Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, like), and give one or two specific examples with linking words. Keep within 3–4 concise sentences. Pronunciation and grammar need attention (e.g., avoid repeating verbs and fix article usage).

Exemplo: I prefer wearing comfortable clothes most of the time. For example, when I travel I choose loose cotton shirts and stretch trousers so I can move easily. For parties or family events I usually wear a neat shirt and jeans to look presentable but still feel comfortable.

Sugestão: Start with a clear direct answer (comfortable) then give two brief reasons using linking words (because, so). Remove repetition and correct grammar (e.g., "I don't put pressure on my body").

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable clothes rather than smart clothes because I value freedom of movement and ease. For instance, I avoid tight outfits since they make me feel uncomfortable, so I usually choose casual shirts and soft trousers.

Sugestão: Answer directly (Yes) then briefly explain preference and exception. Be specific about sizes or styles only if relevant, and avoid hesitation sounds (umm). Use correct verbs and simple linking words (but, however).

Exemplo: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially oversized ones because they are comfortable. However, it depends on the occasion; for formal events I choose a collared shirt instead.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct response (No) then quantify your answer with precise times and reasons using linking words (because, for example). Avoid contradictory phrasing and repeated words.

Exemplo: No, I don’t spend much time choosing clothes. Usually it takes me around 2–10 minutes depending on the occasion; for example, I take only a couple of minutes to pick an outfit for shopping but about ten minutes if I’m dressing for a special event.

Sugestão: Start with a direct statement (Yes) and explain the difference clearly using linking words (because, but). Mention specific examples of weekday uniform and weekend styles. Correct grammar and avoid trailing unfinished sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I wear a uniform for my part-time job, which is practical and simple. On weekends I prefer smart-casual outfits, such as a nice shirt and jeans, because I want to look good when I meet friends.

Sugestão: Answer directly (I like black and white) and give a concise reason (they make you feel confident). Provide one contrasting example with linking words (however, but) and use clearer vocabulary (pants/trousers).

Exemplo: I usually prefer black and white clothes because they make me feel confident and are easy to match. However, for trousers I sometimes choose light blue because it adds a bit of color without being too bright.

× Uh, I usually wear every kind of clothes, but mostly I like to prefer the comfortable clothes for myself.

✓ Uh, I usually wear all kinds of clothes, but mostly I prefer comfortable clothes.

The phrase 'every kind of clothes' is incorrect; use 'all kinds of clothes'. 'Like to prefer' is redundant; use 'prefer' for present habitual preference. Also 'the comfortable clothes for myself' is wordy; 'comfortable clothes' is sufficient.

× Like whenever I need to go for like a travelling to some place, I always prefer to have a comfy so that I can travel easily by that.

✓ Whenever I need to travel somewhere, I always prefer to wear something comfy so that I can travel easily.

'Go for a travelling' is incorrect; use 'travel' or 'go traveling'. 'To some place' is better as 'somewhere'. 'Have a comfy' is ungrammatical; use 'wear something comfy'. 'Travel easily by that' is unclear; 'so that I can travel easily' is correct.

× And also whenever I need to go to for some party or any family.

✓ Also, whenever I need to go to a party or a family gathering, I choose appropriate clothes.

The original is a sentence fragment and 'go to for some party or any family' is ungrammatical. Add a verb and clarify 'family gathering' or 'family event'.

× If I talk about the preference of mine, mine is comfortable because I always like to like to have a comfy things.

✓ If I talk about my preference, it is comfort; I always like to have comfortable things.

'Preference of mine, mine is comfortable' is awkward; use 'my preference is comfort' or 'it is comfort'. Remove duplicate 'like to like to' and change 'a comfy things' to 'comfortable things' (plural agreement).

× Like I don't use put pressure on my body to wear those things which does not suit me.

✓ I don't put pressure on my body to wear things that do not suit me.

