✓ I like wearing white because it immediately develops empathy and a connection between me and my patients, being in the healthcare profession.

Use 'white' not 'white color', and 'develops' to agree with subject 'it'. Use 'a connection between me and my patients' and plural 'patients'. Place 'being in the healthcare profession' to modify the speaker. Remove fillers.

× Uh, this is the color which is widely wear by healthcare providers and uh, apart from that, it really suits to my.

✓ This is the color which is widely worn by healthcare providers and, apart from that, it really suits me.

Use past participle 'worn' with passive voice 'is widely worn'. 'Suits to' is incorrect; use 'suits me'. Complete the sentence—replace incomplete 'my' with 'me'.