Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason. Remove fillers (uh). Correct grammar: use "that" vs "which", and subject-verb agreement.

Exemplo: I usually wear casual clothes, such as T-shirts, jeans and loose trousers, because they are more comfortable. For example, when I study at home I prefer a loose T-shirt and jeans because they allow me to move freely.

Sugestão: Give a single clear reason and one brief example. Avoid repetition and false starts. Use linking words like "because" and "however" to contrast situations when you wear smart clothes.

Exemplo: I prefer casual clothes because they are more comfortable for everyday activities. However, if I have a formal event, such as a job interview or a wedding, I wear smart clothes like a shirt and trousers.

Sugestão: Use correct verb forms and shorter sentences. Give a specific example of when you wear T-shirts and one clear reason. Avoid opinions like "clever" without explanation.

Exemplo: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are simple and comfortable. For instance, on busy mornings I pick a plain T-shirt and jeans since it saves time and always looks neat.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then add a contrasting detail with a linking word like "but" or "however." Fix grammar: "spend much time choosing clothes" and "important events."

Exemplo: No, I don't usually spend much time choosing clothes; I mostly wear T-shirts and jeans. But for important events, such as meeting friends for a birthday or a job interview, I take more time to choose an appropriate outfit.

Sugestão: Organize into a clear topic sentence and one specific example. Use linking words to explain the difference between weekdays and weekends. Avoid confusing word order.

Exemplo: Sometimes. On weekdays I usually dress casually for classes or work, but on weekends I change style depending on plans. For example, if I go out with friends I might wear smarter clothes, while if I stay at home I remain in casual wear.

Sugestão: Give a concise topic sentence, correct vocabulary and avoid fillers. Explain one clear reason and a brief example (e.g., ease of matching). Use "timeless" instead of "never going to be out of date."

Exemplo: I prefer neutral colours like black, white and grey because they are easy to match and always look classic. For example, a grey shirt goes well with many jackets, so I don't need to think much when getting dressed.

× I like to wear some casual clothes like T-shirts or jeans and loose pants, uh, that's fit me more comfortable and, uh, fits me better.

✓ I like to wear casual clothes like T-shirts, jeans, and loose pants because they make me feel more comfortable and suit me better.

Original uses 'that's fit me more comfortable' and 'fits me better' which misuse verbs and form. After 'because' a clause should use subject + verb (they make/suit). Use 'make me feel more comfortable' and 'suit me better'. Also remove unnecessary 'some' and filler words for clarity.

× I prefer to wear casual clothes. I think casual clothes like T-shirts, uh, jeans, jeans make me feel like, more comfortable and, uh, in my, in my normal life, uh, there's no, some occasions need to me need me to wear some smart clothes, so I do better.

✓ I prefer to wear casual clothes. I think casual clothes like T-shirts and jeans make me feel more comfortable, and in my normal life there are not many occasions that require me to wear smart clothes, so I usually don't.

Problems include repetition and incorrect word order. 'Clothes make me' is correct (plural subject with plural verb). 'There's no, some occasions need to me' is wrong: use 'there are not many occasions that require me'. Also 'so I do better' is vague; changed to 'so I usually don't' for clarity.

× Of course I like wear T-shirts.

✓ Of course I like wearing T-shirts.

After 'like' use gerund 'wearing' for general preferences. 'Like to wear' is also possible, but 'like wear' is ungrammatical.

× T-shirts are so simple and comfortable, I don't need to spend much time to find some other clothes to match it, so it can save my time before go outside.

✓ T-shirts are simple and comfortable; I don't need to spend much time finding other clothes to match them, so I save time before going out.

Use gerund 'finding' after 'spend time'. 'Match it' should be 'match them' (plural). 'Before go outside' should be 'before going out'. Also prefer semicolon or two sentences to join independent clauses.

× Choosing T-shirt as my clothes is clever.

✓ Choosing a T-shirt is a clever choice.

Original word order and article usage are awkward. Use 'a T-shirt' and 'a clever choice' to make a natural sentence.

× Actually, in normal day I don't have, I don't spend much time to choose clothes.

✓ Actually, on normal days I don't spend much time choosing clothes.

Use 'on normal days' for habitual actions. Use gerund 'choosing' after 'spend time'. Remove redundant fragments.

× I usually wear T-shirts and jeans to go outside.

✓ I usually wear T-shirts and jeans when I go out.

Use 'go out' rather than 'go outside' for leaving home to go out socially. 'To go outside' is possible but less natural here; 'when I go out' fits habitual context.

× But uh, if I have to hang out with my friend or do some other intro, uh, important things, I will spend more time to choosing clothes.

✓ But if I have to hang out with my friends or do other important things, I will spend more time choosing clothes.

Use plural 'friends' for general meaning. Remove unclear 'intro'. Use gerund 'choosing' after 'spend time'. Delete unnecessary 'to' before 'choosing'.

× If I have something important to do in weekends, I will dress different from the week.

✓ If I have something important to do on the weekend, I will dress differently than during the week.

Use 'on the weekend' or 'at the weekend'. Use adverb 'differently' to modify 'dress'. Compare 'than during the week' for clarity.

× Weekdays, uh, if the weekend I just want to stay myself alone at home, I will not make difference.

✓ If on the weekend I just want to stay home alone, I will not dress differently; it depends on the occasion.

Original sentence has confused structure and incorrect phrase 'stay myself alone'. Use 'stay home alone'. 'Make difference' should be 'dress differently' or 'make a difference'. Added 'it depends on the occasion' to match final clause.

× I prefer black, white and Gray better, uh, because this kind of CLO, uh, color is simple and comfortable and uh, it's never going to be out of date.

✓ I prefer black, white, and gray because these colors are simple and comfortable, and they're never going to go out of fashion.

Don't use 'better' with 'prefer' + list. Use lowercase 'gray'. 'This kind of color' is awkward; use 'these colors'. 'Out of date' better expressed as 'go out of fashion'.

× So it, it save my time to choose the clothes while I have to hang out.

✓ So they save me time when I have to go out.

Subject 'they' (colors or clothes) needs plural verb 'save'. Use 'when I have to go out' instead of 'while I have to hang out'. Remove repetitions.