'Don't use put' is incorrect; use 'don't put'. 'Which does not suit me' needs subject-verb agreement; 'things that do not suit me' matches plural 'things'.

× So according to me I usually prefer to wear.

✓ So, according to me, I usually prefer comfortable clothes.

The original sentence ends abruptly without an object. Add what is preferred: 'comfortable clothes'.

× Yeah, I like to wear the long T-shirts like I do have a size of small, but I always prefer to wear the large 1:00 so that I can stay comfortable whenever I need to go outside.

✓ Yes, I like to wear long T-shirts. I normally have a size small, but I prefer to wear a larger size so that I can stay comfortable when I go outside.

Run-on sentence and odd phrases: 'long T-shirts like I do have a size of small' should be split. 'Large 1:00' is nonsense; change to 'a larger size'. Use present simple for habits. 'Whenever I need to go outside' -> 'when I go outside'.

× Umm but it depend on the occasion.

✓ Umm, but it depends on the occasion.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'it depend' should be 'it depends'. Keep conjunction 'but' with comma.

× So if it's something else, I wear the different type of clothes like.

✓ So if it's a different occasion, I wear a different type of clothes.

Original ends with 'like' and is incomplete. Use 'different occasion' and complete the object: 'a different type of clothes' (better: 'different types of clothes').

× According to me, I didn't think, I don't think that I take a lot of time to choose my clothes but but sometimes it will take like 5 to 10 minutes for choosing it because it depends on the occasion where I am going.

✓ I don't think I take a lot of time to choose my clothes, but sometimes it takes about 5 to 10 minutes because it depends on the occasion.

Avoid mixing past and present: use present 'I don't think'. Remove 'will' and use 'it takes' for typical duration. 'For choosing it' is awkward; use 'to choose my clothes' or 'to choose'.

× Like if I need to go outside for mall or something, it take me like 2 or 3 minutes to choose.

✓ If I need to go to the mall or somewhere else, it takes me 2 or 3 minutes to choose.

Add article 'to the mall'. Subject-verb agreement: 'it take' should be 'it takes'. Remove filler 'like' for clarity.

× Usually I'm a student as well as I am doing a part time job.

✓ Usually I'm a student and I also do a part-time job.

Use 'and' to connect two facts; 'doing a part time job' is better as 'do a part-time job'. Hyphenate 'part-time'.

× With that I usually go for jobs so I need to wear the uniform given by them.

✓ Because of that I usually go to work, so I need to wear the uniform they provide.

'Go for jobs' is unnatural; use 'go to work'. 'Uniform given by them' is better as 'uniform they provide'.

× But whenever I need to go a college like on the weekends I prefer to wear a good clothes that look amazing on me.

✓ But on weekends, when I go to college, I prefer to wear nice clothes that look good on me.

Use 'go to college'. 'A good clothes' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'nice clothes' or 'a good outfit'. 'Look amazing on me' -> 'look good on me' is more natural.

× Along with that I always prefer good so.

✓ I also prefer good-quality clothes.

Original is incomplete and vague. 'Good-quality clothes' clarifies the meaning.

× I usually wear white and black clothes, mostly because I love to wear that because I usually prefer to stay in my confidence instead of wearing other colour T-shirts or pants.

✓ I usually wear white and black clothes mostly because they make me feel confident, rather than wearing other colored T-shirts or pants.

'Love to wear that' is vague; clarify with 'they make me feel confident'. 'Prefer to stay in my confidence' is unidiomatic; use 'feel confident'. 'Other colour' should be 'other colored'.

× But if the pants I like to prefer sky blue color which look good or light.

✓ For pants, I prefer a sky-blue color because it looks good and light.

Sentence structure is jumbled. Use 'I prefer sky-blue pants' or 'I prefer a sky-blue color'. Ensure subject-verb agreement 'which look' -> 'which looks' and hyphenate 'sky-blue'. Clarify 'light' as 'light-colored' or 'light shade'.