Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundant phrases and small errors (e.g. "the L loose fitting" and "recognize").

Exemplo: I prefer loose-fitting clothes, such as baggy shirts and jeans. They are lightweight and allow air to circulate, so I stay cooler in hot weather.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence, then briefly contrast the two choices with a linking word such as "however" or "but." Remove filler words like "kind of" and unnecessary repetition.

Exemplo: I usually prefer comfortable, casual clothes. However, if I attend an important event I wear smart clothes, but I try to choose smart outfits that are also comfortable.

Sugestão: Avoid trailing off and clarify your final point. Keep it within a few sentences and use linking words (e.g. "because" → reason). Be specific about the problem with fitted shirts.

Exemplo: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are simple and versatile. I prefer loose T-shirts rather than fitted ones because the heat in my country makes fitted shirts uncomfortable and sticky.

Sugestão: Start with a clear answer and then give one concise reason. Remove hesitations like "kind of" and finish the sentence cleanly. Use a linking word such as "because" or "so."

Exemplo: Yes, I do. If I have an important event I usually prepare my outfit the night before because I like to make sure everything matches and I can avoid last-minute stress.

Sugestão: Be concise and avoid repetition. Give a clear contrast with a linking word like "but" and provide a specific example of weekend clothes. Correct small errors ("we I I use").

Exemplo: On weekdays I wear scrubs because I work as a nurse. But on my days off I prefer comfortable, lightweight clothes such as loose shorts or a casual dress so I can move easily.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence, then contrast with a short reason using a linking word like "however". Correct small phrasing issues ("bring them mood up" → "lift my mood").

Exemplo: I usually wear neutral colours because they are easy to match with accessories and never go out of style. However, I sometimes choose bright colours like yellow or orange to lift my mood and make my outfit more fun.

× The kind of clothes I like to wear are the L loose fitting clothes.

✓ The kind of clothes I like to wear is loose-fitting clothes.

Subject 'The kind' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' (singular). Also 'L' seems erroneous and 'loose-fitting' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective before a noun. Suggestion: match verb number to the head noun and remove extraneous letters.

× they are lightweight or they don't stick so much in my skin that makes the sweat easier to recognize.

✓ they are lightweight and they don't stick to my skin, which makes it easier to sweat.

Use 'and' rather than 'or' to join two positive characteristics. Correct preposition is 'stick to my skin'. 'that makes the sweat easier to recognize' is awkward; use a relative pronoun 'which' and rephrase to 'which makes it easier to sweat' or 'which makes the sweat evaporate more easily.' Also avoid 'recognize' here.

× If I have something planned or I go in a in an important event, of course I use smart clothes, but I choose smart clothes that are also comfortable and kind of casual.

✓ If I have something planned or I attend an important event, of course I wear smart clothes, but I choose smart clothes that are also comfortable and fairly casual.

Use 'attend' rather than 'go in' for events. Use the verb 'wear' for clothes rather than 'use'. Replace informal 'kind of' with 'fairly' or 'rather'. Correct article usage 'an important event'.

× If I have something planned or I go in a in an important event, of course I use smart clothes, but I choose smart clothes that are also comfortable and kind of casual.

✓ If I have something planned or I attend an important event, of course I wear smart clothes, but I choose smart clothes that are also comfortable and fairly casual.

Original sentence is repetitive and contains awkward structure ('go in a in an'). Simplify and avoid repeating 'smart clothes' by restructuring. Use parallel verbs and correct articles.

× I prefer wearing comfortable clothes because I don't usually go outside unless I have something planned.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because I don't usually go outside unless I have something planned.

Both 'prefer wearing' and 'prefer to wear' are acceptable, but 'prefer to wear' sounds more natural in this context. No grammatical error, but stylistic preference improves clarity.

× If I have something planned or I go in a in an important event, of course I use smart clothes, but I choose smart clothes that are also comfortable and kind of casual.

✓ If I have something planned or I attend an important event, of course I wear smart clothes, but I choose smart clothes that are also comfortable and rather casual.

Removed duplicated entry by providing an alternative natural phrasing and correcting 'go in a in an' and 'use' to 'attend' and 'wear'. This is a style and structure correction.

× But the T-shirts that I like are the loose ones instead of the fitted ones because in my country the weather is very hot so I tend to sweat a lot, so if I'm wearing a fitted shirt it will be.

✓ But the T-shirts I like are the loose ones instead of the fitted ones because in my country the weather is very hot, so I tend to sweat a lot; if I'm wearing a fitted shirt, I will be uncomfortable.

Original ends abruptly ('it will be'). Complete the clause: 'I will be uncomfortable' or 'it will be uncomfortable.' Use commas and a semicolon to link related clauses. Remove unnecessary 'the' before 'T-shirts' and streamline phrasing.

× If I'm wearing a fitted shirt it will be.

✓ If I'm wearing a fitted shirt, I will be uncomfortable.

The original sentence lacks a predicate after 'it will be.' Provide the missing complement 'uncomfortable' to complete the thought.

× If I have an important event planned, I tend to prepare the night before or the day before just so that I can get the feel of what I'm about to wear and since I also am kind of indecisive.

✓ If I have an important event planned, I tend to prepare the night before or the day before so that I can get a feel for what I'm going to wear, since I am somewhat indecisive.

The original sentence is a run-on and ends abruptly with 'and since I also am kind of indecisive.' Combine and reorder clauses to complete the sentence. Replace 'get the feel of' with 'get a feel for' and 'kind of' with 'somewhat' for formality.

× As a nurse in the Philippines, I work a lot so we I I use scrubs most of the time.

✓ As a nurse in the Philippines, I work a lot, so I usually wear scrubs most of the time.

Remove accidental repetition 'we I I'. Use 'wear' for clothes rather than 'use'. Add comma before 'so'. 'Usually' fits better than 'use' to indicate frequency.

× But during my day off I enjoy wearing clothes that are comfortable and lightweight because it makes me move around, helps me move around.

✓ But during my day off I enjoy wearing clothes that are comfortable and lightweight because they help me move around.

Avoid repetition. Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'clothes' and verb 'help' (plural agreement). Remove redundant clause.

× I like wearing neutral colored clothes because they are easier to pair with other accessories and they are timeless, but sometimes I like wearing bright colors such as yellow or orange just so that I can have fun and bring them mood up.

✓ I like wearing neutral-colored clothes because they are easier to pair with accessories and are timeless, but sometimes I wear bright colors such as yellow or orange to have fun and lift my mood.

Hyphenate 'neutral-colored'. Remove redundant 'other'. Use 'wear' for variety. 'Bring them mood up' is incorrect; use 'lift my mood' or 'cheer me up'. Use 'to' + verb for purpose.

× they don't stick so much in my skin

✓ they don't stick to my skin

Correct preposition is 'to' with 'stick' (stick to something). 'in my skin' is incorrect for clothing contact.

× it makes me move around, helps me move around.

✓ they help me move around.

Subject 'clothes' is plural, so use plural verb 'help' and plural pronoun 'they'. Combine ideas to avoid repetition.