Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a topic sentence stating your current preferred style, then give one brief past contrast and one reason or example. Avoid repetition and incorrect tense/use of words.

Exemplo: These days I prefer a smart-casual style. Previously I dressed more like a tomboy, but now I enjoy combining tailored pieces with relaxed items, such as a blazer over jeans, because it looks polished yet comfortable.

Sugestão: Give a direct opinion first, then support it with clear reasons. Remove filler phrases ('Oh', 'I think', 'I don't know') and correct grammar (e.g., 'they look'). Limit to two to three sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer smart clothes now. I find they look more professional and make me feel more confident, especially as my lifestyle has changed over the past year.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give a concise reason with an example. Remove disfluencies and filler words. Use one linking phrase to add the detail (e.g., 'because' or 'for example').

Exemplo: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are versatile. For example, I wear a plain T-shirt with jeans for a casual look or under a blazer for a smarter outfit.

Sugestão: Give a clear answer (yes/no) and explain briefly with specific detail about how your process changed. Avoid hesitations and finish the thought with an example of how you decide now.

Exemplo: Not anymore. I used to spend hours picking outfits, but now I plan my clothes the night before and keep a capsule wardrobe, so I choose quickly in the morning.

Sugestão: Start with a clear yes/no and then explain typical differences with one or two specific examples. Avoid unclear phrases and correct vocabulary (e.g., 'sweatshirts').

Exemplo: Generally no, I tend to wear similar styles, but when I go out on weekends I dress up more. For example, on weekdays I might wear smart-casual clothes for work, while at home or on relaxed weekends I wear pajamas or sweatshirts.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer naming the colours you prefer, then briefly explain why or how you choose them. Avoid vague statements about theories unless you explain them clearly.

Exemplo: I prefer neutral colours like navy, grey and white because they are easy to mix and look timeless. I usually stick to these basics and add one or two accent colours depending on the season.

× Lately I am wearing lately my style is a casual smart but I need to mention that before they change.

✓ Lately I have been wearing a smart-casual style, but I should mention that before I used to dress more like a tomboy.

The original mixes present progressive 'I am wearing' with adverb 'lately' awkwardly and has tense inconsistency when contrasting past and present. Use present perfect progressive 'have been wearing' to describe a recent and continuing change. Also correct word order and reference ('they change' unclear) to 'I used to dress' for past habit.

× I looked like a tomboy and I love new new style.

✓ I used to look like a tomboy, but now I love the new style.

The sentence uses past and present but lacks clear connectors and repetition 'new new'. Use 'used to' for past habitual appearance, add contrast 'but now', and remove duplicate word. Include definite article 'the' before 'new style' for specificity.

× I think several months ago my answer would be comfortable clothes, but right now I prefer smart clothes because I think they are look better.

✓ A few months ago my answer would have been comfortable clothes, but right now I prefer smart clothes because I think they look better.

'Several months ago' requires past reference; use 'would have been' for hypothetical past. Remove extra 'are' in 'they are look better' — correct verb 'look'. 'Several' to 'a few' optional but kept.

× I think it it's because of the age.

✓ I think it's because of my age.

Redundant words 'it it's' must be fixed and the prepositional phrase should specify 'my age' rather than general 'the age'. Use contraction 'it's' correctly.

× I think T-shirts are uh, one of the main, uh, part of my, uh, CLO wardrobe.

✓ I think T-shirts are one of the main parts of my wardrobe.

'One of the' requires a plural noun 'parts'. Remove filler words and unclear 'CLO'. Keep 'wardrobe' singular.

× they are really good, umm, piece of clothes they sell because you can style them, uh, in a different way.

✓ They are really good pieces of clothing to buy because you can style them in different ways.

'Piece of clothes' is incorrect; use 'pieces of clothing'. 'They sell' is awkward; 'to buy' or 'available' fits. Also use plural 'ways' for multiple styling options and remove fillers.

× Umm, I don't know. I don't, I think I, I believe I learned how, uh, I learned how to deal with this kind of process.

✓ I don't know. I think I have learned how to handle this process.

Redundant repeats and awkward phrasing. Use present perfect 'have learned' to indicate experience up to now and 'handle' as a clearer verb. Remove repeated 'I learned how'.

× Uh, before I was awful, uh, I was spending a lot of time finding some stuff, but uh, right now I have, umm.

✓ Before I was bad at it; I used to spend a lot of time finding clothes, but right now I don't.

'I was awful' is vague for skill; 'bad at it' clarifies. Use 'used to spend' for past habit. Complete the contrast by finishing 'right now I don't' (spend a lot of time).

× If I have to go out I I always try to look extra.

✓ If I have to go out, I always try to look extra nice.

Duplicate 'I I' must be corrected. 'Look extra' is incomplete; add an adjective like 'nice' to complete the idea. Add comma after conditional clause.

× Sometimes maybe, but at home I'm always in my pajamas on or sweatshirts and two switchers to feel comfortable and good.

✓ Sometimes maybe, but at home I'm always in my pajamas or sweatshirts and two sweaters to feel comfortable and relaxed.

Original contains 'on' and 'two switchers' which are incorrect. Likely meant 'or sweatshirts' and 'two sweaters'. 'Feel comfortable and good' improved to 'comfortable and relaxed'. Ensure correct nouns and word choice.

× I have very I have a very clearly answer to this.

✓ I have a very clear answer to this.

Redundant fragments 'I have very I have' and incorrect adverb 'clearly' used instead of adjective 'clear'. Use 'clear' to modify 'answer'.

× There is a theory that a person only makes some kind of color groups and I agree with this and I try to follow this kind of rules to.

✓ There is a theory that people form certain color groups; I agree with this and try to follow those rules too.

'A person only makes' is awkward; use 'people form'. 'Some kind of color groups' better as 'certain color groups'. 'This kind of rules' incorrect pronoun and plurality; use 'those rules'. 'to' at end should be 'too' meaning also.